1、英语写作要领与技巧,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,3 审: 审文体 审要求 审人称,在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只用英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕 “ How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only , or in both English and Chinese? ” 这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文,注意：1.词数100-120, 短文开头已给出(不计词数). 2.参考词汇: atmosphere 氛围 I prefer my English classes t
2、o be taught in ,某考生,I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese. Now in our English classes, with how to be taught we have two choices: In English only, or in both English and Chinese, and its all has its advantages and disadvantages. If in English only, can make our listeni
3、ng and speaking more good, and what worse, we will hard to understand our class. But if in both English and Chinese, also understand will be more easily, the English atmosphere is less than in English only. In my opinion, we study English to understand it is the most important. After we study and un
4、derstand it good, listening or speaking will be easy. So I think my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese will be more better.,11分,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此人们评价不一。请你对此现象向21st Century 投稿，谈谈个人看法：,要求:1词数：120词左右。 2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.,Practice:,提供机会 带
5、来收益 迎合追求 保证品位 产生反感 浪费精力 你的观点,offer /provide chances bring in profits / benefit from meet/appeal to the needs of ensure the taste feel bad / bored / annoyed waste time and energy In my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards,列出要点,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,1 offer chances Audien
6、ces are offered more chances to participate in the live programs. 2 bring in profits / benefit from They bring in profits to the mass media. 3 appeal to the needs of They appeal to the needs of the young people.,4 ensure the taste We cannot ensure the taste of the programs if short messages are out
7、of control. 5 feel bad / bored / annoyed They cost a lot and make the audiences feel bored. 6 waste time and energy It will be a waste of time and energy if the young are addicted to them. 7 take a critical attitude In my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards short messages.,书面表达六步法,四、连
8、句成文,正确使用过渡词，使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接。,表示列举和顺序用 firstly, secondly, last, then, finally, next, such as，after that b. 表示意义增补和引申用also, besides, above all, whats more / whats worse c. 表示结果用 so, therefore, as a result, sothat d. 表示意义转折用 instead, however, but e. 表示解释说明用 in other words, that is to say f. 表示概括和总结用 th
9、en, in all, as we know g. 表示时间顺序用 now, at first, when, after h. 表示并列关系用 or, and, also, too, i. 表示条件关系用 as (so) long as, if, unless j. 表示举例用 for example, for instance, such as k. 表示让步关系用 though, even if , however, as,1.过好行文逻辑关,2. 用活语言，准确生动,使用常用高级语法:非谓语动词，with复合结构，虚拟语气，强调句，倒装句，感叹句，定语从句，状语从句等,The meal
10、was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.,a. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (so that/sothat/suchthat),Not only is he a famous singer but also he has written some interesting books.,b. He is a famous singer. He has also written some interesting books. (not onlybut also),c. M
11、y brother was riding a bike. I sat on the seat behind him. (with sb. doing),My brother was riding a bike with me sitting on the seat behind him.,Not having received his letter he decided to write to her again.,d. He hadnt received a letter . He decided to write to her again. (not having done),e. We
12、are glad to see such great changes in our school life. ( how ),How glad we are to see such great changes in our school life.,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,注意时态、标点和拼写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!,4 规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写,Make what you have written clear enough!,小结,审题，抓点 造句，成文 改错，誉写,文不对题（文体格式不规
13、范） 离题太远（抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该说的说的太多） 词不达意（有的甚至用汉语标注、留空或抄袭试卷上的材料） 病句太多（时态、语态、人称、数等语法错误） 卷面不工整（字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞，这是经电脑扫描后网上阅卷的大忌!）,前车之鉴!,一篇档次较高、得分较多的书面表达， 给阅卷老师的印象应该是： 语意要合情合理，过渡自然； 语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安； 语法要结构正确，无懈可击； 语言要地道流畅，书写规范。,目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。 请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。,注意：1. 字数120左右; 不要逐字翻译。 2. 短
14、文开头已给出，不计人总词数。 Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long,Practice,Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with
15、 society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have lost interest in their studies. Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge, so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once ou
16、t of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence / affect their studies. Personally I think, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life. (I dont agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests.),
