1、RuijinYeping parkcleangreenery(绿化)(绿化)fresh airbeautiful Think about the environment in your town/city and complete the chart below.3a3aWuxianMountaina lot of rubbishdirtyBayi Roadnoisyso many carscrowdedair pollutionMianjiang Riverthe water is dirtymuch rubbish in the river2022-12-17Our hometown is
2、 polluted.As a student,what should we do?Discuss(We should/must/had better(not).)We mustnt spit in public.We had better clean up the river.We shouldnt leave rubbish here and there.We had better take a cloth bag when we go shopping.We should recycle bottles and paper.We had better ride a bike to scho
3、ol instead of driving.what should The government should develop laws to protect the environment.How to save our hometown?1,Dont spit in public.2,We should clean up the river and the mountain.3,Dont leave rubbish here and there.4,We should recycle bottles and paper.5,Walk or ride a bike instead of dr
4、iving.6,Take a cloth bag when we go shopping.7,The government should develop laws to protect the environment.Is this a composition?headbodyendHow to save the earth?A:Everyone ought to protect our environment.Lets keep trying.Our world will become more beautiful.B:There are many kinds of pollution ar
5、ound us,such as water pollution,noise pollution and so on.They have polluted our environment.Its our duty to do useful something.In order to protect our environment.What should we do?C:Second,we had better walk or ride a bike,but we dont drive a car.D:First,we should turn off the electricity when we
6、 leave a room.F:Third,we will take a cloth bag when we go shopping.We wont use plastic bags.E:Finally,We shouldnt leave rubbish here and there.We shouldnt waste water.Which part is the head,the body and the end?headendbodyPut them into right order C:Second,we had better walk or ride a bike,but we do
7、nt drive a car.D:First,we ought to turn off the electricity when we leave a room.E:Finally,We shouldnt leave rubbish here and there.We shouldnt waste water.F:Third,we will take a cloth bag when we go shopping.We wont use plastic bagsDCFEBetter the logic步骤:步骤:firstly,secondly,besides,whats more,final
8、ly,also,and;转折:转折:although,however,but,at the same time,on the one hand,on the other hand;因果:因果:because,so,as a result;结果:结果:so that ;举例:举例:for example,such as,like;总结:总结:in a word,in fact,as you can see;其它:其它:to my surprise,to be honest;Linking words(连接连接词)词)To make the composition have better logi
9、c,we can use linking words.Fill in the blanks.There is no doubt that speaking is very important in English learning._ youd better speak as often as possible._,its a good way to take notes in class,_it will improve your English grammar.because,whats more,soSoWhats morebecauseBetter the sentenceA:Seco
10、nd,we had better walk or ride a bike,but we dont drive a car.B:Second,we had better walk or ride instead of driving a car.Better the sentenceA:There are more cars on the street.The air will be worse.B:The more cars are on the streets,the worse the air will be.I think that.We should/could.I suggest.3
11、b3b Write a letter to the city mayor about the problems and your suggestions.1.Headproblems2.Bodysuggestions3.Endhope2022-12-17Dear Sir/Madam,structureuseful words cut down,throw away,preventfrom,take measures to do sth,do harm to,make good use of,get worse and worse,call on sb to do sth useful sent
12、ences Its our duty toAs we know,water is very important to people.Every small step we take really counts,Together,our actions can make a really difference.Something must be done toEach of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.I believe we can make the world a better place to live.We shoul
13、d/must/had better(not)/are supposed to do I think/suggest that Some words to help.Some words to help.Please pay attention to your writing!Exchange your composition in your group and correct the mistakes with your red pen.Choose the best one for further presentation.Dear Sir/Madam,Environmental probl
14、ems are becoming more and more serious in our hometown.With the development of the society,there are too many cars on the streets in our city.Cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe.And Bayi Road is very crowded and noisy because of the heavy traffic.People also put waste into the riv
15、er and Wuxian Mountain.So whenever we climb the moutain,we can find rubbish everywhere.Now more and more people have realized these problems.First,I think that governments should develop laws to stop people from driving cars every day.Besides,I suggest everyone in this city should help to clean up t
16、he river and the moutain.Every one is supposed to throw rubbish in the dustbins.I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.保护环境从我做起!If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment,our earth will become more and more beautiful.2022-12-17 Homework:Homework:Rewrite your composition and hand it in after class.2022-12-17Thank you!