1、How to write a letter for advice 写作要点：写作要点：1.建议信：建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信的建议信的常用结构常用结构如下：如下：首段首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。：表明写作意图，陈述事由。中段中段：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学婉转地提：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学婉转地提出有针对性的建议出有针对性的建议,提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力
2、尾段尾段：简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能：简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。对对方有所帮助。A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1After I read your letter,I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to hear that you want to3I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter4.I am writing to share some advice with you.5.You have asked me
3、 for my advice with regard toand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.6.You have asked me for my advice about.7.I am writing to express my views concerning _.8.I am writing to you for the purpose of-B.表达建议（表达建议（body）1.If I were you,I would2.You may consider doing3.In my opinion,it would be wi
4、se to take the following action.4.I wonder if you have considered the following advice.5.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you should6.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 7.I would like to suggest/recommend thatC.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.I feel that it would be
5、beneficial if you stick to it.2.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.3.I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into consideration.4.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.适当运用模板适当运用模板Dear _，模板一：模板一：Im
6、glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _./Im glad to write the letter to you on how to _.(引出主题引出主题).Here are a few suggestions for your reference.First，it is important to _.As youll _.Then，it also helps if you _.Besides，it should be a g o o d i d e a t o _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.B e c a u s e _.
7、You can also _.Im sure that _.(预测可能的结果，给对方以行预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours，Signature模板二：模板二：Dear _,I am writing to express my views concerning _(问题问题).In my opinion,it would be more beneficial to take the following actions.First of all,I would like to s
8、uggest/recommend that_(建议一建议一);in addition,it should be a good idea to_(建议二建议二);Last but not least,It is high time that sb should do sth_(建议建议三三).I hope youll find these proposals useful./I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming如何算是一
9、篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。条理清楚。要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道多样化（较复杂）语言地道连连接接词词 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点：参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看中文书刊
10、、电视；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ well._ _ _Best wishes,Best wis
11、hes,Li HuaLi Hua第一步：审题第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态)(when)第一人称第一人称一封信一封信学好中文的几条建议学好中文的几条建议说理逻辑性说理逻辑性一般现在时一般现在时第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：
12、搜索相关词组或句型问题建议how to learn Chinese well take a Chinese coursewatch TV and read bookslearn and sing Chinese songsmake friends withmore Chinese第三步第三步.连句成文连句成文注意：篇章的连贯性注意：篇章的连贯性 连词的使用：连词的使用：1.表示次序和时间:first(ly),first of all,in the first place,首先second(ly),whats more,in addition,besides 其次finally,eventual
13、ly,last but not least最后on the one hand(一方面)on the other hand（另一方面）高一学生目前能够尝试使用已学句型：高一学生目前能够尝试使用已学句型：it作形式主语，作形式主语，定语从句，虚拟语气定语从句，虚拟语气Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as
14、 youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese w
15、ords more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends，who will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：以下要点：参考词汇参考词汇:穿行穿行 thread o
16、nes way 天桥天桥 overpass 问题问题建议建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小,家长接送。交通家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。穿行危险。政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第一步第一步:What must we pay attention to when writing an article?题材题材：人称人称 Person (Thefirst/thirdperson)时态：时态：Tense(thesimplepresenttense)要点：要
17、点：a letter第一步：审题第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态)(when)第一人称第一人称一封信一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性说理逻辑性一般现在时一般现在时第二步：搜索相
18、关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学校和一所小学毗学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小,家长接家长接送。交通更拥挤；送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。穿行危险。政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。学校与一所小学毗邻学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街对着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheres a primary school near our school,and both schools face
19、the main street.Our school stands next to a primary school,faced with/facing the main street.推荐句型：推荐句型：There be+并列句并列句非谓语结构非谓语结构Standing next to a primary school,our school is faced with/faces the main street.润色润色小建议小建议Next to a primary school将介词短语提前（全倒装）将介词短语提前（全倒装）stands/lies/is our school,faced w
20、ith/facing a main street.可将可将stand next to替换为高级词汇替换为高级词汇/短语短语be located next to(near/beside/by)border/adjoin vt.be adjacent to与与毗邻毗邻在在对面对面 be opposite to The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙高峰期交通繁忙.traffic.during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours,there are so many cars and buses going
21、 on the road thatDuring the rush hours,there is a lot of traffic.so.thatwith结构结构With so many cars and buses going on the road,润色润色小建议小建议“高峰期高峰期”可意译可意译:at peak time，a large current of cars and people“交通繁忙交通繁忙”可译为可译为:traffic jamcongestion 交通堵塞交通堵塞be choke up withbe crammed with 被被堵塞堵塞/塞满塞满 加之孩子小加之孩子小,
22、家长接送家长接送,交通更拥挤交通更拥挤 sendto,fetch.,非谓语结构非谓语结构.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,which makes the traffic heavier.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,making the traffic heavier.,which.加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whats more,pick up.
23、make.To make things worse/whats worse,many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.In addition/Additionally,many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,which makes the traffic heavier.Whats more,parents often attend their kids to school,resultin
24、g in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意译为：可意译为：so.that.=tootoThe children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them
25、 home,which makes/making the traffic heavier.making 可替换为：可替换为：causing,leading to,resulting in“sendfetch”可替换为短语：可替换为短语：pick up润色润色小建议小建议 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险学生过街在车辆中穿行危险thread ones way，when doingIt is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句型固定句型It is+adj
26、.for to do.1.Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.润色润色小建议小建议2.Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/sea of cars.灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：适当增加形容词和副词：适当增加形容词和副词：it is extremely dangerous，it is of great/tremendous danger政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。suggest/sugge
27、stion,take steps/measures/action to do such asMy suggestion is that the government should表语从句表语从句固定句型固定句型 It is high time that(虚拟语气虚拟语气)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.简单句简单句1.In or
28、der to release the stress of traffic problems,润色润色小建议小建议2.Aimed at solving these problems,the government shouldA.适当添加一些意思（过渡句）适当添加一些意思（过渡句）The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.B.语义的意译语义的意译3.Seeing these matters,never will I stop urging our government to take some measur
29、es.For the sake of improving the quality of traffic,it is significant to buildC.添加形容词和副词添加形容词和副词I strongly suggest,active/effective measures第三步第三步.连句成文连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性但要注意：篇章的连贯性Next to a primary school stands our school,facing a main street._,its crammed with cars during the rush hour._ children hav
30、e to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age._,its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic._,it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.A.As a consequence B.According to the phenomenon stated above C.When it comes to traff
31、ic jamsD.What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例不推荐字体不推荐字体优秀作文范例优秀作文范例1优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例2优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来句型，介
32、词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例3优点：考生运用倒装句，优点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。显内涵和语言功底。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例4优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。蕴。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例5优秀作文范例优秀作文范例6Co
33、ngestion n.阻塞阻塞,拥挤拥挤,充血充血CompositionsfromStudentTimes假如你是李华，你的笔友黎明来信说他的父母工作变动刚转入一所学校，由于性格内向，生活经历与同学差异很大等原因，在新学校没有知心朋友，很苦恼。请根据以上提示，给他写封回信，谈谈你对如何交友的看法。注意：词数100左右翻译下列句子：我很高兴了解到你现在一所新学校就读。（learn）Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool.如果你现在没有知心朋友，不用着急。(if)Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.虽然
34、你是一个性格内向的男孩，而且生活经历与你目前同学差异很大，只要你遵循下列提示不是没有可能交上好朋友的。（although，aslongas)Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（firstofall)Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyou
35、sharetheirjoysandsorrows.第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.连句成篇 DearLiMing,Iamgladtole
36、arnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool,whichisagoodchanceforyoutoturnoveranewleaf.（适当增加的细节，高级表达）Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，
37、就会交上朋友。（firstofall)Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.(增加细节，闪光句子）最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。（Lastbutnotleast;once)Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshi
38、pwithactsofkindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Hopefully,youwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Itishopedthatyouwillfindtruefriendship.DearLiMing,Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool,whichisagoodchanceforyoutoturnoveranewleaf.Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.Althoughyou
39、arenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhav
40、eafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.仿写 下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的一封下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信，仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑的名义信，仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑的名义给此中学生回一封信。给此中学生回一封信。Dear Editor，I am an active girl，and I speak and laugh loudly in the classroom，like a boy.I dont care ab
41、out small matters.On the contrary，my neighbor，the girl who sits next to me，speaks quietly and dare not do the things I often do.I can understand this.What I cant stand is that she often gets angry with me about small things.How can I get along with her?Sunny，Shandong 注意：注意：1.书信格式要规范；书信格式要规范；2回信就原信内容
42、给出至少三条建议回信就原信内容给出至少三条建议(如如谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等)。思路分析思路分析 写作时应注意下面几点：写作时应注意下面几点：1确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作中应确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。注意书信的常规格式。2主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。以人称应该以第二人称为主。词汇热身词汇热身 1与某人交朋友与某人交朋友_ 2依
43、我看依我看_ 3与某人谈心与某人谈心_ 4参加某人参加某人活动活动_ 5分享快乐分享快乐_ 6出去散步出去散步_【答案答案】1.make friends with sb.2.in my opinion 3have a talk with sb.4.join sb.in.句式温习句式温习 1相互理解对你们两人都很重要。相互理解对你们两人都很重要。_for you two.2我认为邀请她参加你和你的同学们的各种活动也很好。我认为邀请她参加你和你的同学们的各种活动也很好。I think its better for you to ask her _ _.3与她分享你的喜怒哀乐。与她分享你的喜怒哀乐。
44、_.4真心希望这些建议能对你有帮助。真心希望这些建议能对你有帮助。_to you.【答案答案】1.Understanding each other is very important2.to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities 3Share your happiness and sadness with her4.I truly hope the advice can be of help连句成篇连句成篇 Dear Sunny，Its very good that you want to make friends wi
45、th this girl.In my opinion，youd better first have a hearttoheart talk with her，because understanding each other is very important for you two.And I also think its better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities，such as birthday parties，going out for a walk，discus
46、sing some fashionable topics，and so on.Besides，helping each other is also very important for both of you.Just share happiness and sadness with her.And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain you will be good friends in future.I truly hope the advice can be of help to you.Yours，Editor Tape
