1、七年级上册七年级上册 Unit 7How much are these socks?写作话题：写作话题：Goods（商品）（商品）Learning objectives 1能力目标能力目标 （1）学会描述商店的物品种类，颜色及价格。）学会描述商店的物品种类，颜色及价格。（2）掌握广告文体的写作方法及技巧，简单）掌握广告文体的写作方法及技巧，简单描述服装的价格和颜色，并能完成描述服装的价格和颜色，并能完成“Big sale!Colors Clothes Store”为题的写作任务。为题的写作任务。2情感目标情感目标 “Clothes make the man.”，教育学生要，教育学生要注意穿着整
2、齐干净，不穿奇装异服。注意穿着整齐干净，不穿奇装异服。Look at the clothes in my store!a sweatera T-shirt1220a baga skirta hatLook at the clothes in my store!32189trousersshortsLook at the clothes in my store!￥30￥19socksshoesLook at the clothes in my store!￥23￥3Look at the things in the picture.Fill in the blanks in the ad.Hua
3、xing Clothes Store Do you like _?We have _ for only _ yuan.How much are our _?Only _ yuan.And the red _ are _ yuan.sweaterssweaters21trousers20skirts25Mr.Cools Clothes Store Come and buy your clothes at our great sale!We sell all our clothes at very good prices.Do you like sweaters?We have green swe
4、aters for only$15!Yellow sweaters are only$12!Do you need trousers?For boys,we have black trousers for only$22.And shorts are only$16!For girls,we have skirts in purple for only$20.How much are our jackets?Only$30!And we have black shoes for only$28.Socks are only$2 for three pairs!Come to Mr.Cools
5、Clothes Store now!endingbeginning Big Sale!Marys clothes storeHow to write an ad for the clothes store?Beginning：_ _Ending：_Come and buy your clothes at our great sale!Come and have a look for yourself!Come to Karys clothes store now!Come and see for yourself!clothesColor Color 颜色颜色Task4:Draw your o
6、wn mind mapHow to write an ad for the clothes store?priceprice 价格价格kindkind 品种品种Do you need/like？/For boys，we have/You can buy/We sellWe havein red/in all colors.We have/sellat very good prices/We have/sellfor only/How much is/are?Its/Theyre only/are only for three pairs.Writing“卡乐卡乐”服饰店服饰店(Colors C
7、lothing Store)正在进行大减价，非常优惠。请发挥正在进行大减价，非常优惠。请发挥想象写一则广告以吸引顾客前来惠顾。想象写一则广告以吸引顾客前来惠顾。要求：要求：1.以以“Big sale!Colors Clothes Store”为题，为题，词数词数:60个左右。个左右。2.行文连贯，要符合广告特色。行文连贯，要符合广告特色。写作指导写作指导人称人称:_ 时态时态:_体裁：体裁：_,按按_的顺序叙述。的顺序叙述。Outline提纲提纲:Beginning：_ _Main body：Ending：_ _一般现在时一般现在时第一人称第一人称应用文应用文(广告）广告）逻辑逻辑衣服的种类、
8、颜色、价格衣服的种类、颜色、价格Come and buy your clothes at our great sale!Come to our store now!Come and see for yourself!Come and have a look for yourself!语料箱语料箱词块：词块：短语：短语：at a very good price,bags for sports,football socks,come and see,have a look at.,in all colors,for boys句型：句型：品种品种：Do you need/like.?For，we h
9、ave You can buy We sell颜色：颜色：We havein red/in all colors.价格价格：We have/sellat very good prices.We have/sellfor only are only for three pairs.宣传语：宣传语：Come and see for yourself!Come to our store now!Come and buy your clothes at our great sale!Come and have a look for yourself!名言、谚语、警句名言、谚语、警句:1.Clothes
10、 make the man.人靠衣装马靠鞍人靠衣装马靠鞍2.Take care of the pence and the pounds will take care of themselves.小财注意小财注意,大财自来。大财自来。作文评价标准表作文评价标准表 项目标准自我评价同伴评价教师评价结构（3分）段落合理（2 分）衔接自然(1分)内容（8分）要点全面种类（2分）颜色（2分）价格（2分）拓展合理(2分)语言（3分）词汇丰富(1 分)句法正确，语言优美(2分)卷面（1分）书写工整（1分）自我赏析与修正自我赏析与修正朗读自己的文章，按照朗读自己的文章，按照习作评习作评价标准表价标准表进行自我
11、赏析与修正。进行自我赏析与修正。Task 5自评自评同伴互赏同伴互赏欣赏与修正欣赏与修正 请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮亮点点词、句词、句,并运用并运用改错符号改错符号标出不足，进标出不足，进行适当行适当修改修改。按照按照习作评价标准表习作评价标准表给同伴的习作打分。给同伴的习作打分。点评点评由由亮点亮点欣赏到欣赏到不足不足的修正和提升的修正和提升（篇章结构篇章结构分析分析-细节细节点评点评)Task 6互评互评师生共评师生共评Task 7集体赏析集体赏析按照按照习作评价标准表习作评价标准表进行集进行集体赏析，并积累好词好句，体赏析，并积累好词好句，进行美化
12、和提升进行美化和提升。重写作文重写作文(根据自评、互评、集体赏析后的修改情况，自根据自评、互评、集体赏析后的修改情况，自我提升、美化文章，进行第二次写作。我提升、美化文章，进行第二次写作。)“卡乐卡乐”服饰店服饰店(Colors Clothing Store)正在进正在进行大减价，非常优惠。请发挥想象写一则广告行大减价，非常优惠。请发挥想象写一则广告以吸引顾客前来惠顾。以吸引顾客前来惠顾。要求：要求：1.以以“Big sale!Colors Clothes Store”为题，词数为题，词数:60个左右。个左右。2.行文连贯，要符合广告特色。行文连贯，要符合广告特色。提示：写作时可参考语料箱。提
13、示：写作时可参考语料箱。总结与反思总结与反思:When we write an ad for the clothes store,what writing strategies（写作策略）（写作策略）can we use?首尾呼应法写广告首尾呼应法写广告 1.开门见山进行宣传，多为号召性语言。开门见山进行宣传，多为号召性语言。如：如：Come and buy your clothes at our great sale!Come and look at the clothes for yourself.2介绍产品物美价廉，有各种样式可供选择，针对不介绍产品物美价廉，有各种样式可供选择，针对不同
14、人群有不同样式，达到激发顾客购买欲望的目的，细同人群有不同样式，达到激发顾客购买欲望的目的，细节要具体到品种、颜色、价位等句式可有：节要具体到品种、颜色、价位等句式可有：品种：品种：Do you need.?/Do you like？/For，we have/You can buy/We sell 颜色：颜色：We havein 价位：价位：We haveat very good prices/We haveonly for/We sell.only for.3画龙点睛，首尾呼应，再次号召：画龙点睛，首尾呼应，再次号召：Come to Karys clothes store now!/Come and see for yourself!
