1、The Attributive Clause used in writing定语从句在写作中的运用Guessing v1.She is a woman.v She is a beautiful woman.v She is a beautiful woman who abandoned all her family,flew to the sky and lived alone in an isolated palace.Guessing v2.It is an animal.v It is a lovely animal.v It is a lovely animal with two lo
2、ng ears.v It is a lovely animal with two long ears,which feeds on carrots.Guessing v3.It is a festival.v Its a Chinese traditional festival.v Its a Chinese traditional festival when people get together to watch the moon and enjoy moon cakes delightedly.Mid-autumn DayGuessing v4.Its an object.v Its a
3、n object in our classroom now.v Its an object in our classroom now,without which I cant make my voice loud enough as to be heard by you clearly.Mini-loudspeakerThe Attributive Clausev1.She is a beautiful woman _abandoned all her family,flew to the sky and lived alone in an isolated palace.2.It is a
4、lovely animal with two long ears,_feeds on carrots.v3.Its a Chinese traditional festival _people get together to watch the moon and enjoy moon cakes delightedly.v4.Its an object in our classroom now,_ which I cant make my voice loud enough as to be heard by you clearly.who/thatwhichwhenwithout定从:先行词
5、(名,代,句)+关系词(代,副)找先行词-还原法判成分-确定关系词3.判断成分判断成分He used the telescope _ his mother gave him to see the mountain clearly.the telescopeHis mother gave him the telescope物物物物1.找到先行词找到先行词2.还原法还原法4.确定关系词确定关系词(that/which)宾语宾语1.The film is called Titanic,and it is a beautiful and sad love story.The film that/whi
6、ch is called Titanic is a beautiful and sad love story.Rewrite the sentences2.Jack is a poor painter.He won a ship ticket by playing cards.Jack,who won a ship ticket by playing cards is a poor painter.Rewrite the sentences3.They met and fell in love with each other on Titanic.They had a happy time o
7、n Titanic They met and fell in love with each other on Titanic where they had a happy time.Rewrite the sentences4.Sadly,the nice journey was destroyed by an unexpected storm,and Jack lost his life for saving Lucy in the storm.Sadly,the nice journey was destroyed by an unexpected storm in which/where
8、 Jack lost his life for saving Lucy.Rewrite the sentences Our class is a big family.It is made up of 26 girls and 10 boys.All of them are very diligent and warm-hearted.Guo Zhiyong is our monitor.He is always ready to help others.He is such a good boy that we all like him very much.Our class is a bi
9、g family,which is made up of 26 girls and 10 boys,all of whom are very diligent and warm-hearted.Guo Zhiyong is our monitor,who is always ready to help others.He is such a good boy that we all like him.Translate the sentences into English1.1.昨天他卖了昨天他卖了他的车，一他的车，一个月之前他个月之前他刚买的。刚买的。Yesterday he sold hi
10、s car,which he bought a month ago.Translate the sentences into English2.2.所有的邻居所有的邻居都羡慕这个都羡慕这个家庭，在这家庭，在这个家庭里个家庭里,父母把孩子父母把孩子当做朋友。当做朋友。All the neighbors admire this family where the parents treat their children like friends.Translate the sentences into English3.3.中国政府已经中国政府已经把中秋节定为把中秋节定为法定假日法定假日（make.
11、a legal holiday),),在那天人们可在那天人们可以休假一天。以休假一天。The Chinese government has made the Mid-Autumn Festival a legal holiday,when people can have a day off.Translate the sentences into English4.4.就是在昨天我就是在昨天我们吃饭的餐馆们吃饭的餐馆我把我的包丢我把我的包丢了。了。It was in the restaurant where we had dinner together that I lost my bag.T
12、ranslate the sentences into English5.5.耐心是一种耐心是一种品质，没有它品质，没有它你不可能把工你不可能把工作做好。作做好。Patience is a kind of quality,without which you cant work well.定语从句在基础写作中的运用内内 容：公共场所禁烟容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：实施时间：2011年年1月月1日起日起实施范围：全国实施范围：全国目目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟标：所有室内公共场所无烟措措 施：张贴禁烟标志施：张贴禁烟标志相关数据：相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约）吸烟人数：约3.5亿亿（2）分）分 布：
13、男性布：男性75;女性：女性：25（3）受二手烟影响人数：约）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万万/年年实施时间：实施时间：2011年年1月月1日起日起实施范围：全国实施范围：全国目目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟标：所有室内公共场所无烟This decision,_aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free,will come into effect from the first day of 2011.which（1）吸烟人数：约）吸烟人数：约3.5亿亿（2）分）分 布：男性布：男性75
14、;女性：女性：25Currently China has about 350 million smokers,among _75%are men and 25%are women.whom（3）受二手烟影响人数：约）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万万/年年Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke,_causes 100,000 deaths per year.定语从句在写作中的作用定语从句在写作中的作用:1.整合信息整合信息,使意思更为明确使意思更为明确2.使句
15、子结构更为紧凑使句子结构更为紧凑whichPractice2008背景：射击最初只是生存工具，背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断：中断1928：中断：中断1932：重回奥运会：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有现今有17项。项。Shooting,_was a means of survival originally,developed i
16、nto a sport only in the late 19th century.whichPractice20112011基本信息：基本信息：书名：书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother作者：作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授出版时间：出版时间：2010年年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：相关报道：中文版：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做
17、法意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取作者：作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授耶鲁大学教授内容：作者用中国传统方式教育内容：作者用中国传统方式教育 两个女儿的故事两个女儿的故事Its author is Amy Chua,a Chinese American and professor at Yale,_tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese w
18、ay.whoPractice makes perfect.v根据下列内容根据下列内容,运用定语从句写一篇运用定语从句写一篇五句话五句话的文章介绍中国的文章介绍中国.v1.1.众所周知众所周知,中国有中国有960960万平方公里的土地万平方公里的土地,是世界第三大国是世界第三大国.v2.2.中国有中国有5656个民族个民族,其中汉族人其中汉族人(the Han Ethnic)占占94%94%v3.3.中国有许多大河流中国有许多大河流,其中长江其中长江,黄河是最重黄河是最重要的河流要的河流.v4.4.曾有一段时间曾有一段时间,中国的经济落后于世界中国的经济落后于世界 许多国家许多国家.v5.5.随
19、着经济的增长随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返一去不复返,所有中国人都为此感到自豪所有中国人都为此感到自豪.话题运用 _is known to all,China with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers,is the third largest country in the world.The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities,among _the Han Ethnic Group is the largest,making up 94%of the whole
20、.Besides,there are many big rivers in China,the most important of _are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.There was a time _Chinese economy was far behind many other countries in the world.However,with the development of the economy,the days are gone forever _the Chinese people were looked down
21、upon,_all Chinese are proud of.Aswhichwhichwhenwhenwhich写作中存在问题一、词语的错用：一、词语的错用：有有:have/has there be be made up of/consist of 2.长江、黄河长江、黄河 the Yangtze River and the Yellow River3.第三大第三大the third largest4.经济经济finance:Finance is the commercial or government activity of managing money,debt,credit,and in
22、vestment.economy:A countrys economy is the wealth that it gets from business and industry.5.发展发展:develop 改进改进:improve财政财政;金融金融经济经济6.民族民族people/nationality7.落后落后latter:You use latter to describe the later part of a period of time or event.（一个时期或事件）后一半（一个时期或事件）后一半的，接近终了的的，接近终了的 fall behind/drop behind
23、8.make up 占比例占比例 take up占据时间空间占据时间空间I know how busy you must be and naturally I wouldnt want to take up too much of your time.二、词性二、词性develop(v.)development(n.)economic(adj.)economy(v.)strength(n.)strong(adj.)discrimination(n.)discriminate(v.)三、短语三、短语第三大国第三大国 the third largest country瞧不起瞧不起 look dow
24、n upon骄傲骄傲be proud of/take pride in1.令人高兴的是令人高兴的是to ones delight四、主谓不一致四、主谓不一致The Yangze River and the Yellow River is the most important river.The Han Ethnic make up 94%.China haveChinese was look down uponareriversmakeshaswere四四.定语从句错用定语从句错用The day of Chines been look down upon has gone away,all o
25、f whom are proud of it.Having 56 ethnics,among which the Han Ethnic are 94%The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities,among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest,making up 94%of the whole.句子一定要有谓语动词句子一定要有谓语动词China with 9.6 million square kilometers land and the third largest country in the
26、world.It is all of Chinese that proud of it.People be look down upon.which everyone more and more confidence.五、句型五、句型There was a time whenAs 连词连词+句子句子With介词介词As the economy of China developing fastlyAs the economy of China develops fastWith the economy developWith the development of economyThe days
27、when Chinese were looked down upon went by and never returned.Such a big country is China that it has 56 nationalities,among which 94%are the Han Ethnic.The days when Chinese were looked down upon will not come back.It was not until economic growth that Chinese people realized they would no longer b
28、e discriminated.So fast is the country developing that China stand up and face to the world beyond your imagine.It is known to everybody that China is the third largest country of the world,with 9.6 million square kilometers.There are many rivers in China,most important of which are Changjiang and Huanghe.Changjiang River and Huanghe River running across China like two huge dragons are the most important rivers in China.With the development of economy,all Chinese people are proud of is that they are no longer looked down upon.
