1、人物特征根据提示,以“We are friends”为题,写一篇短文,描述你和你的好朋友Linda的特征,80词左右。提示:1她比我高,比我文静,很认真;2我外向一点,而且比她风趣;3我们都有黑眼睛、黑头发;4都喜欢Town Cinema,因为那里有最舒适的座位和优质的服务;5都喜欢看电视,但喜欢不同类型的节目;6都喜欢旅行,去年我去了厦门,琳达去了深圳;2019湖北黄冈期中 Step 1 审题找关键信息 Step 2 列提纲确定结构 Step 3 遣词造句写作文基本步骤写作文基本步骤 审什么?审什么?1.审人称2.审时态3.审体裁4.审话题囗第一人称 囗第二人称 囗第三人称 囗过去时 囗现在
2、时 囗将来时囗记叙文 囗议论文 囗应用文文章属于哪类常考话题?_人物特征类人物特征类根据提示,以“We are friends”为题,写一篇短文,描述你和你的好友Linda的特征:1她比我高,比我文静,很认真;2我外向一点,而且比她风趣;3我们都有黑眼睛、黑头发;4都喜欢Town Cinema,因为那里有最舒适的座位和优质的服务;5都喜欢看电视,但喜欢不同类型的节目;6都喜欢旅行,去年我去了厦门,琳达去了深圳;Step 1 审题审题 Step 2 列提纲列提纲确定结构确定结构 我和好朋友我和好朋友LindaLindaPart 1.引入好朋友引入好朋友LindaPart 2.你们的异同点你们的异
3、同点Part 3.(ending)评价评价Linda略写略写 (1-21-2句话)句话)不同点起承转合句相同点详写详写 (8 8-9 9句话)句话)人物你和她的关系略写略写 (1 1句话)句话)她的特点我的特点 外貌爱好1爱好2爱好3其它成句成句:遣词遣词:Linda是我的好朋友,我们彼此相处地很好。与相处get along with彼此each otherLinda is my best friend,and we get along with each other quite well.Step 3 遣词造句遣词造句Part 1:开头开头我和好朋友我和好朋友LindaLindaPart 1
4、.引入好朋友引入好朋友LindaPart 2.你们的异同点你们的异同点Part 3.(ending)总结总结Linda这个人这个人略写略写 (1-21-2句话)句话)不同点起承转合句 相同点详写详写 (4-54-5句话)句话)人物你和她的关系略写略写 (1 1句话)句话)她的特点我的特点 外貌爱好1爱好2爱好3其它她的特点成句成句:遣词遣词:她比我高,比我文静,很认真。文静quiet认真carefulseriousgentleLinda is taller than me and she is quieter and more careful on study.我的特点我外向一点,而且比她风趣
5、。遣词遣词:外向的outgoing风趣的funny成句成句:I am more outgoing and funnier than her.Part 2:异同点异同点不同点不同点1 1不同点不同点2 2 Step 3 遣词造句遣词造句成句成句:不同difference共同之处We have some differences,but we have some in common.基础版基础版提升版提升版There are so many differences between us but we also have something in common.havein commonPart 2:
6、异同点异同点起承转合句起承转合句遣词遣词:Step 3 遣词造句遣词造句外貌我们都有黑眼睛、黑头发。成句成句:We both have black eyes and black hair.爱好1都喜欢Town Cinema,因为那里有最舒适的座位和优质的服务。成句成句:遣词遣词:舒服的comfortable优质的服务high quality serviceWe both like Town Cinema because there are the most comfortable seats and the highest quality service.Part 2:异同点异同点相同点相同点
7、1 1相同点相同点2 2 Step 3 遣词造句遣词造句爱好2爱好3我们都喜欢看电视,但喜欢不同类型的节目。成句成句:遣词遣词:不同类型的different types ofWe both like watching TV but like the different types of programmes.我们都喜欢旅行,去年我去了厦门,琳达去了深圳。成句成句:We both like to travel.Last year,I went to Xiamen,and Linda went to Shenzhen.Part 2:异同点异同点相同点相同点3 3相同点相同点4 4 Step 3 遣
8、词造句遣词造句整合不同点整合不同点 相同点相同点Linda is taller than me and she is quieter and more careful on study.I am more outgoing and funnier than her.There are so many differences between us but we also have something in common.We all have black eyes and black hair.We all like Town Cinema because there are the most
9、comfortable seats and the highest quality service.We both like watching TV but like the different types of programmes.We all like to travel.Last year,I went to Xiamen,and Linda went to Shenzhen.We often do our homework together on Sunday.1她比我高,比我文静,很认真;2我外向一点,而且比她风趣;3我们都有黑眼睛、黑头发;4都喜欢Town Cinema,因为那里
10、有最舒适的座位和优质的服务;5都喜欢看电视,但喜欢不同类型的节目;6都喜欢旅行,去年我去了厦门,琳达去了深圳;Step 3 遣词造句遣词造句Part 2.你们的异同点你们的异同点Part 3.(ending)总结总结Linda这个人这个人略写略写 (1-21-2句话)句话)不同点起承转合句 相同点详写详写 (4-54-5句话)句话)人物你和她的关系略写略写 (1 1句话)句话)她的特点我的特点 外貌爱好1爱好2爱好3其它我和好朋友我和好朋友LindaLindaPart 1.引入好朋友引入好朋友Linda评价评价Linda她是这样一个不错的朋友。成句成句:She is such a nice f
11、riend.Part 3:总结总结 Step 3 遣词造句遣词造句要点全面时态正确结构清晰句型多样We are friendsLinda is my best friend,and we get along with each other quite well.Linda is taller than me and she is quieter and more careful on study.I am more outgoing and funnier than her.There are so many differences between us but we also have so
12、mething in common.We both have black eyes and black hair.We both like Town Cinema because there are the most comfortable seats and the highest quality service.We both like watching TV but like the different types of programmes.We both like to travel.Last year,I went to Xiamen,and Linda went to Shenz
13、hen.We often do our homework together on Sunday.She is such a nice friend.参考范文参考范文 1 1 请不要再嘲笑你的同学了,你应该与他们和睦相处。Please dont laugh at your classmates any more.You should _ _ _ _ them.2 2 这对双胞胎没有共同之处。_The twins have nothing in common.getalongwellwith 重要句型练习重要句型练习get along witheach otherquietcareful outgoingfunny核心词汇总结:核心词汇总结:differencehavein commoncomfortablehigh quality servicedifferent types of核心词汇总结:核心词汇总结: