1、满分作文的标准：满分作文的标准：包含所有要点包含所有要点 （不能丢落要点）不能丢落要点）围绕内容适当发挥，内容具体、丰富围绕内容适当发挥，内容具体、丰富 （不能限于回答问题或逐句翻译）不能限于回答问题或逐句翻译）应用丰富的语言结构和词汇应用丰富的语言结构和词汇 （表达不能过于单一）表达不能过于单一）用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚 （表达有层次，会用关联词，注意周围呼应）表达有层次，会用关联词，注意周围呼应）没有语言错误没有语言错误 （杜绝任何小错）杜绝任何小错）.无无“过过”便是便是“功正确为先；流功正确为先；流畅为好；文采为妙。畅为好；文采为妙。
2、注重衔接与连贯注重衔接与连贯写作写作:1.分析体裁分析体裁2.选定人称选定人称3.时态时态：时态错误扣：时态错误扣三三分分4.要点全要点全5.字数要够字数要够6.书写书写一定一定要工整要工整书面表达要求：书面表达要求：1）使用正确的时态2）使用正确的词语3）要有清晰的思路4）要有不同的句子5）要有一定的连接分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对知，针对“计划安排计划安排”这一话题，主要考查了这一话题，主要考查了介绍自己的周末计划。结合全国近年与介绍自己的周末计划。结合全国近年与“计划计划安排安排”这一话题相关的书面表达可知此话题主这一话题相关的书面表达可知
3、此话题主要涉及以下命题角度：活动时间及地点安排、要涉及以下命题角度：活动时间及地点安排、具体活动内容安排等。具体活动内容安排等。命题探索人教课本中涉及人教课本中涉及“计划安排计划安排”这个话题这个话题的单元有：的单元有：教材链接英语课上，老师要求同学们英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人的周末计介绍个人的周末计划划，假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲，请根据表假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲，请根据表格中提示的活动内容，写一篇格中提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿发言稿，介绍你介绍你的周末计划的周末计划，并在班上与同学交流。，并在班上与同学交流。审主题：周末计划；审时态：一审主题：周末计划；审时态：一般将来时
4、般将来时审文体：审文体：应用文应用文审人称：审人称：第一人称第一人称SaturdayWatch TVGo to a bookstore SundayVisit grandparents .要点要点1：周六：周六的计划的计划要点要点2：周天的：周天的计划计划要求：要求：(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点；充要点；(2)发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；(3)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；和地名；(4)词数：词数：80个左右个左右(已给出的开头和结已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数尾不计入总词
5、数)。Hi,everyone!Heres my plan for the weekend._【教材好句范例教材好句范例】1.I would like to invite you to the opening of our new library at No.9 High School.八八(上上)Unit 9 P712.Im making some plans to work in an old peoples home this summer.八八(下下)Unit 2 P10时间地点安排时间地点安排3.I want to put off my plan to work in an anima
6、l hospital until next summer.八八(下下)Unit 2 P124.My family is taking a trip to Wuhan at the end of this month to visit my aunt and uncle.八八(上上)Unit 9 P66【句子仿写句子仿写】1.我想邀请你和我们一起去公园野餐。我想邀请你和我们一起去公园野餐。_2.九月末的时候我将去上海旅行并拜访我的朋友九月末的时候我将去上海旅行并拜访我的朋友们。们。I would like to invite you to go on a picnic in the park w
7、ith us.Im taking a trip to Shanghai at the end of September to visit my friends.3.我们班正计划于六月十日在我们教室里举办一我们班正计划于六月十日在我们教室里举办一个聚会。个聚会。_ _4.我们想去田地里采摘水果和蔬菜。我们想去田地里采摘水果和蔬菜。Our class is making some plans to have a party in our classroom on the tenth day of June.We want to go to the fields to pick up fruit a
8、nd vegetables.【教材好句范例教材好句范例】1.Mary decided to try out for a job at an afterschool reading program last year.八八(下下)Unit 2 P112.Our class is trying to come up with some ideas to cheer up sick children because they are often sad.八八(下下)Unit 2 P123.Im going to bring my new camera to take lots of photos！具
9、体计划内容具体计划内容【句子仿写句子仿写】1.今年夏天我决定去海南度假。今年夏天我决定去海南度假。_2.我这周末将去市图书馆借一些关于科学的书。我这周末将去市图书馆借一些关于科学的书。3.Frank正尽力在用一种友好的方式和他的同学们交流。正尽力在用一种友好的方式和他的同学们交流。_ I decide to go to Hainan for vacation this summer.Im going to the city library to borrow some science books this weekend.Frank is trying to communicate with
10、his classmates in a friendly way.【句子扩写范例句子扩写范例】1.I hope to be a teacher.I hope to be a teacher.I would be nice to my students.2.Maybe Ill be an airplane pilot.Maybe Ill be an airplane pilot.That would be a cool job.理想愿望理想愿望3.So why do I want to be a farmer?So why do I want to be a farmer?Because it
11、is really an important job.Everyone needs food,and I want to grow the best crops.【句子扩写句子扩写】1.I will work hard in the new year.(扩写具体做法扩写具体做法)_ _2.I will spend more time with my family.(扩写具扩写具体表现体表现)_ _I will work hard in the new year.I will pay more attention to my study.I will spend more time with m
12、y family.I will share my joys and tears with them.3.I want to be healthier than before.(扩写具体计划扩写具体计划)_ _4.I hope to be a doctor.(扩写原因扩写原因)_ _I want to be healthier than before,so I will eat healthy food and do sports.I hope to be a doctor.Because it is a great job.Everyone needs healthy bodies,and I
13、 can help patients.Our class are going to have a picnic in a park.We are supposed to arrive at the park at 8：00 am.After arriving there,some of us are going to _(活动活动1).At the same time,a few classmates who are interested in music can _(活动活动2).At noon,we will _(活动活动3).I n t h e a f t e r n o o n,w e
14、 p l a n t o _ _(活动活动4)play games活动安排活动安排sing songs togethersit around and have a wonderful lunch collect rubbish that is thrown away by careless visitors Hi,everyone!Heres my plan for the weekend.On Saturday morning,Im going to watch TV to relax myself after a long weeks study.I am fond of watching
15、 comedies and cartoons.On Saturday afternoon,Im going to a bookstore to buy some books.Reading is one of my hobbies.I miss my grandparents so much that Im going to visit them on Sunday.Ill help them do some housework.After I come back,Ill do my homework to get ready for the next week.Thats my weeken
16、d.How do you like it?Thank you!(2019黄石改编黄石改编)假如你是李华，你的外国同假如你是李华，你的外国同学学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请你根写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请你根据所给提示和要求，给据所给提示和要求，给Tom回封邮件。回封邮件。提示：提示：(1)Read some useful books.(2)Help my parents do some housework.(3)Do exercise with some friends.写作练兵写作练兵 要求：要求：(1)邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。当发挥。(
17、2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名，校名邮件中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。和地名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头和结尾已给出，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数不计入总词数)Dear Tom，Im very happy to hear from you._写作练兵写作练兵 Now Im going to tell you my plans for the summer vacation.First of all,I want to read some meaningful and good books.Maybe these books will be helpful for my fut
18、ure study.Then,I want to spend more time helping my parents do some housework,such as _I wonder how do you plan your vacation?Write to me soon.Yours，Li Hua写作练兵写作练兵sweeping the floor or washing dishes after dinner.Finally,I plan to go to the park with my friends every morning or afternoon for exercis
19、e.Exercising can help me keep healthy.1.第一眼看到你会被那抢眼、近乎妖艳的色彩震撼，更会迷醉于她独特的，蕴涵巫女般迷幻魔力的风格之中。2.她选择以代表强烈欲望的紫色来包装其化妆品系列，以黯紫色为主色的包装，周围布满了红艳的蔷薇，像极了年代妩媚的面粉盒；复古俏丽的化妆品系列让城中女子爱不释手。3.古琦品牌时装一向以高档、豪华、性感而闻名于世，以“身份与财富之象征”品牌形象成为富有的上流社会的消费宠儿，一向被商界人士垂青，时尚之余不失高雅。古琦现在是意大利最大的时装集团。4.继承着法国高级女装的传统，始终保持高级华丽的设计路线，迎合上流社会成熟女性的审美品味
20、，象征着法国时装文化的最高精神。5.多年过去了，这个名字依然引领着世界的流行时尚。然而在这些辉煌的业绩后面，我们所看到的是一个活生生的，他充满着深情，极为害羞，又极为幽默，他便是永远的。6.迪奥的设计，注重的是服装的女性造型线条而并非色彩。他的时装具有鲜明的风格：裙长不再曳地，强调女性隆胸丰臀、腰肢纤细、肩形柔美的曲线，打破了战后女装保守古板的线条。这种风格轰动了巴黎乃至整个西方世界，给人留下深刻的印象。7.服装与其他名牌做法不同，它从不将任何“”或“”等明显的标志放在衣服上，而衣标上的字样，则是其唯一的辨识方法。8.推出的服装款式向顾客传递积极、开放的生活理念,倡导时尚的生活方式。专为成熟时尚的都市女性设计。她们的着装风格典雅、性感；精于对服装款式、颜色、面料及配饰的
