1、第3讲句里乾坤,一锤定音定语从句在写作中的应用,一、魔法导航在英语写作中使用复杂的句式是提高表达档次、增加语言亮点的主要途径之一,而定语从句就是复杂结构中的重要一项。因此,在写作中巧妙地运用定语从句可为我们的文章“增光添彩”。书面表达中定语从句的常用形式如下:1.使用关系代词that、which、who、whom、whose或as引导的定语从句典句引领This reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she can to let me have the best things.这使我想起了我的妈妈,她一直竭尽全力让我拥有最好的东西
2、。雕词琢句(1)用定语从句将句子整合为复合句I am Li Jin.I am chairman of the student union in Chenguang Middle School., I am Li Jin who/that is chairman of the student union in Chenguang Middle School.Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is
3、 the day for the elderly in our culture.(2015课标全国卷)Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival which/that is the day for the elderly in our culture.Team members are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions.
4、 It will benefit them a lot. (2017课标全国卷) Team members are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions, which will benefit them a lot.,Material collecting took us a whole week. During it we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life. (2017北京卷) Mat
5、erial collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of our school life.I am grateful to Mr. White. Without his help I couldn?t have made so much progress in my English study. I am grateful to Mr. White, without whose help I couldnt have m
6、ade so much progress in my English study.(2)用定语从句完成或翻译下面的句子Finally,we took pictures with the old craftsman and the dough figurines that/which we made(我们制作的).(2015北京卷),This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons(借助它我想开阔我的视野)a
7、nd gain some working experience. (2016课标全国卷) As is indicated in the graph(如图所示), the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth slowed down in 2016. (2017江苏卷)I would like to interview Zhang Haidi whose experience has inspired me deeply(她的经历深深地鼓舞了我).Firs
8、tly,we will never forget those happy scenes of studying and living together with you, which will benefit us a lot(这将对我们很有益处)in the future.我建议你游览泰山,它的风光很美丽。(2017北京卷)I recommend you to visit Mount Tai whose sights are amazing.,任何感兴趣的学生都欢迎参加。Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.正如谚语所
9、说的,熟能生巧。Just as the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.” 我非常珍惜你给我提供的那个和英国学生交流的机会。I cherish the opportunity very much that you offered me to communicate with British students. 去年我参加了在北京举行的夏令营,这不仅开阔了我的视野,也提高了我的英语口语水平。Last year, I joined the summer camp in Beijing, which not only broadened my horizons
10、 but also improved my oral English.,2.使用关系副词where,why和when引导的定语从句。典句引领The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her mom.这张图片向我们展示了一个感人的时刻,一个小女孩过来迎接她的妈妈。雕词琢句(1)I will join the Dragon Boat Training Camp where I can take part in various kinds of activities(在那儿我可以参加各种活动).(
11、2)学校已经创造了一种可以让我们自由发展自己兴趣的氛围。The school has created an atmosphere where we can develop our own interests freely.,二、学以致用1.完美文章结合括号中的提示,用定语从句完成下面的文章Hi! Tom,Nice to read your e-mail today.I notice youve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.However,Im afraid there is (1) one mistak
12、e (that/which)Id like to point out(我想指出来的一个错误).It is the idiom “无所不为”,(2) which means “do all kinds of bad things”(它的意思是做各种各样的坏事).Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess (3) the idea that you were really trying to say(你真正的想法)is that youve got nothing to do these days.In that case,you
13、should use “无所事事”.We usually use “无所不为” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad,and “无所事事” to describe (4) the situation where/in which people have got nothing meaningful to do(人们没有有意义的事情可做的情形).Have I made myself clear? Anyway,Im amazed at (5) the progress (that/which)youve made(你已经取
14、得的进步).Hope youll find a job soon.Yours,Li Hua,2.话题写作【本期话题】学校生活【写作微练】根据下面的汉语提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。1.众所周知,课外活动对学生的健康成长非常重要。2.我们学校的课外活动丰富多彩,我最喜欢踢足球。3.它不仅锻炼了我的身体,而且还塑造了我的性格。4.在活动中,我还结交了很多兴趣相同的朋友。5.我认为,学生应该积极参加他们喜欢的课外活动。注意:至少运用三个定语从句。,本文档仅为全套资料之一，欢迎点击下方按钮链接，下载全套资料！,请点此到下载本文全套资料,答案One possible version:As we al
15、l know,out-of-class activities are of great importance to the healthy growth of the students.There are various out-of-class activities in our school, and playing football is my favorite,which has not only built up my body but also shaped my character.In addition,I have made some friends who have the
16、 same interest as me.All in all,I think students should take an active part in out-of-class activities that they like.,三、实战提能假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。我会审题,我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)展览exhibition(2)邀请invite(3)博物馆museum(4)收集collect(5)难忘
17、的unforgettable(6)中国传统Chinese tradition(7)参加join in/take part in/participate in2.句型搭桥(1)I am writing to.(2)If you like, you can.,我会表达,答案One possible version:Dear Henry,Im Li Hua, who is one of your students. I am writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. As you know, paper-cutting
18、is one of Chinese traditions and I am sure you will like it. The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Sunday,when some famous Chinese artists will perform. Meanwhile, some best paper-cutting works that were collected from all over the country will be displayed, which will be a feast for,your eyes. If you like, you can also join in papercutting, which will be an unforgettable experience for you, I believe. Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua美句必背1.I am convinced that you will be keen on it.2.If interested, you can join in paper-cutting as well.,
