1、 Where did you go on vacation?Where did you go on vacation?Writing Writing An old driver will take you to fly!?Learning aims:Master the writing skills.Use these skills to write a composition.基本结构的安排基本结构的安排)basic structure(Lets go for it!Dear Mr.Know，I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want t
2、o tell you some problems we meet in English study.(the beginning)First，some of us arent interested in English.We think studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.An
3、d we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats more,there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone(更不更不用说用说)answer the questions about them.But the most difficult thing is to write.We often use w
4、rong words and sentences.Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Please give us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Write to me soon.(the ending)Mary 总总 the body（正文）（正文）分分 总总 (写作考试规则写作考试规则)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautiful(美：谚语/例子)书面表达书面表达?解题步骤：解题步骤：1.Read 2.Think 3.Write 4.C
5、heck 1、Read 2、Think 3、Write 4、Check 文体文体 要点要点 词汇词汇 时态时态 人称人称 句型句型 过渡过渡语语 格式格式 词数词数 拼写拼写 箴言一：箴言一：最重要的话先说最重要的话先说 我爸爸每天晚饭后去散步。我爸爸每天晚饭后去散步。My father takes a walk after supper every day.三个句子，三面旗帜三个句子，三面旗帜 静态静态 She is a student.Be句型句型 动态动态 She is pretty.简简 n.be n.n.be adj.She is in the room.He runs.Do句型句型
6、 They are singing a song.He gave me a book.单单 句句 n.be prep.n.v.n.v.n.n.v.n.n.物与物之间物与物之间 的存在关系的存在关系 The teacher made Tom monitor.n.v.n.补补.There be句型句型 There be n.补补 读读(Read)1、文体、文体 健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一
7、次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。2、要点、要点 travel visit friends or parents stay at home work 读读(Read)根据以下关键词及图表用根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。简单的句子列出文章的要点。?如何度假如何度假?调查报告调查报告?倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲 travel stay at home visit friends or par
8、ents work?想想/列列(Think/list)词汇词汇 A lot of people travel.时态时态 Some people stay at home.人称人称 Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.visit friends or work parents Enjoy your vacation.stay at home travel 加加(add)?How do people spend their vacation?We?加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。made a survey and he
9、re is our report.?可以采取总分总总分总结构，开头或结 （the beginning尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）?连连(connect)How do
10、people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,And a lot of people travel.watch TV or surf the Internet.some people stay at home.They some Also parents.other people visit friends or Come and enjoy your vacation.People However,a few people work.who relax well work
11、 well.Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）方法一方法一:善用词汇善用词汇 甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇 Which is better?他们在海滩上听音乐。他们在海滩上听音乐。A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.Which is better?他们很早就到了。他
12、们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.我认为学英语很有趣。我认为学英语很有趣。A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to le
13、arn English.我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.Writing skills（“写写”的技巧）的技巧）方法二方法二:活用多种句型活用多种句型 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young.She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she
14、 cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the 方法三方法三:妙用关联词妙用关联词 关联词关联词(connection words)1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor 2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror 3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway 4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a r
15、esult 5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless 6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally
16、,in the end 9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact 10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short Lets try?Though_ I am tired,I keep Although on working till midnight.?He didnt go to movies,he went to instead the concert _.like?We like doing kinds of sports _ sw
17、imming,running and hiking.First?_,he stood up.Then he got out.Finally At last _,he went back._,Next he smiled.?美美 连连(beautify)(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,Andwatch TV or surf the Internet.some people stay at home.They a lot of pe
18、ople travel.someparents.other people visit friends or Also Come and enjoy your vacation.People However,a few people work.who relax well work well.美美(beautify)We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.
