1、第4讲名词性从句在写作(xizu)中的应用第一页,共16页。一、魔法导航一、魔法导航名词性从句包括名词性从句包括(boku)宾语从句、表语从句、主语从句和同位语从句。在写作宾语从句、表语从句、主语从句和同位语从句。在写作中我中我们可以巧用名词性从句来为我们的文章们可以巧用名词性从句来为我们的文章“锦上添花锦上添花”。1.主语从句在写作中的应用主语从句在写作中的应用:典句引领典句引领What I want to stress is that you should make it a rule to practice speaking Man-darin.(2015四川四川)我想强调的是你应该养成
2、练习说普通话的习惯。我想强调的是你应该养成练习说普通话的习惯。雕词琢句雕词琢句(1)(给我印象最深的给我印象最深的)is his famous saying,“Genius is one per-cent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”四大四大(s d)名花名花,锦上添花锦上添花第二页,共16页。答案What impresses me most(2)我们想做的第一件事是和老人一块包饺子。(2015课标全国)答案 What we want to do first is to make dumplings with the el
3、derly people.2.宾语从句(cn j)在写作中的应用:典句引领Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad,let alone what we can do for our country.我们几乎不了解国内外正在发生的事情,更不要说能为我们的国家做什么了。雕词琢句第三页,共16页。(1)I would also like to know (他在太空中感觉怎么样)and whether space travel is as great fun as I have read.(2015安徽)答案how he f
4、elt in space(2)从你的帖子上我得知你想提高你的普通话(Mandarin)水平。(2015四川)答案I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.3.表语从句在写作中的应用(yngyng):典句引领From him,I realize the secret to success is not where you were born,but what you are doing in your life.第四页,共16页。从他身上,我意识到成功的秘诀不在于你出生在何处,而在于在生活中你在做什么。雕词琢句
5、(1)The main reason for my choice is (我倾向于牺牲自己的利益)for the group benefit.(2015浙江)答案that I tend to sacrifice my own interest(2)我想采访于敏的原因(yunyn)是他为中国的发展做出了巨大的贡献。(2015安徽)答案The reason why I want to interview Yu Min is that he has made great contributions to the development of China.4.同位语从句在写作中的应用:第五页,共16页
6、。典句引领典句引领There is no denying the fact that the environment is getting polluted more and more seriously.不可否认不可否认,环境污染越来越严重了。环境污染越来越严重了。雕词琢句雕词琢句(1)Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide,I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason (我喜欢阅读我喜欢阅读,并且有很并且有很多书多书).(2015重
7、庆重庆)答案答案that I love reading and I own a large number of books(2)多数人坚定地持有这样的观点多数人坚定地持有这样的观点(gundin):教育能改变一个人的命运。教育能改变一个人的命运。(hold the firm belief that)答案(d n)Most people hold the firm belief that education can change ones fate.第六页,共16页。二、学以致用二、学以致用1.完美文章完美文章结合括号中的提示结合括号中的提示,用名词性从句完成用名词性从句完成(wn chng)下
8、面的文章。下面的文章。Dear friends,Good morning!I am glad to express my opinion on our monitors suggestion(1)(每天抽出每天抽出15分钟的时间读报纸分钟的时间读报纸).第七页,共16页。As far as I am concerned,its a good idea,because it can do us good in many re-spects.Firstly,we are occupied with our study every day and we seldom know(2)(国内外发生的事情
9、).By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside.Secondly,the advantage of the activity is(3)(它能丰富(fngf)我们的学校生活并能提高我们的学习效率).Last but not least,(4)(我想强调的是)is that it will no doubt help us improve our reading skills.As for my suggestion,we should make a choice about what wel
10、l read.I am con-vinced(5)(每个人都将从这项活动中受益匪浅).Thats all.Thank you for your listening.第八页,共16页。答案(1)that we should set aside 15 minutes every day to read newspapers(2)what is happening both at home and abroad(3)that it can enrich our school life and help to improve the efficiency of our study(4)what I w
11、ant to stress(5)that everyone will benefit a lot from this activity2.话题写作本期话题科技生活写作要求至少运用三种名词性从句。根据下面的信息提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。1.一些学生使用网络获取信息的主要原因是他们认为很方便;2.毫无疑问,他们也可以快速获得(hud)问题的准确答案;第九页,共16页。3.我认为这有可能使学生失去思考的兴趣;4.应该采取措施解决这个问题,比如父母和老师应该鼓励他们独立(dl)完成作业。第十页,共16页。One possible version:The main reason why some
12、 students prefer to gain information on the Internet is that they think it convenient.In addition,theres no denying the fact that they can get accurate answers to questions quickly.However,I think that its likely that students will lose interest in thinking.In my opinion,measures must be taken to so
13、lve the problem.For example,what teachers and parents should do is to encour-age students to finish their homework on their own.答案(d n)第十一页,共16页。三、美文赏读三、美文赏读为了帮助中学生健康成长为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了某中学英文报开辟了HEART-TO-HEART专栏。假专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰你诉说了
14、自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予安慰表示理解并给予安慰;2.提出建议提出建议(jiny)并说明理由。并说明理由。注意注意:1.词数词数100左右左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;第十二页,共16页。3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考(cnko)词汇:temper n.脾气,情绪我来试写Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having su
15、ch a bad time at the moment.Yours,Jamie第十三页,共16页。答案(d n)One possible version:Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong(表语(bioy)从句),so you dont have to worry so much.Its impo
16、rtant that you should learn to control your temper(主语从句)so that you may not do or say any-thing youll regret.Here are some useful tips.第十四页,共16页。Firstly,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.I hold a firm belief that it is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yoursel
17、f(同位语从句(cn j).Secondly,go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And thirdly,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope that youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal(宾语(bny)从句).Yours,Jamie第十五页,共16页。【写作点评】本文处充分运用了表语从句、主语从句、同位语从句、宾语从句,不仅丰富了文章的句式,而且准确表达了作者的意思,是名词性从句在写作中妙用的佳作,值得大家(dji)学习和借鉴。第十六页,共16页。