1、Task A DIY story DIY storyDIY storyWhat did you do/make?Why did you do that?WhatWhyHowI decided to by myself.I because First Second Finally What problemswhoI made a mistake when helped me with feelingWhen I completed ,I hope A DIY storyA DIY storyLots of things went wrong.There was on everything.Wha
2、tWhyHowI decided to by myself.I because First Second Finally What problemswhoI made a mistake when helped me with feelingWhen I completed ,I hope A DIY storyA DIY storySuzys DIY story Part 1 Part2 Part 3Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2-3 Paragraph 4What she didHow she did Mistakes she madefeelingsTime I spen
3、dWhy she didSuzys hopeWho helpedSuzys DIY story Part 1 Part2 Part 3Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2-3 Paragraph 4What she didHow she did Mistakes I madefeelingsTime I spendWhy she didSuzys hopeMyWho helpedshe drew some roses on the card.she wrote a sentence on it.she coloured the roses red,blue and pink.she
4、cut out a picture of colour balloons and stuck it on the cover.First,Second,Third,Finally,Write your own diary entry about a DIY job you did.Tips:Use the Simple Past Tense.Symbol MeaningExample errorS A spelling mistake(拼写错误)拼写错误)The anser is right.WOA mistake in word order(词序错误)(词序错误)I like very mu
5、ch it.G A grammar mistake(语法错误)(语法错误)I am going to buy some furnitures.T Wrong verb tense(时态错误)(时态错误)I see him yesterday.WWWrong word(用词错误用词错误)I am interested on Jazz musicP A punctuation mistake(标点错误(标点错误)Do you like London.Something is not necessary.(多余之处)多余之处)He was not too strong enough.Check list Try to do it yourself,Try to do it yourself,live a different life!live a different life!Read your diary entryagain,and try to make it better.Try to do it yourself,Try to do it yourself,live a different life!live a different life!