1、 English Writing评价的标准评价的标准1、文章是否有内容？、文章是否有内容？（是否离题？是否切合话题？）（是否离题？是否切合话题？）2、文章是否有标题？、文章是否有标题？3、文章是否具有语法错误？、文章是否具有语法错误？（是否书写正确？）（是否书写正确？）A A）标点符号；）标点符号；B)B)大、小写；大、小写；C)C)单词拼写；单词拼写；D)D)书写；书写；E)E)句型、时态句型、时态4、好词好句（是否采用名言名句，好的句型句式，是否真实地表达自己的感情？）5、字数是否达到要求、字数是否达到要求？看图作文看图作文 How to write a picture story?Go
2、over the requirement（person,tense,style）Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Write a passage（using connectives and adding details and specific information.)点题（时间、地点、点题（时间、地点、人物、事件人物、事件）事件的起因事件的起因 事件的发展事件的发展/过程过程 事件的结果事件的结果 扣题扣题 Using connectives并列并列 转折转折 3.因果因果 4.其他其他and,bothand but,howe
3、ver,though,while so,therefore,because when,suddenly,immediately,as soon as,unfortunately,sothat,finally,as a result,What was worseSample 1 根据下根据下列图画中列图画中 Tom Tom 骑自骑自行车的经行车的经历，用英历，用英语写一篇语写一篇故事。故事。短文要写短文要写得连贯、得连贯、完整。完整。1.Go over the requirement 1.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:A story（a traffic ac
4、cident)past tenseTom,he Tom/ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/the other day/one day2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)A car/run fast to/run into him Tom/fall off his bike Suddenly 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,
5、when,why,how)2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)The driver/frightened/run away 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)A woman/remember the number of the car The police The driver/catch2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where
6、,when,why,how)Key wordsKey wordssentencessentencesride a bike/run fast toWhen Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.hit him/fall off his bikeThe car hit him.And he fell off his bike.be frightened /run awayThe driver was so frightened that he ran away.see the accident/remember the num
7、ber/call the police /be caught A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car.She called the police.Finally，the driver was caught.3.Writing a passage Passage 1 Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver was frightened.He r
8、an away.A woman saw the accident.She remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman.The driver was caught.passage 2 The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The
9、driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and pun
10、ished for his wrong doing.Passage 3 The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of
11、 sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.假设下面的图画描述的是假设下面的图画描述的是Black一家周末一家周末在公园游玩的情景。请你根据画面内容，在公园游玩的情景。请你根
12、据画面内容，写一篇写一篇80字左右的作文。字左右的作文。假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月月3日日(星期五星期五)的一段亲的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。字左右的日记。homework1、如果你生活在那个时代，你能想出什么好办法解决新中国工业化的问题呢？1.依据辐射方向确定“辐射源”,确定辐射名称和热量传播空间2、假如由你来主持制定“一五计划”，你将优先发展什么？3.材料二中“一个国家，两种制度”的含义是什么，邓小平提出它的根本目的是什么？4.根据材料二和所学的知识，说明香港问题能最终解决的主要原因（至少列出2点），并指出其历史意义。5.正面战场的抗战是中国抗日战争和世界反法西斯战争的重要组成部分；6.正面战场的抗战，粉碎了日本三个月灭亡中国的战略计划和“速战速决”的方针，消耗了日本的军事和经济实力；7.正面战场的抗战，有力地支援了中国共产党领导的敌后战场；8.大气对太阳辐射的削弱作用:主要包括吸收和反射.9、含义：荒漠化是一个动态发展过程，其实质是土地退化。
