1、第5讲强势出击,一句千钧强调形式在写作中的应用,一、魔法导航在英语写作中有时为了强调某一成分,突出表达效果,我们常常采用强调的形式。下面把写作中常用的强调形式做一下简要总结。1.用感叹句来表示强烈的感情,突出说话人的情感。典句引领How time flies! 时光飞逝!雕词琢句(1) How charming(多么迷人)the scenery is!(2)于敏是一个多么无私的科学家啊!What a selfless scientist Yu Min is!(3)当欣赏视频的时候,所有的人是多么兴奋呀!(2017北京卷) How excited all the people were when
2、 they enjoyed the video!,2.用助动词“do/does/did+动词原形”对谓语动词进行强调。典句引领If you need any further information,do let me know. 如果你需要进一步的信息,一定要让我知道。雕词琢句(1)Without hesitation,I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun/we did enjoy ourselves (我们的确玩得很高兴) that day.(2)我的确希望你能尽快返回天津。(2017天津卷)I do hope you ca
3、n return to Tianjin as soon as possible.,3.用强调句型“It is/was+被强调的部分+that/who+其他部分”来对句子的主语、宾语和状语进行强调。典句引领It was not until the end of the 19th century that shooting earned its status as a sport.直到19世纪末期射击才成为一项运动项目。雕词琢句(1)Not the story itself but what is reflected in the story counts.(2015福建卷) It is not
4、the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.(用强调句型升级) (2)重要的是那些遵守规则的人。(2015江苏卷)It is the people who obey the rules that matter.,(3)一句多译正是由于我对运动的极大兴趣,我才密切关注将于八月末在天津举行的第13届全国运动会。(2017天津卷) It is because of my great interest in sports that I pay close attention to the 13th National G
5、ames to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. (because of) It is because I have great interest in sports that I pay close attention to the 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. (because),4.通过使用such.that.,so.that.等固定搭配达到强调的目的。典句引领It was such a beautiful day that they woul
6、d remember it forever.这是如此美丽的一天以至于他们将永远记住它。,雕词琢句(1)用倒装句升级下面的句子The sights along the Yangtze River are so amazing that they appeal to visitors from all over the country. (2017北京卷) So amazing are the sights along the Yangtze River that they ap-peal to visitors from all over the country.(2) Life will be
7、 so rich and colorful (生活将会如此丰富多彩) in ten years that I will live more happily.(3)一句多译这些书非常有趣,你们可能非常喜欢。 The books are very interesting and you may like them very much.(and) The books are so interesting that you may like them very much.(so.that.正常语序), So interesting are the books that you may like the
8、m very much.(so.that.倒装语序),5.通过使用排比、反复等修辞手法对句子进行强调。典句引领I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world;I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language;I admire him because his keen eyes set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful l
9、ife!我喜欢他,因为他的喜剧和悲剧把我带入一个奇幻的世界;我爱他,因为他的诗让我领略英语的美;我钦佩他,因为他敏锐的目光使我沉思,并教会我如何有意义地生活。,二、学以致用1.完美文章结合括号中的提示,用强调句型把下面的短文补充完整Nowadays,lots of children in rural areas cant live together with their parents working in other places.Several factors result in the problem.Firstly,some parents (1)do worry(强调谓语动词:的确担
10、心) that it will influence their work if they take the children along with them.Secondly,the living costs and education fees in the place where parents work are so high that they cant afford them.The phenomenon does harm to children in many ways.First of all,children will feel quite lonely without pa
11、rentslove and care.Worse still,such children get into bad habits easily,which (2)does influence their healthy growth(强调谓语动词:确实会影响他们的健康成长).,2.话题写作【本期话题】动物保护【写作微练】根据下面的信息提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。1.保护野生动物很重要;2.它们是自然界的珍宝和人类的朋友;3.它们对保持自然界平衡至关重要;4.必须采取措施保护它们。保护它们就是保护我们自己。注意:至少运用三种强调形式。,In my opinion,(3) its paren
12、ts and the government that are to blame for the problem(强调句型:父母和政府应该为这个问题负责).However,whatever difficulties we are faced with,we should take effective measures to overcome them.,答案One possible version:I do attach great importance to protecting wild animals.As far as Im concerned,they are not only tre
13、asures of nature but also our friends.As we all know,it is wild animals that play an important role in keeping the balance of nature.They are so rare that effective measures must be taken right now to protect them from being hunted and dying out.Just as some scientists say,protecting wild animals is
14、 protecting ourselves.,本文档仅为全套资料之一，欢迎点击下方按钮链接，下载全套资料！,请点此到下载本文全套资料,三、实战提能本周你班班会的主题是“To be self-confident”,假设你是班长,请根据下面的提示准备一篇发言稿。提示:1.简述自信的重要性;2.你曾经缺乏信心,是谁给了你鼓励,什么事让你改变了态度;3.适当加入自己的评论。注意:1.词数120左右; 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,我会审题,我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)自信的self-confident(2)紧张nervous(3)放弃nervous(4)说服某人做某事persuade
15、sb. to do sth.(5)增强自信心increase one s confidence,(6)取得成功achieve success/make it(7)为做准备make preparations for/prepare for 2.句型搭桥(1)No matter.(2)so.that.我会表达,答案One possible version:Boys and girls,Sometimes,life is a hard and bitter journey.Therefore,Id like to say,“No matter what happens, do be self-con
16、fident.”I still remember that when I just entered the high school,I suffered a lot of stress and was too nervous to answer the teachers questions whenever they asked me in class.Later,something did change my life.An English speech contest was to be held in my class. It was with great efforts that th
17、e teacher persuaded me to participate in it.He said it was so important an opportunity for me to increase my confidence that I shouldnt give it up.I chose a topic which was a bit challenging for me“Self-confidence and Success”.I wrote down whatever I had to say and kept reciting it.,It was with the
18、teachers encouragement that I won a prize.From then on,I held a firm belief that self-confidence is the first step to success. Thus,my friends, do be self-confident and you will achieve success.Thats all.Thank you.美句必背1.Although faced with a tough situation, we should be self-confident. 2.So nervous was I that I couldnt answer the teachers questions. 3.It was with the teachers encouragement that I won a prize.,
