1、专题二读后续写专题二读后续写怎么考读后续写是一项酝酿已久的尝试。实验结果显示,读后续写可以有效提升学习者的语言产出表现,特别是在准确性和复杂性方面,效果尤为明显。研究指出,读后续写是内容创造与语言模仿的有机融合,既可凸显语言输入、激发学习者注意形式,又能优化语言输出、加快新知识的吸收,是提高外语教学效率的可靠途径,更是学生提高表达能力、思维能力、创新能力的手段。读后续写需要考生结合所读材料,再写作、再创造。其过程涉及了分析、评价、综合所给材料,充分运用发散性思维,创造性地补全阅读材料,能充分培养考生的批判性思维能力。怎么学平时要加强阅读,对记叙文的故事情节要进行合理的想象,同时还要加强写作基本
2、功的训练。怎么写读后续写一般分为两类:半开放性续写和完全开放性续写。半开放性续写要求考生务必根据文章的逻辑推理续写;完全开放性续写则要求考生依据文章的思路自由发挥。续写内容要尽可能与所给阅读材料的中心思想和语言风格保持一致。写作步骤:1.审题:速读阅读材料和写作要求,明确写作任务。2.读文:细读阅读材料,确定文章体裁和题材(话题)。注意文中的关键词,也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件,特别要标记能描述事件发展过程的词和短语。3.谋段:先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段开头语,再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据确定好的段落大意,选出每一段可能要用到的所给阅读材料中带下划线的关键词。结合这些关键词,确
3、定每一段的写作要点。这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子,以满足续写的词数要求。4.初写:按照第三步谋段时确定好的写作要点进行初写。写作时要注意所用的人称和时态要与所给阅读材料一致,另外,还要注意尽可能地减少表达上的语法错误。如果遇到语言上的表述困难,可参考所给阅读材料中的有关语句或另辟途径。5.定稿:写好初稿后,考生要结合所给阅读材料中的故事线索读一遍自己续写的内容。既要确保不出现与所给阅读材料相矛盾的地方,又要做到内容上前后连贯,语句通顺。最后规范誊写并标出使用过的所给阅读材料中标有下划线的关键词语。续写时应注意以下几点:1.词数要达到要求,少于130词的,会从总分中减去2分;2.与所给文
4、章及段落开头语的衔接要恰当,使故事情节的发展合乎情理,上下文连贯;3.要带有原文色彩,必须使用所给阅读材料5个以上标有下划线的关键词语;4.使用的语法结构和词汇要丰富、准确;5.要有创新性和想象力;6.不要照抄原文或胡编乱造。下面以新考试说明中的样题为例,分析读后续写的题型特点。读后续写的形式是提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容:1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富
5、性和准确性;4.上下文的连贯性。阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned
6、and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like youve got a problem,”Arthur said.“Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back s
7、eat and then said,“Thanks.If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all.Id be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one.Just a
8、s Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars
9、 stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other,“What happened?”But everyone had a different answer.Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him
10、.Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase!She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened,and without another thought,he started to run.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,
11、请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”_Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur_【写作指导】根据新考试说明的要求和上面的样例可以看出,读后续写给出的阅读材料一般是350词以内的记叙文。考生要续写约150词的文字与所给阅读材料构成一个完整的故事。一般来说,记叙文浅显易懂,但故事情节曲折动人,故事线索的逻辑性也较强。阅读材料虽然是一篇
12、不完整的文章,但是它有趣,内容能延伸,考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。这就要求考生在读懂所给阅读材料的基础上,在规定时间内展开合理的想象,并运用所学的英语知识完成一篇约150词的续写。考生所续写的部分要有创新性和想象力,不是原文的抄写或胡编乱造,同时,还要带有原文色彩(必须使用所给阅读材料5个以上标有下划线的关键词语)。【参考范文】As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the b
13、ank robber.So Arthur didnt stop,but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him.He quickly put the suitcase in the car and said to the driver,“Please hurry to the Police Station.I have a case to report to the police;the man shouting behind is the bank thief!”The taxi raced away t
14、o the Police Station like an arrow.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received the robbery report,“This suitcase is that of the bank robber.It may be filled with the money stolen from the bank.I hand it to you.Please get ready to arrest the man.”谢谢谢谢2023-1-23