1、英语书面表达英语书面表达English Composition Writing淮阳中学高三英语组：淮阳中学高三英语组：胡丹胡丹Teaching goalsTeaching goals1.1.引导学生认识写作中常出现的错误引导学生认识写作中常出现的错误并改正。并改正。2.2.引导学生掌握基本的写作步骤和要领。引导学生掌握基本的写作步骤和要领。3.3.鼓励学生通过当堂写作训练，提高鼓励学生通过当堂写作训练，提高记叙文（夹叙夹议）写作能力和兴趣。记叙文（夹叙夹议）写作能力和兴趣。(2010湖北高考湖北高考)结合生活中的一个事例，用结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。英语写一篇短文
2、，谈谈微笑的作用。内容包括：(1)你是如何看待微笑的作用的；(2)谈谈你所经历的让你最感动或给你印象最深刻的一次微笑；(3)你对微笑的感悟。Which composition feels more attractive,why?People often say,A smile can make you ten years younger.Not only smile can help us forget the unhappy things,but also it help us keep good mood.Once I failed in my history exam.I are ver
3、y sad.Later,I tell my grandma this thing say I hard-working history every day,but history still not good.I didnt know what I could do.Finally,I passed the exam becuase of her smile and encouragement.You dont give up becuase failure is the mother of success.my grandma said.I know the kindness smile i
4、s likes the sun,can warmed our heart.中式中文中式中文中式中文中式中文123456798I told my grandma this thing and said even though I studied hard,I couldnt achieve high grades.I know the kind smile can make us feel warm like the sun.书面表达有方法书面表达有方法三段结构把架搭三段结构把架搭十句中文心中划十句中文心中划主谓时态要一致主谓时态要一致每句短语，句型化每句短语，句型化特殊句型锦添花特殊句型锦添花
5、Conclusion1.一般句式：一般句式：People often say,A smile can make you ten years younger.高级句式：高级句式：As the saying goes,A smile can make you ten years younger.如何句型锦添花？如何句型锦添花？看看同学们的作文中哪些句子可以锦添花？看看同学们的作文中哪些句子可以锦添花？2.一般句式：一般句式：I passed the exam becuase of her smile and encouragement.高级句式高级句式：I couldnt have passed
6、the exam but for her smile and encouragement.(用虚拟语气）用虚拟语气）小试牛刀小试牛刀1.When they got to the station,they met the young man.Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.2.He is a very good boy.(改为感叹句改为感叹句)What a good boy he is!hardly.when.一。就。一。就。As the saying goes,A smile can make you
7、 ten years younger.Not only can smile help us forget the unhappy things,but also it helps us keep good mood.Once I failed in my history exam.I was very sad.Later,I told my grandma this thing and said even though I studied hard,I couldnt achieve high grades.I didnt know what I could do.I couldnt have
8、 passed the exam but for her encouragement.Dont give up becuase failure is the mother of success.my grandma said.I know the kind smile can make us feel warm like the sun.修改后的作文修改后的作文 People often say,A smile can make you ten years younger.Not only smile can help us forget the unhappy things,but also
9、 it help us keep good mood.Once I failed in my history exam.I are very sad.Later,I tell my grandma this thing say I hard-working history every day,but history still not good.I didnt know what I could do.Finally,I passed the exam becuase of her smile and encouragement.You dont give up becuase failure
10、 is the mother of success.my grandma said.I know the kindness smile is likes the sun,can warmed our heart.修改前的作文修改前的作文(2012湖南高考湖南高考)生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨慨请就此写一篇英语短文。请就此写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括：主要内容包括：1)丢失的物品；丢失的物品；2)物品失而复得的经过；物品失而复得的经过；3)你的感想。你的感想。注意：注
11、意：1.词数不少于词数不少于120个；个；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Practice【审题审题抓准信息抓准信息快速推断快速推断】记叙文记叙文物品失而复得的经过和感想物品失而复得的经过和感想一般过去时为主一般过去时为主第一人称第一人称。12345writing(1)我仍然记得上学期我在学校的那一天我仍然记得上学期我在学校的那一天(2)我丢了眼镜。我丢了眼镜。(3)一个下雨的下午，我来到学校图书馆，希望去消磨时一个下雨的下午，我来到学校图书馆，希望去消磨时间。间。(4)我一意识到我一意识到(丢眼镜丢眼镜)就返回去，结果发现图书馆关门就返回去，结果发现图书馆关门了。
12、了。(5)第二天我返回图书馆时发现眼镜不见了。第二天我返回图书馆时发现眼镜不见了。(6)我感到烦恼我感到烦恼。(7)我的同班同学也帮忙了我的同班同学也帮忙了.(8)一会儿之后，一位老师打电话告诉了我一个好消息。一会儿之后，一位老师打电话告诉了我一个好消息。(9)没有人会知道那时我多么高兴。没有人会知道那时我多么高兴。(10)我体会到，一方面，今后我应该更加细心，另一方面，我体会到，一方面，今后我应该更加细心，另一方面，我们应该乐于助人我们应该乐于助人。(3)一个下雨的下午，我来到学校图书馆，希望去消磨时间。一个下雨的下午，我来到学校图书馆，希望去消磨时间。(4)我一意识到我一意识到(丢眼镜丢眼
13、镜)就返回去了，结果发现图书馆关门了。就返回去了，结果发现图书馆关门了。(5)第二天我返回图书馆时发现眼镜不见了。第二天我返回图书馆时发现眼镜不见了。(8)一会儿之后，一位老师打电话告诉了我一个好消息。一会儿之后，一位老师打电话告诉了我一个好消息。come to.to do/doing.kill timehardly.when.only to find.the next day。不见了（。不见了（be gone/missing）a piece of good newsInstructions。Lets work in groups I still remember a day last ter
14、m when I was in our school.I lost my glasses.One rainy afternoon,I came to the school library,hoping to kill time.hardly had I noticed it when I returned,only to find the library closed.The next day when I went back to the library,I found they were gone.I was worried.My classmates also helped me.A s
15、hort while later,a teacher called me and told me a piece of good news.No one could tell how delighted I was at that time.From the experience,I learned that on the one hand,I should be careful enough in future,and on the other hand,we should be ready to help each other and care for each other.【成篇【成篇衔
16、接过渡，连句成篇】衔接过渡，连句成篇】书面表达有方法书面表达有方法三段结构把架搭三段结构把架搭十句中文心中划十句中文心中划主谓时态要一致主谓时态要一致每句短语，句型化每句短语，句型化特殊句型锦添花特殊句型锦添花Conclusion(2012南京模拟南京模拟)一年一度的寒假即将来临，一年一度的寒假即将来临，中学中学生英语生英语杂志准备出版专刊杂志准备出版专刊“快乐寒假快乐寒假”。请你为此。请你为此写一篇英文稿件。你的叙述须包括下列要点：写一篇英文稿件。你的叙述须包括下列要点：1往年寒假难忘的一件事往年寒假难忘的一件事(过程及感想过程及感想)；2今年寒假的打算今年寒假的打算(至少至少3点，娱乐、学
17、习等点，娱乐、学习等)；3你的愿望。你的愿望。homework1.价格变动会调节生产规模，价格降低,则企业限产2.促进提高提高劳动生产率，企业技术更新、加强管理就是要个别劳动生产率3.促使企业生产适销对路的高质量产品。企业进行市场调研，重新进行产品定位，不断提高产品质量等措施4.价格变动影响人们的消费需求。降价促使消费者将台式电脑更换为笔记本电脑5.坚持贯彻民族平等、民族团结、各民族共同繁荣的基本原则。党和国家正确领导、扶持，全国各族人民特别是对口省市的大力援疆，促进了新疆的全面和快速发展。6.第二次工业革命中科带动技术和生产的发展，引起人们对科的重视；相对论的提出是科领域的重大革命；观测结果证实了爱因斯坦的理论；大战结束有利于相对论传播。
