1、作文讲解考查形式(体裁):中考英语考查形式多样:看图(表)写作、中考英语考查形式多样:看图(表)写作、书信、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。通知、日记、记人物等。体裁包括:记叙文、说明文和应用文;体裁包括:记叙文、说明文和应用文;作文一般框架:要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点1.要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。2.结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点要点总结”让人一目
2、了然。3.逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whats more,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。4.语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如:单词的使用,时态等。5.亮点:但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attra
3、ctive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。应试策略圈出要点内容,确定文章格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。根据文章要点,运用已知句型,适当补充词汇、句子,扩充要点,形成提纲。运用过渡词,连接要点句子。1.审题目:圈要点三年的初中生活就要结束了,在我们的成长过程中,既有快乐,也有烦恼。请用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:1.Whats the biggest problem you met in the school or a
4、t home?2.How did you solve the problem?3.What can you learn from it?要求:1.字数:不少于60词,开头已给出,不计入总次数。2.内容须包含所提示内容,可适当发挥。3.不要涉及真实的人名和校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。问题,解决措施,学到时态:过去式体裁:议论文主体:我1.审题目:圈要点假设你是Dale,你的网友Cindy发来邮件,希望知道你最感谢的人是谁,现在请你给她回邮件,邮件内容包括:1.他/她的外表、兴趣、爱好和职业等;2.感谢他/她的理由。要求:1.短文应包括所有要点,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺、意思连贯;3.字数8
5、0词左右,邮件开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数内。最感谢的人时态:一般现在时体裁:信件(应用文)主体:我2.列提纲:充实要点目前,越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象,存在两种不同观点:请根据以上提示,以“Is a training class or a tutor necessary?”为题,写一篇短文阐述自己的观点。要求:1.包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。2.信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。3.词数:不少于60词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。上培训班或请家教的好坏时态:一般现在时体裁:议论文主题:training class or tut
6、oradvantagesdisadvantagesmy opinion1.study better with the help of a teacher2.strengthen(巩固)what is learnt in class3.learn a lot more from a training class or tutor.1.form the habit of dependence2.need free time to relax3.the purpose of some training class is only to make money.it isnt necessary We
7、can student well at school if we work harda waste of time and money2.列提纲:充实要点have a training class or a tutor句型 1:sb.think/find/make itadj.+to do sth.句型 2:The(main)reason why+完整句子 is that+句子 study better with the help of a teacher句型 3:名词(主题)+原因 strengthen(巩固)what is learnt in class句型 3:it is+adj.+fo
8、r sb.+to do sth.learn a lot more from a training class or tutor2.列提纲:充实要点句型 5:Others suggest/think/insist that.句型 6:make sb.do sth.form the habit of dependenceis not necessary to have a training class or a tutor句型 7:There is no denying/doubt that need free time to relax句型 8:whats more.my opinion句型 9
9、:As far as I am concerned,/In my opinion,I firmly hold the belief/idea that is not necessary to have a training class or a tutor句型 9:if you,you will/wont We can student well at school if we work hard.a waste of time and money3.定开头任何事物都是有两面性,也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。句型 9:Everything has two sides and _ i
10、s not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.4.连成文:丰富细节观点连接词firstly,first of all,to beigin with,at first 第一第二第三secondly,then,whats more,in additionfinally,thirdly,last but not least关联词1.1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut al
11、so,neithernor not onlybut also,neithernor2.2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror:or,eitheror3.3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all:but,however,althoughthough,after all4.4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless:if,unless6.6.表示对
12、比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,on the one handon the other:instead,notbut,while,on the one handon the other handhand7.7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.8.表示顺序表示顺序:
13、to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,from then on,finally,in the endnext,later,from then on,finally,in the end9.9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,i
14、n a word,generally speaking,in short:all in all,in a word,generally speaking,in short5.加结尾表总结all in all,in short,in a word,in conclusion,in summary结尾句(信件)With best wishes.Im looking forward to your reply.Id appreciate it if you could reply earlier.练一练在英语课上,老师组织了“A trip to the countryside or to the c
15、ity”的话题讨论。请根据小组讨论结果,写一篇英语短文,介绍两者的不同特点,并写出你的选择与理由。注意:1)短文必须包含记录表中的信息,并作适当发挥;2)文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息;3)词数 80100,所给的文章开头供选择,不计入词数。CountrysideCityrelaxing,fresh airnot easy to take public transportationexcitingcrowded,expensive常见语法错误不一致(时态、主谓、单复数、代词)Recently,we have have a discussed about a trip to the coun
16、tryside or to the city.have hadhave haddiscussiodiscussion nSome of people think countryside make you feel relaxed.makesmakesIt is convenient for they to take a trip to countryside.themthemTrip to the countryside is necessary.A A triptrip常见语法错误句子不完整City very crowded.缺少谓语动词缺少谓语动词Because can widen one
17、s horizon.缺少主语缺少主语Because there are many activities we can do in the countryside.For example,going fishing,climbing the mountain.,for examplefor exampleisisA trip to the A trip to the citycityfor for example example 误误用用常见语法错误词性误用Choose city is nice.动词短语误用动词短语误用In the countryside,you can lie under t
18、he stars,enjoying the quite night.quietquietChoosing cityChoosing city副词误用副词误用词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。Recently,we have have a discussed about a trip to the countryside or to the city.discussiodiscussion n动词误用动词误用名词名词常见语法错误句子不间断City is very crowded City spend lots of monty.Mary was friendly
19、to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.City is very crowded.City spend lots of monty.指代不清Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.结构混乱 There are many students are playing basketball on the playground.Many students are playing basketball on th
20、e playground.My English teacher gave me some advices on how to learn English well.She has a orange skirt.The skirt is nice.改错练习The color of his jacket is better than mine.I have two uncles;one is a doctor and another is a teacher.Onethousand dollars are enough to live on.He was warmly welcome by his
21、 friends.如何书写英语句子认识英语句子无论多少字数,只要句子有主语或谓语动词,而且只要表示完整意义的一句话就是句子。I am tired.The beautiful girl smiled.五种基本句型主语 谓语(不及物动词)She came/My head aches.主语 谓语(及物动词)宾语 She likes English.主语 系动词 表语 She is happy 主语 谓语(双宾动词)间接宾语 直接宾语 She gave John a book 主语 谓语(宾补动词)宾语 宾语补语 She makes her mother angry 句子种类简单句:只有一个主语(并列
22、主语),和一个谓语(并列谓语)。That was the most interesting trip.并列句:由并列连词把两个(以上)的简单句连起来。He worked hard,but he failed.复合句:用一个或多个句子作另一个句子的成分(主语、表语、宾语、状语、定语),句子间用从属连词连接。He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.I dont know why he refused my invitation.写英语句子的关键是找好主谓主语句子说明的人或事物,是动作的发出者。那些词可以做主语?这座桥三年前被
23、建。(the bridge;three years ago;build)没人能回答这个问题。(no one;answer this question)The bridge was built three years ago.No one can answer this question.在历史长河中,二十年不过须臾。(twenty years;be;a short time;in history)去乡村旅行可以使我们放松(take a trip to the countryside;make us feel relaxed)他所需要的是一本书(he;need;a book;be)Twenty
24、years is just a short time in history.Taking a trip to the countryside makes us feel relaxed.Twenty years is just a short time in the long course history.What he needs is a book.写英语句子的关键是找好主谓谓语主语的动作(做什么)、状态(怎么样)和特征(是什么)。We study English.I can play the piano.I am talking with my mother.这一数量增长到1500万。(
25、increase to;the number;15 million)这个话题已经成为公众关注的焦点。(public concern;become;the topic)这一趋势将持续。(continue;the trend)翻译练习The number increases to 15million.The topic has become public concern.The trend will continue.大多数人会给家人购买礼物。(buy;their families;most people;gifts)这种培训能够使年轻人发挥潜能。(enable;the training;young people;realize their potential)翻译练习Most people will buy their families gifts.Most people will buy gifts for their families.The training enables young people to realize their potential.THANKS