1、话题话题-Travelling Travelling ExperiencesExperiences 写作训练课写作训练课执教：南宁市兴宁区第一初级中学 陆秋月 2018.3.7Step 1:Look and sayWhats the object of this class?Which is smoother?Passage1 Passage2 The mountain was very high and some of us got tired soon,but all of us were very excited.We cheered happily when we got to the
2、 top.The mountain was very high.Some of us got tired soon.All of us were very excited.We got to the top.We cheered happily.Which is smoother?Passage1 Passage2 The mountain was very high and some of us got tired soon,but all of us were very excited.We cheered happily when we got to the top.The mounta
3、in was very high.Some of us got tired soon.All of us were very excited.We got to the top.We cheered happily.Conjunctions.MustUnderline where,when,who,how,whathow(feelings)Retell On a sunny Saturday,both my students and I enjoyed a wonderful spring outing at Dawangtan.A.I drove to there,while most st
4、udents took a bus.B.I drove there,while most students took a bus.Tip1.No grammar errors On a sunny Saturday,both my students and I enjoyed a wonderful spring outing at Dawangtan.I drove there,while most students took a bus.A.When we got there,we began to prepare for cooking.B.As soon as we got there
5、,we bigan to prepare for cooking.C.As soon as we got there,we began to prepare for cooking.Tip2.No spelling errors On a sunny Saturday,both my students and I enjoyed a wonderful spring outing at Dawangtan.I drove there,while most students took a bus.As soon as we got there,we began to prepare for co
6、oking.A.Two hours later,we were excited,because its the first outdoor lunch for us.B.Two hours later,we were filled with excitement,because its the first lunch for us.Tip3.More advanced phrases/wordsHow to polish your writing?He was worried.He didnt know what to do.He was very worried.He didnt think
7、 about what to do.He was too worried to think about what to do.wordsphrasesstructures On a sunny Saturday,both my students and I enjoyed a wonderful spring outing at Dawangtan.I drove there,while most students took a bus.As soon as we got there,we began to prepare for cooking.Two hours later,we were
8、 filled with excitement,because its the first outdoor lunch for us.1.A.And then,we play games happily on the grass near the stream.playedTip4.Use past tense On a sunny Saturday,both my students and I enjoyed a wonderful spring outing at Dawangtan.I drove there,while most students took a bus.As soon
9、as we got there,we began to prepare for cooking.Two hours later,we were filled with excitement,because its the first lunch for us.And then,we played games happily on the grass near the stream.A.Before nightfall,we had many remaining things,and we packed them.B.Before nightfall,we packed many things
10、that were not used up.Tip5.More complex sentencesOn a sunny Saturday,both my students and I enjoyed a wonderful spring outing at Dawangtan.I drove there,while most students took a bus.As soon as we got there,we began to prepare for cooking.Two hours later,we were filled with excitement,because its t
11、he first lunch for us.And then,we played games happily on the grass near the stream.In the end,we got home safely.What a tired but exciting day!Beginning where who when howBodywhat howEndinghowWhile-writing1.Write one of your own travelling experiences about 80 words.Travelling Experiences2.2.上个周末，你
12、和你的同学游玩了扬美古镇，根据提上个周末，你和你的同学游玩了扬美古镇，根据提示写一篇示写一篇8080字左右的英语游记。字左右的英语游记。1 1）我们带上食品和饮料，乘车一小时就到了目的地。）我们带上食品和饮料，乘车一小时就到了目的地。2 2）认识了一小朋友，把我丢失的钱包拾到并还给了我。）认识了一小朋友，把我丢失的钱包拾到并还给了我。3 3）中午，在邕江边共进了午餐。）中午，在邕江边共进了午餐。4 4）饭后，一起在江边放风筝，傍晚回家。）饭后，一起在江边放风筝，傍晚回家。Post-writingChecklist同伴评价表（16points）Total _After reading my cl
13、assmates travelling experiences,I knowwhere he/she travelled1 point YES/NOwhen he/she got there1 point YES/NOhow he/she got there1 point YES/NOwhat he/she did1 point YES/NOhow he/she felt1 point YES/NOIn my classmates writing,I can find the following features no spelling mistakes2 points YES/NO prop
14、er connecting words2 points YES/NO no grammar errors2 points YES/NO advanced phrases/sentences1 point YES/NO a proper ending2 points YES/NOother advantages you enjoy2 points YES/NOSelf-assessmentASK YOURSELF ONE question:CAN I WRITE a passage about TRAVELLING EXPERIENCE?A man who travels far knows more.Homework1.背诵范文（必做）2.以“My Travelling Experience”为题写一篇80词左右的短文（选作）Summary (小结）小结）What can you learn from this lesson?
