1、写作技巧探究人教版九年级英语中考复习人教版九年级英语中考复习I think he shouldSay sorry to his parentsApologize?Sorry?Communicate with his parentsIt is important for him to He is supposed not to.,because Be harmful to the eyesPlay computer games for a long timeHe had better Study hard He had better(not)I think he should He is sup
2、posed to He is expected to It is important for him to do Ways of giving advice to Frank2015 德阳市中考真题Topic Examining Card 人称 (person)时态(tense)格式(format)字数(words)Step One:Examine the topic(审题）审题）A.The first B.The second C.The thirdA.Simple present tense(一般现在时）A letterAt least 80 wordsB.Simple future te
3、nse(一般将来时）C.Simple past tense(一般过去时）v Dear Frank,v Ive received your letter and I know you argued with your parents.I really worry about you.v I think _v Please be happy and everything will be better.v Yours,v Zhang WeiStep Two:List the structure（结构）（结构）The beginningThe bodyThe endingBeginningAlread
4、y given Body1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；2.打游戏浪费时间、伤害眼睛、不利于学习；3.理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处；4.向父母道歉，与他们沟通；5.不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。EndingAlready givenStep Three:Avoiding Grammar MistakesCan you correct the following sentences?Play computer game is a waste of time.Playing computer games is a waste of time.Let me try!Play computer
5、 games waste time.Playing computer games wastes time.Let me try!He with his friends like to play basketball.Let me try!He with his friends likes to play basketball.Chinglish2.I and my classmates should get along well with each other.My classmates and I should get along well with each other.1.I very
6、like playing basketball.I like playing basketball very much.Step Four:Make the Sentences BeautifulGood wordsI like music.I enjoy music.Good phrasesHe will be happy in the party.He will have a good time in the party.Good sentence patternsLearning how to play the piano is easy for me.Its easy for me t
7、o learn how to play the piano.Translation 1:Playing computer games for a long time is wrong.Parents are right.Translation 2:Its wrong to play computer games for a long time and your parents are right.Translation 3：Your parents are right because its wrong to play computer games for a long time.(best)
8、(good)(better)Group work：How to make sentences beautiful?长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；Translation 1:Playing games wastes time,does harm to the eyes and is not good for your study.Translation 2:Playing games is a waste of time because its not only harmful to the eyes,but also bad for your study.打游
9、戏浪费时间、伤害眼睛、不利于学习打游戏浪费时间、伤害眼睛、不利于学习(good)(better)Discussion：How to make sentences beautiful?Linking wordssentencespassageLinking words（连接词）（连接词）Step Five:Linking words1.表示顺序和递进表示顺序和递进:first(of all),next,after that,then,also,besides,whats more，finally,at last,in the end2.表示并列表示并列:and,not onlybut also,
10、3.表示转折表示转折:but,however4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,sothat,as a result5.表示结论表示结论:all in all,in a word,in my opinion_(表达个人观点）,you should understand your parents,_(原因）its important to get well with them._（递进）,you are supposed to say sorry to your parents and communicate with them._(结果）you had better not play
11、computer games and study harder.Ms Chens advice to FrankIn my opinionBesides/Whats morebecauseSo Post-Task Feedback(当堂反馈当堂反馈)Its time for you to write this compositionWrite Neatly(工整地工整地）2015 德阳市中考真题v Dear Frank,v Ive received your letter and I know you argued with your parents.I really worry about
12、you.I think _v Please be happy and everything will be better.v Yours,v Zhang WeiEvaluation Time!uTense(时态时态)person(人称）人称）format（格式）（格式）uStructure（结构）（结构）&main pointsuLinking wordsuGrammar mistakesuHandwriting(书写书写):Punctuation marks(标点符号标点符号)Big letters and small lettersStep Six:Check Details第一档（13-
13、15分）A信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）B信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）C能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）D只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（1-3分）E只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。中考作文评分中考作文评分(evaluation)标标准准作文作文审审列列连连美美整整检检Examine the topic（审）（审）List the structure and main points(列）列）Linking words(连）连）Make the sentences correct and beautiful(美）美）Self-check(检检)Write neatly（工整）（工整）SummaryPractice makes perfect!
