1、a letter of advice 建议信建议信 U1.Writing Master the organization and language features of the reply letter through finishing some exercise.通过完成一些练习，掌握回信的组织结构和语言特征。通过完成一些练习，掌握回信的组织结构和语言特征。Master how to give advice to others and write a letter about giving advice to someone.掌握如何给予他人意见掌握如何给予他人意见,并写出一封信件。并写
2、出一封信件。Studying Aims Words&phrases1.behaviour 2.generation 3.attract 4.focus 5.addict 6.adult 7.signature 8.be attracted to 9.focus on 10.be addicted to doing sth n.行为行为;举止举止n.一代一代(人人)vt.吸引吸引v.集中集中 n.焦点焦点n.对对入迷的人入迷的人n.成年人成年人 adj.成年的成年的n.签名签名喜爱喜爱,被被.吸引吸引集中注意力集中注意力对对很入迷很入迷attract ones attention/eyes st
3、h be attractive to sb sb be attracted to sth tourists attractions attract vt.吸引；引起的注意（或兴趣）attract(vt)-attractive(adj)-attraction(n)吸引某人的注意力/目光某物吸引某人；对某人有吸引力某人被.所吸引 (强调被动)旅游景点be/become/get addicted to doing sth=addict oneself to doing sth addict vt.使沉迷；使上瘾 n.吸毒成瘾的人；对入迷的人 addict(vt/n)-addition(n)沉迷于（做
4、）某事；对（做）某事上瘾 积累拓展：表示“集中注意力/精力于”的短语：focus on sthconcentrate on sthconcentrate ones attention on sthput ones heart into sthfix ones attention on sthSusan is an adviser for teenagers.Pre-writingShe received a letter asking for some advice.DateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureUnderstand how you feel.Know what
5、the problem is.This is my advice and reason(s).I think my advice will help.Useful ExpressionBodyPara 1ProblemsYou wrote that you are very worried about.I understand quite well that.Para 2SuggestionsI recommend that.I think you should encourage.to.Why not do.?为什么不为什么不.ReasonsIts unusual for.to be att
6、racted to.Spending too much time online is unhealthy.makes it very difficult to focus on.even become addicted to.CloseI am sure.since.Writing建议信是一种生活中常用的应用文文体。建议信是一种生活中常用的应用文文体。建议信建议信目的是为了向收信人提出建议或忠告而写的信。目的是为了向收信人提出建议或忠告而写的信。内容包括：信头内容包括：信头(日期日期)，称呼，正文，结束语和签名。，称呼，正文，结束语和签名。建议信建议信开门见山，说明写信的理由开门见山，说明写信
7、的理由（说明问题、表达理解（说明问题、表达理解/同情）同情）BeginningBody提出自己的建议和理由提出自己的建议和理由Ending希望对方采纳自己的建议希望对方采纳自己的建议l Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.这里有一些建议可以帮助你。这里有一些建议可以帮助你。l Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along well with your classmates.我很高兴收到你的来信，询问我如何与同学好好相处的建议。我很高兴收
8、到你的来信，询问我如何与同学好好相处的建议。l I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。l Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice on 我很高兴能够给你一些关于我很高兴能够给你一些关于.的建议的建议建议信建议信开头开头常用句式：常用句式：建议信建议信正文正文常用句式（过渡句）：常用句式（过渡句）：l When it comes to such a situation,I would l
9、ike to suggest that you should 当遇到这种情况，我会建议你应该当遇到这种情况，我会建议你应该.l I recommend that you should.我建议你应该我建议你应该.l Why not do sth？为什么不做某事呢？为什么不做某事呢？l It would be better/a good idea if you.如果你如果你.会比较好会比较好/会是个好主意会是个好主意建议信建议信结尾结尾常用句式：常用句式：l In the end,I do hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recomme
10、ndations practical/useful/helpful.最后，我真心希望你会觉得这些建议是实用的最后，我真心希望你会觉得这些建议是实用的/有帮助的。有帮助的。l I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.我希望我的建议对你来说是很有帮助的。我希望我的建议对你来说是很有帮助的。l I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议的话如果你能考虑我的建议的话,我会感激不尽的我会感激不尽的.Dear ，I am very
11、 glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about ./I am writing to express my views concerning(有关=on/about）./You have asked me for my advice with regard to(有关)in order to .In my opinion/Personally speaking/As far as I am concerned（在我看来），I highly recommend that./You would be wise to take th
12、e following actions.On the one hand/Firstly/In the first place,（首先）.On the other hand/Secondly/In the second place,（然后）.Besides/In addition/Furthermore,（除此之外）it is unnecessary for you to .Consequently/In a word/In conclusion（总之）,I believe that .I hope that my opinions are of help to you,and please f
13、eel free to contact me for more questions./I am looking forward to your consideration about my proposals(期待你能考虑我的建议).Thanks in advance for that.Yours sincerely,Li Hua建议信必背模板:Writing Task假设你是某中学学生李华，来到中国留学的美国学生假设你是某中学学生李华，来到中国留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助。无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信
14、。内容如下：请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容如下：1.表示理解；表示理解；2.提出提出建议并给出理由建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如：参加学校社团活动，至少三条建议，如：参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)3.希望建议能有所帮助。希望建议能有所帮助。建议信建议信-来到中国留学的美国学生来到中国留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到感到苦闷苦闷，他写信向你求助。你给出建议。，他写信向你求助。你给出建议。1.表示理解；表示理解；2.提出建议并给出理由；提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如：至少三条建议，如：参加学校社团活动
15、，与朋友交流，做些参加学校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等户外活动等)3.希望建议能有所帮助。希望建议能有所帮助。参考词汇参考词汇/短语：短语：无法适应无法适应 在在.有困难有困难 感到苦闷和孤单感到苦闷和孤单 理解理解./很抱歉知道很抱歉知道.参加学校社团活动参加学校社团活动 与朋友交流与朋友交流 做些户外活动做些户外活动 cant adjust to.have trouble in sbs study and life feel upset and lonelyunderstand that./be sorry to know that.join some school clubsco
16、mmunicate with friends do some outdoor activitiesDear Bill，I am sorry to know you are having trouble with your life and study here.However，the situation is easy to change.Now，Id like to give you some advice.Firstly，join some school clubs，where you can make some friends.Secondly，communicate with the people who have the same interest with you.Maybe it can get rid of your loneliness.Thirdly，do some outdoor activities which can make you relaxed.Only by doing all these can you get used to your school life and live happily.Hope my advice can help you.Yours，Li Hu
