1、 WritingAmerican English and British English Book5Module1 中心中学中心中学 陈雨菲陈雨菲 1.take part in English corner2.keep English diaries3.reading on the website Outline of the passage3 parts：Part1:bring up thetopic Part2:my experience about it Part3:summary/writers opinion总总分分总总 假设你是新华中学的学生李华假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在
2、不久前在学校举办的英学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文稿件刊登在英文版面上版面上,介绍介绍你课外学习英语的经验你课外学习英语的经验.请根据以下提示用英请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：语写一篇短文：1参加英语角的益处；参加英语角的益处；2坚持写英语日记的作用；坚持写英语日记的作用；3英文阅读网站对你的帮助。英文阅读网站对你的帮助。注意：注意：1词数：词数：120150；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_2014年高考海南卷英语书面表达题年高考海南卷英语书面表达题 Six steps for writing(
3、写作六步骤）写作六步骤）1.Analyzing the task(审题审题)Main points Style Verb tense Person2.Seizing the key words (抓要点抓要点)3.Arrangement(布局布局)！4.Sentences connection(扩展成句扩展成句)Words/phrases Sentences 6.Error correcting (查错改错查错改错)5.Forming a passage(连句成文）连句成文）Conjunctions/conjunctive adverbssentencespassage Analyzing t
4、he task(审题审题)Style :an outline composition Verb tense:the present tense Person:the first person Arrangement:3 paragraphs Main points:1,2,3（学习探究（学习探究）Discussion:(Work in groups)Discuss with your group members and find more information about the key points.Presentation:express your ideas group by grou
5、p.I am pleased to share my experience about how to learn English well with you Good expressions of the passagePart11.take part in 2.be beneficial to be good for 3.improve my oral English 4.keep English diaries 5.play an important part in 6.improve my writing skills 7.reading on the websites 8.be hel
6、pful to 9.broaden my horizons 10.improve my learning skills Part2Good expressions of the passageSummary/Writers positive idea:1)all in all,All roads lead to Rome 2)if you insist on.,you will.Part3:Good expressions of the passageWhile-writingPlease write the composition by yourselves within 6 minutes
7、.Requirements:1.Use words and expressions written on the blackboard.2.Use correct sentence structures 3.Use linking words between sentences 4.At least three paragraphs;.5.Punctuation and handwritingMark your partners compositionswith A，B,C or D.1.Use words and expressions written on the blackboard.2
8、.Use correct sentence structures 3.Use linking words between sentences 4.At least three paragraphs;.5.Punctuation and handwritingPair work:1.Exchange your composition.2.Read through the composition and mark it with A.B.C or D.3.Correct mistakes.4.Underline good words、phrases and sentences with or co
9、llect them.Read and recite the version As a high school student,I consider English as a very important subject.In order to learn it well,apart from English class,I take an active part in English corner and other afterclass English activities,which benefit me a lot.In the English corner,I meet many f
10、riends,who share the same interest with me.Besides,sometimes,some foreigners are glad to join us.By talking with them,my oral English improved a lot.I also find it useful to keep English diaries.I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English.As a saying goes,practice makes perfect.On
11、ly by practice will we make more progress.Finally,some good English reading websites contribute a lot to my improvement.Through these websites,I can read some classic English passages,poems and stories.Whats more,I can learn some learning skills,which play an important part in my study process.All i
12、n all,every road leads to Rome,but I believe hard work pays off.More Writing Skills:1.Use more advanced vocabularies.2.Use more abundant sentence patterns.3.Use appropriate connection words.(1)为了学好英语，除了英语课之外，为了学好英语，除了英语课之外，我还参加我还参加英语角和其他课外英语活动，英语角和其他课外英语活动，这对我很有益。这对我很有益。使用定语从句和分词：使用定语从句和分词：In order
13、to learn English well,_English class,I took an active part in English corner and other after-school Englishactivities,_ benefit me a lot.To learn English well,I took part in English corner and other after-school English activities besides English class,_ me a lot.apart fromwhichbenefiting(2)在英语角上在英语
14、角上,我遇到许多朋友我遇到许多朋友,他们与他们与我兴趣我兴趣相同。相同。使用定语从句和分词：使用定语从句和分词：In the English corner,I meet many friends，_ share the same interest with me._ the English corner,I meet many friends _ the same interest with me.whoAttendingsharing(3)我觉得记英语日记很有用。我觉得记英语日记很有用。使用使用it句式：句式：I find _ useful to keep English diaries.I
15、 find(that)_ keep English diaries.itit is useful for me to(4)最后最后,英语阅读网站对我英语的提高起到英语阅读网站对我英语的提高起到了很大的作用。了很大的作用。使用高级词汇和短语使用高级词汇和短语:Finally,some good English reading websitescontribute a lot to my improvement.Finally,English reading websites have played a great role in the improvement of my English.(5)
16、在网站上，我能看一些经典的短文、在网站上，我能看一些经典的短文、诗歌和故事。我能学习一些学习技巧。诗歌和故事。我能学习一些学习技巧。使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词:Through these websites,I can read some classic English passages,poems and stories._,I can learn some learning skills.Whats moreSummaryThe way of writing an outline composition:Analyzing the taskdecide the key words of
17、 each main pointput the words into sentencesput the sentences into a passageimprove the whole passage.一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：1、它是中国传统节日之一；2、家人团聚；3、赏月、吃月饼、4、还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；3.开头语已您写好，不计入总词数。开头语已您写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中秋节:the MidAutumn Festival 农历:lunar calendar 赏月:enjoy the full moon 月饼:moon cake
