1、Welcome to our class!学习如农耕学习如农耕 我们如农夫我们如农夫一份耕耘，一分收获一份耕耘，一分收获 If you plant a good seed in spring,you will have a good harvest in autumn.How to make a good sentence一、采用句型转换一、采用句型转换A、把简单句结合为简单句型、把简单句结合为简单句型例如，用并列连词例如，用并列连词He is a teacher.She is also a teacher.Not only he but also she is a teacher.用状语从句
2、结合用状语从句结合 I got up so early.I caught the early bus.I got up so early that I caught the early bus.二、采用变换句式用It作形式主语To learn English well is important.It is important to learn English well.用倒装句I can achieve my dream only then.Only then can I achieve my dream.三、采用固定短语三、采用固定短语1.He likes playing football.
3、2.He is interested in playing football.Step 1:审。审。仔细读题仔细读题,明确写作体裁、明确写作体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求。人称、时态、提示和要求。具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画或写下以上要点用笔勾画或写下以上要点。Step2:列。列。列出写作提纲，不要遗漏列出写作提纲，不要遗漏要点。要点。具体做法：具体做法：根据内容用要点词根据内容用要点词汇和恰当句型整理写作要点。汇和恰当句型整理写作要点。Step3:连。连。运用正确人称及关联词句运用正确人称及关联词句连句成文，力求层次清晰，衔接自然连句成文，力求层次清晰，衔接自然Step4:查。查。通读短文，检
4、查订正。通读短文，检查订正。How to write a good article?Yesterday,Tony and Anna were on their way home.Tony and Anna talked happily.An old woman walked in front of them.She carried a basket of apples.talk walk carry(yesterday)Key words:Key words:fall downrun everywhereShe fell down and the apples ran everywhere.K
5、ey words:pick uphelp stand upTony helped her to stand up and Anna picked up the apples.Key words:help carrygo homesayAnna helped the old woman carry theapples.They helped her to go home.The old woman said,“Thanks a lot.”We need an outline(提纲):1.talk happily,walk,carry 2.fall down,run everywhere3.hel
6、p.stand up,pick up4.helpcarry go home Yesterday,Tony and Anna were on their way home.They talked happily.An old woman walked in front of them.She carried a basket of apples.Suddenly,the old woman fell down and the apples ran everywhere.Tony helped her to stand up and Anna picked the apples up.Then A
7、nna helped the old woman carry the apples and they helped her to go home The old woman was very thankful.How happy they were！邮递员的一天邮递员的一天根据汉语提示，记叙一个邮递员Mr.Smith的一天：7:30 起床 刷牙洗脸 8:15 跟家人告别 公交车没赶上 一天的辛苦工作4:00 回家 7:30 起床 刷牙洗脸 8:15 跟家人告别 公交车没赶上 一天的辛苦工作 4:00 回家Key words:get up say goodbyenot catch/misswor
8、k hardgo home/return homebrush/wash邮递员的一天邮递员的一天How many mistakes can youfind in this composition?In a Monday morning,Mr.Smith got upat seven thirty and put up the clothes.He wished his face and brushed his tooth.It was a querter past eight.He said good-bye to his wife.He didnt catch the busbecause t
9、here were many people sat on the bus.He ran to work,he gave the letters to the people who waited forthem.He goes home at four.He weretired,but he was happy.Ononwashedteethquarterwassitting或去掉或去掉andwentIt was seven thirty yesterday morning.Mr.Smith got up.He washed his face and brushed his teeth.At e
10、ight fifteen,he said goodbye to his family.Then he went to the bus stop.But when he gotthere,the bus had gone.So he had to walk to the post office.He worked very hard.At four,he came back home.简洁明了型：简洁明了型：Mr.Smith got up at half past seven on a Monday morning.After breakfast,he said goodbye to his f
11、amily and left home.Unluckily,by the time he arrived at the bus stop,the bus had already gone.So he had to walk to the post office and got letters which he should send.In the daytime,he was busy sending letters and newspapers from house to house.He didnt return home until four oclock.He was tired but happy.难度较大：1.多用简单句，注意时态语态多用简单句，注意时态语态2.化难为易，化繁为简化难为易，化繁为简3.此路不通，绕道迂回此路不通，绕道迂回4.字迹工整，卷面整洁字迹工整，卷面整洁 Gold tips(金点子):
