1、1.介绍地理位置（介绍地理位置（Location）be located in.lie in stands at the foot of/on the top of坐落于坐落于脚下脚下/顶部顶部Be surrounded by被被围绕着围绕着 常用词语常用词语north，south，east，west东南方：东南方：西南方：西南方：西北方：西北方：东北方：东北方：左右：左右：On the left/right方位词方位词 southeast southwestnorthwest northeastA在在B的范围之内时用的范围之内时用A lies in the east of B“A在在B的范围之
2、外，且相隔有一定的距离，的范围之外，且相隔有一定的距离，A lies to the east of B A与与B相邻接。用相邻接。用A lies on the east of B.1.1.日本在中国的东方。日本在中国的东方。2.2.新教学坐落在学校的中央。新教学坐落在学校的中央。翻译翻译Japan is/lies to the east of China.The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.3.3.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。的国家之一。China,located/ly
3、ing in the east of Asia,is one of largest countries in the world.2.介绍面积（介绍面积（Area）has/covers an area ofsquare kilometers（a city）with an area ofsquare kilometers它是一个面积它是一个面积100100多平方公里城镇。多平方公里城镇。Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖常年有冰雪覆盖 Antarctica,i
4、s the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica,is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达which is covered with coldthick ice and deep snow all（the)year round,the coldest continent in the world,3*语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips 夏天几乎不下雨，夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来但一下起来就很大。就很大
5、。It hardly ever rain in summer _it rains heavily.2.运用非谓语动词和运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表达结构优化句子表达我的家乡位于中国广东，我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港毗邻香港My hometown,_ is located in Guangdong Province of China.but whenever it does,neighboring Hong Kong,使用状语从句优化句子表达使用状语从句优化句子表达4 My Dream House 写作内容写作内容写作要涉及位置，面积，设施以及房子的附属物。字写作要涉及位置，面积，设
6、施以及房子的附属物。字数要求数要求100左右。左右。位置位置Be situated/lie/located in,by the side of,neighbor on,near附属附属Balcony,front/back yard,garden,swimming pool面积面积Take up/cover an area ofsquare kilometers.设施设施Be equipped with modern equipment,such as security alarms安全警报安全警报 controlled by computers,vision phones可视电话可视电话,au
7、tomatic doors and lifts.自动电梯自动电梯和门和门连接词连接词/句型句型So that(could),however,for example,as well as,in conclusion地点描写地点描写Read the passage and find out information about each ParaPara 2 location,facilitiesPara 3 timetable Para 4 after-school activitiesnAddition:also another thing,as well asnExample:for exam
8、ple,such asnConclusion:in conclusionnContrast:but,howevernPurpose:so thatnHow to write your ideal schoollocationfacilitiestimetableSchoolAfter-school activities基础写作技巧指导基础写作技巧指导Suppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists,what subjects(主题）主题）will you introduce?locationpopulationareahistory
9、culturelivingconditionseducationeconomya placePossible subjects：1.介绍地理位置（介绍地理位置（Location）be located in.lie in stands at the foot of/on the top of坐落于坐落于脚下脚下/顶部顶部Be surrounded by被被围绕着围绕着 常用词语常用词语north，south，east，west东南方：东南方：西南方：西南方：西北方：西北方：东北方：东北方：左右：左右：On the left/right方位词方位词 southeast southwestnorth
10、west northeastA在在B的范围之内时用的范围之内时用A lies in the east of B“A在在B的范围之外，且相隔有一定的距离，的范围之外，且相隔有一定的距离，A lies to the east of B A与与B相邻接。用相邻接。用A lies on the east of B.1.1.日本在中国的东方。日本在中国的东方。2.2.新教学坐落在学校的中央。新教学坐落在学校的中央。翻译翻译Japan is/lies to the east of China.The new teaching building lies in the center of the schoo
11、l.3.3.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。的国家之一。China,located/lying in the east of Asia,is one of largest countries in the world.2.介绍人口（介绍人口（Population）:has a population of,（a city）with a population of北京是中国的首都，是一个有北京是中国的首都，是一个有12001200多万人多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）口的大城市。（用一句话）Beijing,the capital of China,is a l
12、arge city with a population of over 12,000,000.3.介绍面积（介绍面积（Area）has/covers an area ofsquare kilometers（a city）with an area ofsquare kilometers它是一个面积它是一个面积100100多平方公里城镇。多平方公里城镇。Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers4.介绍历史（介绍历史（History）:has a long history(of years)with a long history(of
13、 years)历史悠久历史悠久它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。It is a modern city with a long history.5.环境气候环境气候 With green hills and beautiful rivers,the climate varies from place to place.6.物产物产/特色特色 be rich in=be abundant in;be famous/known for;7.名胜景观名胜景观 a place with many tourists attractions;places of inter
14、est;mountainous area.8.表示表示“是是.之乡之乡/发源地发源地/所在地所在地”This region is the home of many species of wild flower.这一地区是多种野花的家园。这一地区是多种野花的家园。The Rockies are home to some bears.（是（是的家园的家园）落基山脉中有熊生长。落基山脉中有熊生长。9.表示表示“有有美誉美誉”This area enjoys the reputation of a land with milk and honey.（富饶之地（富饶之地，富饶的乐土，富饶的乐土）这个地方
15、有这个地方有“鱼米之乡鱼米之乡”的美誉的美誉。Xiamen with its verdant hills and its mild climate is widely known as the Garden in the Sea.厦门的青山秀丽，气候温和，有厦门的青山秀丽，气候温和，有“海上花园海上花园”的美称。的美称。威尼斯（威尼斯（Venice）介绍介绍 写作内容写作内容请根据下列表格中所提供的信息，写一篇五句话的短请根据下列表格中所提供的信息，写一篇五句话的短文介绍意大利港口城市文介绍意大利港口城市-威尼斯的基本情况。威尼斯的基本情况。位置位置意大利意大利东北部东北部,港口城市。港口城市
16、。人口人口将近将近7万人。万人。历史历史有有七百多年历史七百多年历史，最初由一群难民在一，最初由一群难民在一座小岛上定居。座小岛上定居。著名旅游景点著名旅游景点大运河，总督府，叹息桥等。大运河，总督府，叹息桥等。特色特色四面环海，拥有四面环海，拥有“水城水城”的美称。的美称。参考的词汇：参考的词汇：难民难民 refugee 大运河大运河 the Grand Canal;总督府：总督府：the Governor House;叹息桥叹息桥:the Bridge of Sighs;步骤(5 steps)n认真审题认真审题(Read the topic carefully)n整合信息整合信息(Find
17、 out the key points and organize the messages in 5 sentences)n翻译句子翻译句子(Think of the words,phrases and sentence structures you may use in writing and make up some sentences)n组句成篇（润色）组句成篇（润色）Add some conjunctions(连接词连接词)if needed.n检查修改检查修改(adding and revising)1.Venice,a port/harbor city,is located in
18、the northeast of Italy.2.It/The city/Venice has a population of nearly/approximately 70,000.3.It/The city/Venice has a history of 700 years.4.Initially a group of refugees settled on a small island.5.Venice has many famous tourist attractions,such as the Grand Canal,the Governor House,the Bridge of
19、Sighs and so on.6.It/The city/Venice is surrounded by the sea.7.It enjoys/has the reputation of“the City on Water”.Venice has a history of 700 years,and initially a group of refugees settled on a small island.With a history of 700 years,initially a group of refugees settled on a small island.The his
20、tory of the city goes back over 700 years(追溯到七百多年以前)when a group of refugees settled on a small island earliest.As it is surrounded by the sea,it enjoys/has the reputation of“the City on Water”.As it is surrounded by the sea,it is widely known as“the City on Water”.Surrounded by the sea,it enjoys/ha
21、s the reputation of“the City on Water”.定语从句定语从句with 结构结构并列句并列句原因状语从句原因状语从句非谓语短语做原因状语非谓语短语做原因状语Venice,located in the northeast of Italy,is the main port city of Italy.It has a population of nearly 70,000.The history of the city goes back over 700 years when a group of refugees settled on a small isla
22、nd earliest.Venice has many famous tourist attractions,such as the Grand Canal,the Governor House,the Bridge of Sighs and so on.The city is surrounded by the sea so it is called“the City on Water”.located in the northeast of Italy has a population of The history of the city goes back over 700 yearst
23、ourist attractions such as写作要求：写作要求：1.1.短文标题自拟短文标题自拟2 2必须使用个句子介绍全部所给的内必须使用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；容；3 3将个句子组织成连贯的短文将个句子组织成连贯的短文基础写作-情景说明西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。解放后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。解放后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。人口人口约约10万万面积面积约约126平方公里平方公里地理概括地理概括坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校大河，新建
24、有许多工厂商店、医院学校教育状况教育状况解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学，现在有学，现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；生活状况生活状况人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等参加体育活动等List the important points out:解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。西山镇的人口约西山镇的人口约1010万；万；Since liberation great changes have taken place in peo
25、ples lifeXishan town has a population of aboutThe population of Xishan town is about 100,000.面积约面积约126126平方公里平方公里nIt covers/has an area of about126 square kilometers.nThe size of it is about 126 square kilometers.坐落在粤北一座山脚下，面临一条大河坐落在粤北一座山脚下，面临一条大河nXishan town is located at the foot of a mountain of
26、North Guangdong Province and faces a big river.nXishan town is located/stands at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校nMany factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built/set up.Lets share!解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。解放前只
27、有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。现在有现在有1010所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等加体育活动等Now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancing and
28、 have sports.用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句子用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句子结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文n1.Xishan town is a small town,_ is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.whichLets try!2.Xishan town has a population of about 100,00
29、0 _ covers an area of about 126 square kilometers.Xishan town,_ an area of about 126 square kilometers,has a population of.Xishan town covers an area of about 126 square kilometers_100,000.andcoveringwith a population of多种表达法灵活表达多种表达法灵活表达3.Before liberation,people there lived a hard life _ since lib
30、eration great changes have taken place_ many factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built.butand now4.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families_ now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.5.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancin
31、g and have sports.butOne possible version:1.Xishan town is a small town,which is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.It has a population of about 100,000 and covers an area of about 126 square kilometers.Before liberation,people there li
32、ved a hard life but great changes have taken place since liberation and now many factories,shops,hospitals and schools have been built.The school education has also improved,for example,before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families,but now there are 10 schools and ev
33、ery child can go to school.After work people go shopping,see films,go dancing and have sports.南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖常年有冰雪覆盖 Antarctica,is the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica,is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达which is co
34、vered with coldthick ice and deep snow all（the)year round,the coldest continent in the world,*语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips 夏天几乎不下雨，夏天几乎不下雨，但一下起来但一下起来就很大。就很大。It hardly ever rain in summer _it rains heavily.2.运用非谓语动词和运用非谓语动词和with结构优化句子表达结构优化句子表达我的家乡位于中国广东，我的家乡位于中国广东，毗邻香港毗邻香港My hometown,_ is located in Guangdong
35、 Province of China.but whenever it does,neighboring Hong Kong,使用状语从句优化句子表达使用状语从句优化句子表达你的一位网友向你了解你的家乡广州,请根据以下提示介绍广州.n1.广州地处广东省中部,面积7434.4平方公里,人口约1000万,是广东的省会,是一座有两千二百多年文明的历史的古城。n3.广州一年四季如春，繁花似锦，故有“花城”之美育。n4.广州正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的海外游客。审题初稿n文章体裁文章体裁n中心人称中心人称n主体时态主体时态n语言表达语言表达n句子分配句子分配n文章连贯文章连贯n修饰润色修饰润色n说明文
36、n第三人称n一般现在时濒临中国南海，毗邻香港和澳门 nGuangzhou is on the South China Sea.nHong Kong is to the southeast of Guangzhou.nMacau is to the south of Guangzhou.Guangzhou,with the history of 2800years,is known as“the flower city”,which is the birth place of“the silk roadon sea”in ancient China.It has a population of
37、10 millionand the area of 7434.4 square kilometers.Guangzhou lies on the south China sea,withHongKong to the Southeast and Macao to the South.It is rich intravelling resources,such as the famous“eight scenery of YangCheng”.Tourists from home and abroad areattracted to Guangzhou by its beautiful scen
38、ery.Guangzhou,the third largest city in China,also known as City of Flowers,serves as the capital city of Guangdong and the centre of its political,economic,scientific,educational,and cultural life.Covering an area of 7434.4 square kilometers,it is home to more than 11 million people.Located in the
39、middle of Guangdong,north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city,Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate.Besides,it is a famous city with a history of more than 2,200 years and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road.With its beautiful scenery,Guangzhou is also abundant in traveling resources.
