1、议论文概要写作指导议论文概要写作指导However,proper rules are needed on who can collect facial information and what constitutes proper use.While it is reasonable for law enforcement purposes,facial features are sensitive personal information,as Guo said,and can jeopardize（危害）consumers safety if leaked.Try to rewrite t
2、he following passage in less than ten words.Rules are needed to collect and use facial information properly.(10 words)Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.Four-day WorkweekIn the United States,employees typically w
3、ork five days a week for eight hours each day.However,many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so.If a law required companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths(80 percent)of their normal pay,it woul
4、d benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.Step OneRead the passage and complete the table.PartFunctionI.Para._II.Para._ 12To introduce the topic and the writers viewpointTo present the arguments to support the writers viewpo
5、intStep TwoRead the title and the first paragraph and then answer the following questions.1.What is the topic of the passage?Many employees want to work a four-day week with less pay.2.Is the writer for or against the idea?What is the writers viewpoint?For the idea.A four-day workweek with less pay
6、will benefit the individual companies,the economy as a whole as well as the employees who decide to take the option.010203Read paragraphs 2 to 4 and find out the supporting points.Step ThreeSupporting pointSupporting pointCompanies will company profits.For the country as a whole,one of unemployment
7、rates.Supporting pointEmployees who can afford a lower salary their lives.Step FourWrite a topic sentence for the summary.1.Brainstorm:What expressions can we use to start a summary of an argumentative essay?2.Find out the key information(the most important nouns,noun phrases and verbs)of the writer
8、s viewpoint.3.Write down your topic sentence for the summary with the key information and proper phrases.Topic sentence:_Step FiveSummarize supporting points 1,2 and 3 on your own and then share them with others.Step Six Add transitional words between sentences and complete the first draft.Step Seve
9、nChecklistDoes this summary begin with a topic sentence that states the writers opinion clearly?Does this summary include the writers main points?Is it written in his/her won words?Are proper transitional words used?Are there any mistakes in spelling,grammar and punctuation?How to improve your langu
10、age?1.Change the parts of speech.2.Make long sentences into shorter ones.it would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.be beneficial at three levelscompanies would have fewer overworked and error-prone(容易出错的容易出错的)employee
11、s for the same money3.Use synonyms or synonymous phrasesat the same cost Possible VersionThe passage indicates that working for four days a week with less pay will be beneficial at three levels.First,companies can hire more energetic and alert employees at the same cost.Second,the country will have
12、lower unemployment rates with more people at work.Finally,employees will live a better life with more free time.1.Divide the passage into parts.2.Find out the writers viewpoint and the topic.3.Find out the supporting points.4.Summarize what you have found out in your own words.5.Revise your draft wi
13、th the checklist.议论文类型的文章通常包括论点、论据和结论三部分，其关键是找出主题句或议论文类型的文章通常包括论点、论据和结论三部分，其关键是找出主题句或结论句。因此写议论文的概要主要是找出主题句、支撑句和结论句。若文中有一分结论句。因此写议论文的概要主要是找出主题句、支撑句和结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点的，两种观点都要概括，不要漏掉其中一方的观点。为二的观点的，两种观点都要概括，不要漏掉其中一方的观点。概要模板：论点论据概要模板：论点论据结论结论议论文可用以下开头语：议论文可用以下开头语：The passage/author argues that.本文本文/作者主作者主张
14、张The passage/author highlights the importance of.本文本文/作者强调了作者强调了的重要性。的重要性。The passage/author discusses the impact of.本文本文/作者讨论了作者讨论了的影响。的影响。The passage/author compares.with.本文本文/作者比较了作者比较了与与议论文概要写作的议论文概要写作的应试技巧应试技巧Characteristics of a good summaryBrief:Omit unnecessary details like examples,explanat
15、ions and other unimportant information.Complete:Include all the main and supporting points delivered in your own words in a condensed（精简的）manner.Accurate:Give the same attention and stress to the points as the author does.Coherent:（有条理的）Rather than an outline listed as key words and phrases,a summar
16、y is a paragraph with necessary transitions and function structures to make it flow.Objective:Do not include your own ideas or emotions on the topic.The summary should reflect the content of the original passage only.Who has the power to collect my face information?GUO BING,AN ASSOCIATE PROFESSOR of
17、 law at Zhejiang Sci-Tech University,has sued a local safari park because it requires members to mandatorily enter via a facial recognition lane.China Daily writer Zhang Zhouxiang comments:Guo sued the park for compulsorily collecting biological information after it upgraded its system to use facial
18、 recognition for admission,arguing that it was violating Chinas consumer protection law by compulsorily collecting individual facial characteristics of visitors.The lawsuit has already been accepted by a local court,becoming the first court case involving the use of facial recognition in China.Yet t
19、he safari park is neither the first commercial company to collect facial information nor is Guo the first person to have his facial information collected.For years,many gyms,office buildings,even zoos have installed facial recognition devices at their entrances.The advantage they list is always the
20、same:convenience.With facial recognition,each member can easily pass within one second.With facial recognition,the organization can easily store the information of members and match them with its database to know who is who,and provide tailored services if they want.Summarize the passage in no more
21、than 60 words.Homework:However,there are also disadvantages and risks.Where is all the facial information stored?Is it secure?Is the organization collecting the information trustworthy or is there the possibility it may sell facial information to an illegal profit chain?All these questions are there
22、,waiting for an answer.That does not mean that facial recognition technology should be forbidden,as like any technology,whether it is harmful or not depends on how it is used.However,proper rules are needed on who can collect facial information and what constitutes proper use.While it is reasonable
23、for law enforcement purposes,facial features are sensitive personal information,as Guo said,and can jeopardize consumers safety if leaked.The organizations that collect and store human facial information must be regulated.It goes too far to allow commercial companies,such as the zoo in this instance,to freely collect facial information and use it at will.（From China Daily 2019.11.5）
