1、 高考书面表达专题训练（一）看图作文如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）连接词Practice 1.Connect the following sentences with the conjunctions in brackets(用括号中的连词将每组句子连到一起。)1.I didnt know the way to my hotel.I asked a porter.(so)I didnt know the way to my hotel,so I asked a porter
2、.2.I spoke English very carefully.I spoke very clearly.(not onlybut also)I spoke English not only very carefully but also very clearly.3.I repeated my question several times.At last he understood.(and)I repeated my question several times and at last he understood4.He answered me.He did not speak slo
3、wly.He did not speak clearly.(butneithernor).He answered me,but he spoke neither slowlynor clearly.5.In the evening Mr Brown likes reading newspapers.In the evening his wife often watches TV.(while)In the evening Mr Brown likes reading newspapers,while his wife often watches TV.书面表达历年分值与要求时 间分 值词 数题
4、 材 内 容NMET199425/150约100词广播通知；通知参加欢迎美国朋友的晚会NMET199525/15080-100看图；给Peter信，指明野餐（picnic）道路NMET199630/150100左右看表格；介绍自己基本情况，书写申请NMET199730/150100左右看图；六图；违反交通法规，被惩罚值勤NMET199830/150100左右看图；六图；参观农场，写日记NMET199930/150100左右看图；二图；写信分析学校三年变化NMET200030/150100左右看图；目击交通事故，警察局里写报告NMET200125/150100左右看表格；介绍学校减负前后的变化（
5、书信）NMET200225/150100左右看表格；介绍学生对公园收门票的讨论NMET200325/150100左右看图;二图；为朋友找住房，介绍房间特征NMET2004（湖南省）25/150100左右看图：两图；城市与乡村生活环境的对比看图作文如何写？看图作文如何写？五个步骤1、审题、审题文字信息文字信息图画信息图画信息人称、时态、人称、时态、要点要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。的词语扩展成句子。4、联句成文：、联句
6、成文：注意：注意：句子结构完整句子结构完整逻辑关系，正确使用联接词逻辑关系，正确使用联接词句型多样化，避免呆板直译，汉式英语句型多样化，避免呆板直译，汉式英语开头与结尾开头与结尾5、检查修改，规范抄写、检查修改，规范抄写练习2 根据右边六幅图的提示，寻找要点第六页审审 题题1、体裁：记叙文体，叙述一男孩浪费水，另一男孩提醒别人爱惜水的过程。2、主要时态：一般过去时3、人称：第三人称Xiao Ming 和Xiao Long 4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住五个要点：时间、地 点、人物、事件的前后经过、事情的结果。练习2 根据右边六幅图的提示，寻找要点第六页Comment on the former
7、composition:One day after school,Xiao Ming turned on a tap and splashed water here and there.At this moment,Xiao Long hapened to pass by.Xiao Ming splashed him with water and made him all wet.Xiao Ming ran away without turning off the tap.When Xiao Long saw this,he went over and turned off the water
8、.He angry because he thinks water shouldnt be wasted.Then he went home and wrote a notice.He put it up on the wall near the tap.After some time,Xiao Ming went back and looked the notice.He felt sorry for what he had done.2 加was3 thought4 which read“Save water”.5 sawAttention:1单词拼写要正确3时态语态要准确2句子结构要完整
9、5词语运用要无误4短文要点要完整1.改为happened练习3，假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生，暑假打算去乡村度假。请根据下面两幅画提供的信息，写一篇短文。简要说明城市生活环境的不足，重点说明你去乡村度假的原因。注意：1.短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整。2。词数：100左右。审题：1、人称：第一人称2、主要时态：一般现在时3、抓要点：3、抓要点：1）.暑假去乡村，度假2.）城市生活环境的不足 1）拥挤（交通、人、住房）2）空气污染3）噪音3）.乡村环境的优美（空气、树、水、阳光、动物、农舍）4.）乡村生活的乐趣(钓鱼、爬山、游泳、划船、摘果子、放牛、散步）
10、5.）结尾One Possible Version I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside.Although the city is modern and convenient,there are still some problems,such as air pollution,crowdedness and noise.In the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life.There,the air is fresh and the water is clean
11、.Trees are green and birds are singing.I can also go boating,fishing and swimming in the lake.Whats more,I can climb the hills.All this will be interesting and good for my health.Above all,I can learn more about nature.So I want to go to the countryside for a change.Im looking forward to coming of m
12、y summer holiday.练习4，假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在的城市的新建华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房，请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1.词数：100左右。2.参考词汇：房租rent(n.)Dear Bob,Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Ive found a place for you.Its a small flat of 25 square meters with a bedroom,a bathroom an
13、d a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.The rent is 500 yuan per month.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school.In fact,its only one stop.Do you think youd like it?If not,I can t
14、ry and find another place for you.Just let me know.策略：策略：1、平时多写。、平时多写。2、及时更正错误，避免再犯。、及时更正错误，避免再犯。3、注重积累单词、词组、固定短语、注重积累单词、词组、固定短语、常用句型。常用句型。4、多背诵模仿。、多背诵模仿。Maybe the following advice will do good to you.未完待续补充：1、次重点：“内容要点”中涵盖的内容2、大错：句子结构谓语构成词序语态时态3、小错：名词单复数第三人称单数拼写标点符号字母大小写介词、冠次词等小词少量错误：1个大错或34个小错一些错误
15、：2个大错或56个小错较多错误：3个大错或78个小错错误多：4个大错或910个小错错误很多：5个大错或10个以上小错如在整篇文章一致使用与过去时间相关的时态，尽量不予扣分；如果混合使用，可酌情扣分记住这些使文章层次清晰，行文连贯的关联词，并在写作中学习使用。1.表示平行、对等或选择关系and,bothand,as well as.Neithernor,also,not onlybut also2.表示转折关系But,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),in spite of(尽管仍),although,otherwise,while3.表示对比关系On the contr
16、ary,instead of,on the one handon the other hand,just like,unlike(不象)4.表示因果关系So,for,therefore,as a result,because,owing to,due to,thanks to,on account of(=because of)5.表示时间关系In the past,now,at present,in the future,in the end,shortly after(不久之后）6.表示顺序关系Firstsecond,then,next,finally,for one thing;for
17、another thing7.表示递进、强调关系Besides,furthermore（而且，此外）,in addition,moreover,whats more，worse still,above all,certainly important of all,to make matters worse8.表示解释、说明关系 namely,actually,such as,for exampleinstance,that is to say,in other words,and so on,to tell you the truth,according to this9.表示结论 in sh
18、ort,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,as far as I know,on the wholePractice 2Do you think the following passage is a good one?Why or why not?Zhao Gang got some fireworks and was going to set them off on the New Years Eve.This happened to be seen by his classmate,Wu Li.She told him that it wa
19、s not allowed to set off fireworks in Beijing.But Zhao Gang thought it was the Spring Festival and he could enjoy himself for a while.So Wu Li showed him some picture posters and explained that setting off fireworks might cause pollution and big fires.The worse to happen was that it would do serious
20、 harm to peoples eyes.Having heard this,Zhao Gang agreed with Wu Li.He threw his fireworks away.Zhao Gang got some fireworks and was going to set them off on the New Years Eve.This happened to be seen by his classmate,Wu Li.She told him that it was not allowed to set off fireworks in Beijing.But Zha
21、o Gang thought it was the Spring Festival and he could enjoy himself for a while.So Wu Li showed him some picture posters and explained that setting off fireworks might cause pollution and big fires.The worse to happen was that it would do serious harm to peoples eyes.Having heard this,Zhao Gang agreed with Wu Li.He threw his fireworks away.一、要点齐全1.赵刚正要在除夕之夜 放鞭炮2.吴莉看见了并上前阻止3.吴莉给赵刚看宣传画4.放鞭炮的三个危害（引发火灾、造成污染、炸伤身体）5.赵刚同意不再放鞭炮了二、注意点：1.体裁：记叙文 2.人称：第三人称（赵刚 吴莉）3.时态：过去时 4.有效使用连接词使内容连贯、完整同学
