1、写作素养提升练写作素养提升练人教版八年级上人教版八年级上Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show?电视是传播文化娱乐的载体。如今它已经与人们的生活息息相关,众多的电视剧、新闻、电影、体育、娱乐节目既丰富了人们的生活,又开阔了人们的视野。同学们,你们喜欢什么节目呢?人教版八年级上人教版八年级上你最近看了电影奇迹男孩(Wonder)后深受感动,准备写一篇英语影评,向其他网友推荐这部电影。请你根据提示及要求,完成写作。剧情:电影讲述了小男孩Auggie 的故事。Auggie 天生面部缺陷(born with a facial deformity),他出门前不得不
2、装扮成宇航员(astronaut)的样子。他刚入校时,一些同学嘲笑他,但是在家人、老师以及朋友的帮助下,他最终变得自信(confident)起来,成为一个优秀的孩子。观后感:演员们都演得非常好;电影表现了家人、朋友对Auggie 的爱。1.谋篇布局:理清文章要素,构建文章结构。谋篇布局:理清文章要素,构建文章结构。介绍一部电影影片名称、类型及总述wonderful,educational,touch,unlucky,born with a facial deformity剧情简介dress up,astronaut,laugh at,with the help of,confident,gro
3、w up,excellent观后感do a good job,show,love2.遣词造句遣词造句:就结构图中的要点写出句子。就结构图中的要点写出句子。(1)奇迹男孩是一部精彩、有教育意义的电影,它深深地打动了我。Wonder is a _ and _ movie.It _ _ _ deeply.(2)Auggie 是一个不幸的男孩,他天生面部缺陷。Auggie is an _ boy.He was _ _ a facial deformity.wonderful educationaltouches my heartunlucky bornwith(3)他出门时都得装扮成宇航员的样子。He
4、 has to _ _ _ an astronaut when he goes out.(4)他第一次上学时,他的一些同学嘲笑他。When he goes to school for the first time,some of his classmates _ _ _.dress up likelaugh at him(5)在他的家人、老师和朋友们的帮助下,他变得自信起来。_ _ _ of his family,teachers and friends,he _ _.(6)他成为一个优秀的男孩。He _ _ to be an _ boy.With the helpbecomes confid
5、entgrows up excellent3.巧妙衔接:利用连词,使句子意思连贯。巧妙衔接:利用连词,使句子意思连贯。巧妙衔接:利用连词,使句子意思连贯。本文中,在叙述剧情时用一些表示时间过渡的词语来体现故事的脉络,比如when,at last 等,以及用however 来表示转折,使文章衔接自然、流畅。4.连连句成句成篇:篇:_【范文赏析范文赏析】Wonder is a wonderful and educational movie.It touches my heart deeply.The movie is about an unlucky boy Auggie.He was born
6、with a facial deformity.He has to dress up like an astronaut when he goes out.When he goes to school for the first time,some of his classmates laugh at him.However,with the help of his family,teachers and friends,he becomes confident and grows up to be an excellent boy.I think all of the actors do a
7、 good job.The movie also shows us the love for Auggie from his family and friends.假如你叫李华。英语老师给同学们布置了一项任务,要求大家写一篇电影观后感。请你根据以下表格提示,完成英语作业。名称狮子王(The Lion King)类型卡通电影剧情Simba 的爸爸原来是国王,但是他的叔叔Scar想要取代他爸爸的位置,杀死了他的爸爸。当Simba 长大后,他返回森林与他的叔叔进行斗争。最终他赢了,成为了真正的国王。你的评价 Simba 很勇敢;剧情非常精彩。要求:不少于80 词;语句连贯,条理清晰。参考词汇:pri
8、nce of the forest 森林王子;have a bigfight with sb.与某人激烈地斗争_The Lion King is a cartoon movie.Its one of the most popular English movies in the world.The movie is about a young lion,Simba.He was the prince of the forest.But his uncle Scar wanted to be the king.So he killed Simbas father.When Simba grew up,he came back to the forest and_had a big fight with his uncle.At last,Simba won and became the true king.Simba is very brave when he meets difficulties.We should learn from him and be brave in life.