1、Unit 2 TravellingTaskTIP:kittys albumWhen,where,who,what,howMain pointsDetails Kittys trip to Hong KongMain pointsDetailsWhenThe winter holidayWhere Hong KongWhoMy parents and IWhatVisiting places of interestsDisneyland parade of Disney characters exciting Space Mountain rideOcean Park dolphin show
2、and bird showOther activitiesVisited museumsWent shoppingEatingDelicious seafoodInteresting,exciting,fun,niceWant to visit it againThink of something interesting and special to write about.The day finally arrived.My parents and I left for the airport in the early morning.It took us about three and a
3、 half hours to fly to Hong Kong.The next day,we went to the most famous theme park(1)_.I loved watching the interesting(2)_ of Disney characters,and the Space Mountain ride was very(3)_.On the third day,we visited another famous theme park in Hong Kong(4)_.We watched the(5)_ and the bird show there.
4、They were great fun.On the fourth day,we visited some museums,and then we went(6)_.My mother enjoyed that day most.She bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends.We went to a seafood restaurant on the fifth day and had a(7)_ meal.The food in Hong Kong was really nice.We enjoyed this
5、trip very much,and I hope I can visit it again some day.DisneylandparadeexcitingOcean Parkdolphin showshoppingdeliciousStructure of Kittys articleThe day finally arrived.My parents and I left for the airport in the early morning.It took us about three and a half hours to fly to Hong Kong.The next da
6、y,we went to the most famous theme parkDisneyland.I loved watching the interesting parade of Disney characters,and the Space Mountain ride was very exciting.On the third day,we visited another famous theme park in Hong KongOcean Park.We watched the dolphin show and the bird show there.They were grea
7、t fun.On the fourth day,we visited some museums,and then we went shopping.My mother enjoyed that day most.She bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends.We went to a seafood restaurant on the fifth day and had a delicious meal.The food in Hong Kong was really nice.We enjoyed this tri
8、p very much,and I hope I can visit it again some day.Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Para.5Para.6Introduce the time,the place and the character.The key words&the topic sentences can be helpful.When,Where,Who Para.2-5 Main body Main point Details Details Main point Details Main point Talk about the places to
9、 go,the activities to do and the food to eat.What Main point Write about the feelings.How Details 1.IntroductionWhen,Where,Who2.Main body What3.Conclusion How Introduction Main body Conclusion It took us to fly to.Useful expressionsThe next day,we went to.I loved watching the interesting.was very ex
10、citing/beautiful/fantastic.On the third/fourth day,we visited.We went to on the fifth day.was the best part of the day.We enjoyed this trip very much.e.g.Last summer holiday,my parentsand I went to Suzhou.It took us aboutthree hours by coach.When?Where?Who?How?Last summer holidayTwo months agoLast w
11、eekendLast May Day holidayNanjingHainan IslandBeijing Suzhou By train By planeFly toTake the coachMy parents and IMy family and I My classmates and I My friends and I Write section by sectionCollect the main points Choose a holiday Think of when,where,who and how(the way of transportation)Introducti
12、on The day finally arrived.My parents and I left for the airport in the early morning.It took us about three and a half hours to fly to Hong Kong.Tips Write an introductionabout your trip to Suzhou.Write section by section Main body Main body The next day,we went to the most famous theme parkDisneyl
13、and.I loved watching the interesting parade of Disney characters,and the Space Mountain ride was very exciting.On the third day,we visited another famous theme park in Hong KongOcean Park.We watched the dolphin show and the bird show there.They were great fun.On the fourth day,we visited some museum
14、s,and then we went shopping.My mother enjoyed that day most.She bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends.We went to a seafood restaurant on the fifth day and had a delicious meal.The food in Hong Kong was really nice.Think about three or four main points.Write one or two sentences
15、to support each point.Organize the ideas in clear time logic.Use the simple past tense.Use adj.and adv.to make your article more interesting.Tips What?Details Visiting places of interestsee the Tiananmen Square visit the Palace MuseumOther activitiesclimb the Great WallEatingtry delicious local food
16、NanjingHainan IslandVisiting places of interestvisit Tianya Haijiao visit Yalong BayOther activitiesgo to the beach and swim in the seaEatingtry delicious seafood and fresh fruit BeijingVisiting places of interestclimb Purple Mountain visit Nanjing Underwater WorldOther activitiesgo to Confucius Tem
17、ple,buy souvenirsEatingtry traditional local snacks Main points Suzhou Collect the main points and detailsWrite 3 paragraphs about the trip to Nanjing.The next day,we climbed _.I loved the fresh air and the beautiful view.We took many photos.Organize the ideas in proper order._on the fourth day.We t
18、ried lots oftraditional local snacks.They were very _.After that,I _ some nice souvenirs for my cousin.On the third day,we visited Nanjing Underwater World._ _ _We went to Confucius Templedelicious/tastybought Purple Mountain We saw many kinds of animals in the sea,such as dolphins,sharks,penguins,e
19、tc.Then we watched a dolphin show.It was great fun.e.g.We enjoyed the trip very much,and I hope I can visit here with my parents again in the future.Write section by section Conclusion We enjoyed this trip very much,and I hope I can visit it again some day.Tips Write about the feelingsHow?Interestin
20、g,exciting,fun,nice,greatenjoy the tripWant to visit it againThink about the main pointsWrite a conclusionabout your trip to Hainan Island.We The food herewent to Sanya.took many photos.was delicious.My family and I We visited some museums.They were great fun.Subject BricksVerb BricksWrite good sent
21、ences u have a subjectu have a verbu state a complete thoughtMy family and Itook many photos.The food herewas delicious.We went to Sanya.u Use different ways to express our thoughts and opinions.Write good sentences It took us about three and a half hours to fly to Hong Kong.1We spent about three an
22、d a half hours flying to Hong Kong.2We spent about three hours and a half going to Hong Kong by air.My mother enjoyed that day most.My mother liked that day most.That day was my mothers favourite.Enjoy A tripWho How When What Where Discussion Group workMake your fact fileMain pointsDetailsWhenWhereW
23、hoWhatHowWriting timeIntroduction Main body Conclusion Write the first draft It took us to fly to.The next day,we went to.I loved watching the interesting.was very exciting/beautiful/fantastic.On the third/fourth day,we visited.We went to on the fifth day.was the best part of the day.We enjoyed this
24、 trip very much.Writing timeLast month,my family and I had a trip to Beijing.It spent us about ten and a half hours to reach Beijing by train.The next day,we went to the Tiananmen square,the biggest city square in the world,many visitors were there.We felt very excited.On the fifth day we went to bu
25、y some presents.My mother enjoyed that day most.She bought lots of parents for our relatives and friends.There were too many people in the shop to count.We also tired some local food.It was delicious.I like Beijing Duck best.We enjoyed the trip very much,and I hope I can visit it again some day.Move
26、 parts to the right placeAdd Cut out unnecessary details new materialsRevise Writing timeWe visited the Palace Museum on the third day.The buildings were very beautiful and there were many old things.It was very intresting.On the fourth day,we climbed the Great Wall.It was very great.My My father to
27、ok many photos.We were tired,and we were very happy.We watched the raising of the national flag.We watched the raising of the national flag.Revise GrammarSpelling Punctuation Capitalization Last month,my family and I had a trip to Beijing.It spent us about ten and a half hours to reach Beijing by tr
28、ain.The next day,we went to the Tiananmen square,the biggest city square in the world,many visitors were there.We watched the raising of the national flag.We watched the raising of the national flag.We felt very excited.We visited the Palace Museum on the third day.The buildings were very beautiful
29、and there were many old things.It was very intresting.On the fourth day,we climbed the Great Wall.It was very great.My My father took many photos.We were tired,and we were very happy.On the fifth day we went to buy some presents.My mother enjoyed that day most.She bought lots of presents for our rel
30、atives and friends.We also tired some local food.It was delicious.I like Beijing Duck best.We enjoyed the trip very much,and I hope I can visit it again some day.Writing timeSquare Square tooktook Though we were tired,we were very happy.interesting interesting Many triedtriedRewrite Writing timeLast
31、 month,my family and I had a trip to Beijing.It took us about ten and a half hours to reach Beijing by train.The next day,we went to the Tiananmen Square,the biggest city square in the world.Many visitors were there.We watched the raising of the national flag.We felt very excited.We visited the Pala
32、ce Museum on the third day,.The buildings were very beautiful and there were many old things.It was very interesting.On the fourth day,we climbed the Great Wall.My father took many photos.Though we were tired,we were very happy.On the fifth day we went to buy some presents.My mother enjoyed that day
33、 most.She bought lots of presents for our relatives and friends.We also tried some local food.It was delicious.I like Beijing Duck best.We enjoyed the trip very much,and I hope I can visit it again some day._ _ _ _Pay attention to your handwriting.Items Comments Marks自自评评他他评评师师评评Structure(2)A clear
34、order(introduction,main body and conclusion)2 分Content(6)Include main points and more details(when,where,who,what and how)6 分Language(8)Good sentences and rich expressions 5 分Organize the ideas in clear time order1 分Grammatically Correct 2 分Others(4)Correct spelling,capitalization and punctuation2 分Beautiful handwriting 2 分Total marks 20 分Assessment table 1Introduction(when,where,who)2Main body(what)3Conclusion(how)Summary Fact fileDraft Revise Rewrite How to write1.Talk about your holidays with your friends.2.Choose one of your holidays.Make a fact file and write another article.Homework
