1、七年级上册七年级上册Module3 My school 写作课课件写作课课件Writing aims 1.Be able to make use of the words and phrases to write my school;2.Enable to help each other.Writing proceduresStep 1.Pre-writing Step 3.Post-writing Step 2.While-writing Ask students to look around the classroom and say the things names.In my clas
2、sroom,I can see desks,books and dictionaries For example:computertelevisiondeskdictionarypicturebookfurnituremapwallteacherstudentsBrainstorm:Work in groups,discuss and list things in the school as more as possible(小组讨论，列举学校里的事物，越多越好小组讨论，列举学校里的事物，越多越好)schoollibraryclassroomsports hallschool gatedini
3、ng hallscience hall.50areisIt s on the desk.1.Where is the office building?Its on the right of the gate.2.Where is the dining hall?Its behind the science building.3.Where is the playground?Its in the middle of my school.4.Where is the sports hall?Its on the left of the gate.5.Where is the science bu
4、ilding?Its between the dining hall and the sports hall.This is a map of our school._the gate is the office building and behind this is the_._the classroom buildingis the library.The science building is _the dininghall and the _.And behind the dininghall,the playground and the library there are_.On t
5、he right ofclassroom buildingBehindbetweensports hallsome trees书面表达（书面表达（10分）分）Write about your school作文要求：作文要求：1.字数：字数：60词左右；开头已给出，不算入词数；词左右；开头已给出，不算入词数；2.内容完整，语言流畅，可以适当发挥；内容完整，语言流畅，可以适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。This is our school.On the left ofThis is our library.It s in front ofThere are
6、 _While-writingWriting practice(15 minutes)_ _ _ 可用的句子可用的句子可用的句型可用的句型 可用的搭配可用的搭配正文正文Tips I like my school very much.It s very beautiful.What about yours?Can you tell me?on the left/right(of),in the middle(of)betweenandin front ofThere is aThere are可用的单词可用的单词classroom,office,playground,library,near,b
7、ook写作方法指导写作方法指导 选择某一层次同学的作文投影选择某一层次同学的作文投影 AB层同学层同学批改批改其它同学独立修改完善作文其它同学独立修改完善作文 并给出自评分并给出自评分（有声朗读作文，给出自评分）（有声朗读作文，给出自评分）Read your passage aloud,then check it byyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求 时态：时态：一般现在时一般现在时Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正
8、文（已给出）（满分1分）（满分6分）其他，（卷面书写，单词拼写及语法）酌情加减分（1分）作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分1515分分Beginning开头部分开头部分Body正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分Post-writing(10 minutes)EndingBody正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分3 对自己学校的喜爱或想知道他人学校的情况（2分）条理清晰，有顺序，内容完整，语言流畅,无单词和语法错误地描写my school.第一档：第一档：12-15分分 内容涵盖内容
9、涵盖所有所有的要点，表达清楚，的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有几乎没有语言错误。语言错误。第二档：第二档：11-12分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点，表达清楚，的要点，表达清楚，但有但有少量少量语言错误。语言错误。第三档：第三档：9-10分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖大部分大部分要点，表达要点，表达尚尚清楚清楚,但有但有一些一些语言错误。语言错误。（以上为及格线）（以上为及格线）第四档：第四档：4-8分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖部分部分要点，写出少量句子，要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。第五档：第五档：0-3分分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不只写出个别单词，不成
10、句子，表达不清楚。清楚。评分档次和要求：展示展示（show your passage）This is our school.There is a new office building and a classroom building in it.There is a computer on everyone sdesk.On the left of the building,there is a library.There are many books in it.We can read them after class.In front of the library,there is a
11、lab.Behind the lab,there is a huge playground.I love my school very much!Summary写作技巧写作技巧:使用 on the right/left,in on the right/left,in front of,in the middle of front of,in the middle of 等搭配 来描述位置。写作步骤：写作步骤：1.审题（判断写作类型、人称、时态）2.构思（内容：单词、短语、句式、结构）3.检查（拼写、语法、连贯性）How to write My School请写一篇短文，介绍你的班级和学校。请写一篇短文，介绍你的班级和学校。In my classroom there areIn my school
