1、【英语】中考英语书面表达模拟试题一、英语书面表达1 如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以Bike-sharing为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。要点提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）Take exerciseProblems Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolenAdvice Civilized（文明的）, follow the ru
2、les, take good care of注意：1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Bike-sharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. _【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more
3、 and more popular in many cities. Its known that it has many advantages. So its enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing hel
4、ps people take more exercise.In this way, its helpful to peoples health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow t
5、he rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）【解析】【详解】这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: Its known that it has many advantages.，First of all, its very
6、 convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。【点睛】本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。2亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1
7、）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle scho
8、ol life is coming to an end. Im glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Be
9、sides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is，Im glad to，Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句
10、式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3假定你是David，来自美国，你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志
11、愿者，他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David， Im writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. Im interested in it very much. Im going to do some this summer vacation. B
12、ut I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? Why do you want to be a volunteer? What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? Do you have any problems with volunteering? If my parents dont allow me to do so, what should I do? Im looking forward to hearing f
13、rom you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming注意：1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数;2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions._I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavi
14、d【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for
15、sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.Its OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I cant balance my study and work. If your parents dont allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them.
16、Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Im glad，we can，Its OK to，If your parents dont allow you to.
17、，you should，I hope等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4书面表达李华所
18、在的国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动，假定你是李华，请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日端午节，内容包括：1. 今年庆祝时间（6月18日）2. 节日由来：纪念（be in memory of）屈原3. 吃粽子，赛龙舟，挂菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日注意：1. 词数80100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.开头已写好，不计入总词数。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called
19、 the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday o
20、n June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this
21、 traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日端午节。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People celebrate，People hold，We can watch，We welcome to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了今年端午节庆祝时间，接下
22、来介绍端午节的由来以及庆祝活动，最后欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日。此处according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5书面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息开头已给出，不计入总词数内容要点：过去现在1旧房1高楼2河水肮脏2河水清澈（clean and clear）3步行、骑自行车上班3乘公交车、小汽车上班4道路狭窄（narrow）4街
23、道宽阔（wide），干净整洁5居住条件（livingconditions）差5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适6你的感想（写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be ol
24、d houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. T
25、here are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think its still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cher
26、ish the present life.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think its still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，
27、是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6书面表达（原创）今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。学校英语校刊英语天地对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自己的观点。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%）1.a popular form of entertainme
28、nt, bring more fun 2.bring people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示词：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信
29、息;As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students._【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on li
30、ne won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can
31、bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of peoples lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They dont have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, theres no doubt t
32、hat not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, its obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people cant grab the red packets, people may fe
33、el sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. Whats worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。最后还要加上自己的看法。因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三
34、段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。短文中使用了较丰富的
35、句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of peoples lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, theres no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also se
36、nd blessings to people in a special form.、If people cant grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。7假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。提示词语： school gate, nature, c
37、ulture, food and drink提示问题： When and where are you going to meet?What are you going to do there?What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in Yanqing._Im looking forward to your early r
38、eply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. Youd bette
