1、【英语】 中考英语书面表达练习题(含答案)一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)1假定你是David,来自美国,你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者,他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复,可以有适当的发挥。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David, Im writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free
2、time. Im interested in it very much. Im going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? Why do you want to be a volunteer? What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? Do you have any problems with volunteering? If my p
3、arents dont allow me to do so, what should I do? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Li Ming注意:1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数;2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions._I hope you love v
4、olunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take par
5、t in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.Its OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I cant balance my study and work. If y
6、our parents dont allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,给好友Li Ming回信,介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构
7、和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Im glad,we can,Its OK to,If your parents dont allow you to.,you should,I hope等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴,接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题,最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look aft
8、er, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2(B)根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.4.女孩也喜欢运动,希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条.5.你对运动的观点.6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字7.短文开头已给出,不计入词
9、数.8.参考词语:keep slim (保持苗条)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports._【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when the
10、y feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. The
11、y want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【详解】本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法,应该用一般现在时态,写作要点要包括:1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析(多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点)。3.提出自己对运动的观点。亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好地完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态,主谓一致,在文中使用
12、了时间状语从句,定语从句,特别使用一些亮点词句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,句子通顺,行文连贯。3假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个网页后,你打算给Liz Payne留言,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum参观的愿望。内容包括:1.简单介绍自己;2.留言目的(包含冬令营的时间,听Liz Payne的讲座);3.预期收获。作文要求:1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名;2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾
13、已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Liz Payne,Im Li Hua,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,Im Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. Im writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From www.ca
14、nalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. Whats more, I hope to
15、learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.Im looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份,给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分:首先是介绍自己的身份;然后写留言的目的,包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座;最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时,应根据题目的这些要求,组织语言,串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知,这篇短文应使用第一人称I来叙述,时态应以
16、一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的,不能逐词翻译,而应从句子的整体考虑,使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型,保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式,提升文章档次和水平,使表达更加流畅。点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述:首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的;接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望;最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好,那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以第
17、一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主,谓语动词形式准发,语法规范,符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主,也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型,如Im writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation.中使用了宾语从句;From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen dur
18、ing the same period of our Winter Camp.中有一个非限制性定语从句;And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。4书面表达假如你是李华,你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革,经过一段时间的适应,同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化,请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目,用英
19、语写一篇100词左右的文章,谈谈你的感受和想法,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。 要求:1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息;3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息,并作适当发挥。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class._【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to expres
20、s ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge
21、in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【详解】假如你是李华,你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革,经过一段时间的适应,同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化,请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目,用英语写一篇100词左右的文章,谈谈你的感受和想法,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。 结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为单数第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。【点睛】
22、本文结构紧凑,语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5近来,美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。假如你是大明,请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。要点提示 :1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;2.不要害怕犯错误,
23、与同学们用中文交流;3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。注意 :1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。Dear Sam ,Im happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it
24、 well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,Im happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And dont be afraid of making mistakes. T
25、hird, youd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chines
26、e, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信,告诉他如何学好汉语,题目中从四个方面提出了建议。通过审题可知,这是要求写一封建议信,内容应包括以下几个方面:首先应和Sam先做一个交流,然后引出写信的目的;接下来给出具体的建议,依据题目中给出的这四条,用正确的英语表达出来,还应注意补充一些内容,使文章更加充实;最后写一个适当的结尾,如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一般现在时,根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑
27、,写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主,简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次,可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文章意思连贯,表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信,对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。首先短文内容完整,包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部分:第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题,并介绍写信的目的;第二段中是提出的具体的建议,这是这篇文章的主体,所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First,Second,Third,lastly等词,叙述条理
28、、有层次;最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称,句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准确,用词得体。文章中的语句以简单句结构为主,也使用了并列句和复合句,调整了文章的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型,如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your p
29、ronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。6书面表达为了配合“足球进校园”活动,你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份,根据下列表格中的要点提示,用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。常 识历史悠久,深受喜爱世界杯4年举行一次好 处男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神考生自拟(至少1点)偶 像梅西,有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟(至少1点)注意:1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;1.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发
30、挥,使短文连贯、通顺;2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇:梅西 MessiDear classmates,Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020Football has a very
31、long historyIt is liked by people all over the worldThe World Cup takes place every four yearsPlaying football has lots of advantagesFirst,both boys and girls can take part in itSecond,it helps develop team spiritWhats more,playing football is good for our healthIm a football fanMessi is my heroHe h
32、as a gift for playing footballMy dream is to become a famous football player like MessiI hope China will hold the World Cup some dayThank you for your attention【解析】【详解】试题分析:本题要求按提纲的提示,介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确本文主要从三个方面来写:介绍足球运动及其好处;说说自己的偶像;谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态
33、、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作亮点:本文语言精炼,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. Whats more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,简洁,但是句意表达清楚;同时,本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式,使表达生动;用了first
34、, second等使得短文层次清楚。7环境保护人人有责, 如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球 保护自然资源,相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么,为改善环境我们能做什么,以及你的期望。提示词语: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题: What are the main environmental problems we have? What can we do in our daily life? What
35、s your wish?Now there are many environmental problems._【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by t
36、urning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Lets work together to ma
37、ke a better place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作,写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么,为改善环境我们能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。例文点评:例文采用的是三段式;用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么;时态采用的是一般现在时,描述建议时,描写具体,条理清晰。高分亮点:短语:save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pi
38、ck it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。【点睛】首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。以及状语从句等;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与
39、句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。8 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望,希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点,活动安排以及你的建议。提示词语: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示问题: When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be