1、浙江省2015届高三英语新一轮专题复习训练书面表达（2014浙江） 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。 Dear Mr. Wang, _ Yours sincerely Li Yue One possible student version: Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our libra
2、ry is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discover
3、ies.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encoura
4、ge us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Yours sincerely, Li Yue（2013浙江） 请以“One Thing Im Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1记述事情经过；2简要说明你感到得意原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）One Thing Im Proud of_One possible student version：One Thing Im Proud of I sti
5、ll remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing
6、 until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better
7、 understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”（2012浙江）你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流，以下是某同学的句子：“Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you.”请按下列要求用英语写一篇100120个词的短文：1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法2. 举例说明理由注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a qu
8、ote to us, which goes like this: Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you. 【考点】观点类议论文开放式【写作指导】试题材料新颖，贴近考生实际生活，属于半开放性话题。 对既定的话题进行讨论，考生有一定的自由发挥空间，畅所欲言，各抒己见。论点明确，论据充分是得分的关键。如能灵活运用学过而且熟练的亮点词汇、短语和句型，尽量变换句式，长短句交错使用，并且恰当地穿插一些过渡性词语，使文章自然、流畅，有较强的逻辑性，文章一定会脱颖而出。在写作时注意把握好以下几点：(1)书写规范，卷面整洁。(2)行文紧凑，过
9、渡自然。(3)要点完整，表达清楚。(4)语法正确，时态准确。(5)用词无误，控制得当(80-120词之间)。(6)认真复查，胸有成竹。One possible version:In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this; Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. I cant agree more with this view. Its true that our future
10、 is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited e
11、ducation in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day. Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.（2011浙江）假设你是高中生李越
12、，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：1.说明写信目的；2.对这些行为进行批评；3.提出建议注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）。June 8, 2011 Headmaster,Im Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior ._Your faithfully,Li Yue【答案】One possible student version: June 8, 2011 Mr. Headmaster, I am Li Yue, a
13、student from Class 1, Senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does hard to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate fo
14、r a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teac
15、hers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Yue【点评】浙江省高考英语作文命题继09年和10年连续两年的新闻报道形式作文后，今年高考写作回归了书信的形式。体裁虽然发生一定的变化，但题材上仍然是贴近高中生日常生活。本文仍属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文，选材贴近学生实际，有利于考生的正常发挥，考生只要按照所给要点的思路来写即可。高考写作命题趋势探究：纵观09年高考以
16、来的全国各地高考作文命题，提纲式作文一直高考英语作文命题的主流。而浙江卷也一直跟随这一主流命题趋势。今年的高考作文又是给出了三个提纲挈领的短语，帮助学生组织文章结构。学生需要做的是提纲的基础上对内容进行相应的扩充。提纲式作文对于学生来说，容易的地方在于：有了提纲，文章基本不会出现偏题的问题。但同时由于仅仅只有提纲，导致学生在对提纲进行扩充的时候产生问题，不知道该说些具体的什么内容。浙江卷英语写作的另外一个特点是：考试的内容上都十分贴近高中生的生活。国家中长期教育改革和发展规划纲要(2010-2020年)意见稿中明确指出：在高中阶段要积极开展研究性学习、社区服务和社会实践。建立科学的教育质量评价
17、体系，全面实施高中学业水平考试和综合素质评价。在此纲要的指导下，浙江卷近三年的命题都是围绕高中生日常生活，对于学生来说，并不脱离实际，即考察了学生对生活的关注，同时考察了学生对于英语在生活中的英语能力。浙江卷的另外一个特点是将多种文章形式融为一体：例如从09年开始，每年高考题中的提纲部分必然会出现1对事件和现象的描述2对事件或现象的评论。在这两者结合的基础上，每年的作文形式也不断发生变化，如09年是新闻报道，10年是板报形式，11年就是书信形式。但其实无论采用何种的形式都对文章的内容没有实质上的影响。考生最需要的把握的还是对事件或现象的描述和评论的基础语言能力。 （2010浙江）最近，李越被评
18、为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装)，用英语为班级板报写一篇l00一120个词的短文。你的文章应包括下列要点： 1李越的事迹及其对同学的影响； 2你的评论。 注意：1文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数)。2参考词汇： singing contest 歌咏比赛Costume 服装Star Student of the WeekLi Yue has been awarded the title of Star Student of the Week for what she did for our class._Star Student of
19、 the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of Star Student of the Week for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying
20、our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides,
21、she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.（2009浙江）5月1日。高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院（SunshineNursing Home)开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100120个词的新闻报道。1. 时间、地点、人物、活动；2. 老人们的反
22、应；3. 简短评论。4. 注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly By Chen Jie, School Newspaper写作【答案】One possible student versionStudent Volumteers Broutht Sunshine to the ElderlyOn May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went o Sunshine Nursing Hom
23、e and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the
24、 elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Ch
25、en Jie, School Nwespaper【解析】本题题材贴近学生生活，是学生们在社会实践活动中经常参加的活动；体裁命制稳健，是中学教学中最为常见的半开放提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。写出简评让学生张扬个性，符合探究理念，但表达要有重点，注意把前面整个的活动过程交代清楚，这是写作的重要内容；老人们的反应和简评可以少写。【写作思路】要写好这篇半开放性作文首先要认真审题，看清要求，分清写作的主次，讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间，地点、活动的内容，以及老人们的反应表达出来；然后再发表个人观点，这样逻辑清晰表达合理，重点突出。参考句型或词组：1、 students from Class Three, Grade Two2、 do some voluntary work.3、 upon their arrival, when they arrived, 4、 present- with -5、 it is time for - to -6、 thank- for - 7、 it is such -that -8、bring joy to -
