1、2021年1月八省联考读后续写讲解目录The Given TextSampleConceptionComprehensionAccumulation01During this past year,Ive had three instances of car trouble.Each time these things happened,I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help.One of those times,I was on the side of the road for close to three hours
2、with my big Jeep.I put signs in the windows,big signs that said NEED A JACK（千斤顶）,and offered money.Nothing.Right as I was about to give up,a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over,and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter,who spoke English.He conveyed thro
3、ugh her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep,so we would need something to support it.Then he got a saw（锯子）from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road.We rolled it over and put his jack on top,and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off,a
4、nd then,if you can believe it,I broke his tire iron.No worries:He handed it to his wife,and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron.She was back in 15 minutes.We finished the job,and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty.His wife prepared a pot of water for
5、us to wash our hands.I tried to put a$20 bill in the mans hand,but he wouldnt take it,so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could.I asked the little girl where they lived.Mexico,she said.They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the nex
6、t few weeks.Then they would go home.Paragraph 1:When I was about to say goodbye,the girl asked if Id had lunch.Paragraph 2:After they left,I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.02Key Elements From the Given Text(1)major characters personalitiesappearances relationshipKey Elements From the Give
7、n Text(2)timeplacefinal given timefinal given placeupset and disappointedI was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep but no one came to help.delighted and hopefulA Mexican family in a small truck pulled over,and came to help me.happy and gratefulWe finished repairing my J
8、eep and I tried to give$20 to the family.(1)Each time these things happened,I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help.I believed that people were indifferent and felt cynical.(2)One of those times,I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep.(3)I tried to pu
9、t a$20 bill in the mans hand,but he wouldnt take it,so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could.Id been waiting for a long time so I was hungry and tired.The man didnt want to accept the reward.0312 34Para 1Para 2Paragraph 1:When I was about to say goodbye,the gir
10、l asked if Id had lunch.Iemotionplotawkwardmovedrefuse the girls kindness have lunch with the familysay goodbye to the familyParagraph 2:After they left,I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.Isurprisedthankfulemotionplotfind more food in the bagfind a$20 billreexamine my cynical view before1.W
11、hat would I do next?I refused the girls lunch.I accepted the girls kindness with pleasure.2.What happened before they left?The girl gave me a paper bag.We had an enjoyable meal.Paragraph 1:When I was about to say goodbye,the girl asked if Id had lunch.Paragraph 2:After they left,I got into my Jeep a
12、nd opened the paper bag.Initiate the framework according to the final given plot and the two initial given sentences with.3.What might happen after I opened the paper bag?I found a note in the bag.I found a$20 bill in the bag.Paragraph 2:After they left,I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.4.
13、What might be the ending of this story?I felt grateful to the family for their kindness.I decided to help others in the future.I would remember the family forever.I would pay more attention to foreigners.Initiate the framework according to the final given plot and the two initial given sentences wit
14、h.The possible lessons or conclusionsFrom this experience,we learned that.Who helps others can get the help of others.The roses in her hand,the flavor in mine.There is one thing alone that stands the brunt of life throughout its course:a kind heart.04Paragraph 1:When I was about to say goodbye,the g
15、irl asked if Id had lunch.My gut feeling was to refuse.But my stomach was growling since I hadnt eaten for more than four hours.Seeing my embarrassment,the girl just pressed some bread into my hands and changed the subject to talk about my car.After the seemingly simple meal which pulled us closer t
16、ogether,the family was ready to leave.When the father started his truck,the little angel handed me a paper bag,then waved goodbye to me.I stood and watched the truck until it vanished around a turn.Read one possible version and make sure you know how the plot develops.Read one possible version and m
17、ake sure you know how the plot develops.Paragraph 2:After they left,I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.The fruit inside didnt look perfect,but the tantalizing aroma filled the air.Picking one up to take a big bite,I found a$20 bill in the bag.Recalling their sincere eyes and smiles while ch
18、ewing the juicy fruit,I felt the warmth flowing into my heart.Certainly,Ive encountered many indifferent people and Ive experienced some helpless moments,but I still put my trust in this beautiful world.Because I finally realized one thing that stands the brunt of life throughout its course:a kind h
19、eart.(176 words)05Useful Expressions gut adj.本能的 based on feelings and emotions rather than thought and reason growl v.低声吼叫，咆哮 to say sth.in a low angry voice seemingly adv.看似；貌似；表面上 in a way that appears to be true but may in fact not be vanish v.突然消失 to disappear suddenly and/or in a way that you
20、cannot explain tantalize v.逗引，招惹 to make a person or an animal want sth.that they cannot have or do aroma n.芳香；香味 a pleasant,noticeable smell sincere adj.真诚的；诚挚的 showing what you really think or feel indifferent adj.漠不关心 having or showing no interest in sb./sth.stand the brunt of sth.首当其冲1.My stomac
21、h was _(growl)since I hadnt eaten for more than four hours.2.After the _(seem)simple meal which pulled us closer together,the family was ready to leave.3.I stood and watched the truck until it _(vanish)around a turn.4.The fruit inside didnt look perfect,but the _(tantalize)aroma filled the air.growl
22、ingvanishedseeminglytantalizingReview and Practice5.The girl just pressed some bread into my hands and _(转移话题)to talk about my car.6.When the father started his truck,the little angel handed me a paper bag,then _(挥手告别)to me.7.Picking one up to _(咬一大口),I found a$20 bill in the bag.8.Recalling their s
23、incere eyes and smiles while chewing the juicy fruit,I felt _(一股暖流涌进我的心里).changed the subject waved goodbyetake a big bitethe warmth flowing into my heart9.My gut feeling was to refuse.（仿写）直觉告诉我，时尚已不再那么高高在上。_ fashion has stopped being so elitist.My gut feeling is that10.Ive encountered many indifferent people and Ive experienced some helpless moments,but I still put my trust in this beautiful world.（仿写）我记得我从来没信赖过财富或名声。I remember I have never _ in riches or fame.put my trust
