1、国培国培10月份研修活动月份研修活动 授课类型：授课类型：Writing (Read to write) 话话 题：题：My friends and I 语言功能：语言功能： Talk about personal traits and Compare people Writing Practice Comparing people Lets speak! - comparing people Look at the pictures ， talk about their traits and compare them They are both _. friendly Grandpa Xi
2、is _ Obama. shorter than Obama is _ Grandpa Xi. taller than Grandpa Xi is _ Obama. heavier than Obama is _ Grandpa Xi. thinner than 范冰冰范冰冰 孙俪孙俪 They both have _. curly and black hair Fan is _,but Sun is _ serious outgoing. Fan is _Sun. as hard-working as Lets speak! - comparing people Can you talk a
3、bout your friends traits? Lets speak ! - comparing people We both have We are both (short hair/long and straight hair) (thin/heavy/tall/short/serious/funny) She/He is as +adj.(形容词）形容词）as me She/He , but/ I Sb.iser than Sb./ Sb. is more than Sb. She /He, and I,too. We look the same. /We are quite dif
4、ferent. I have two good friends.They are Cindy and Ella. Cindy is my best friend. Some people think that we are sisters,because she looks like me in some ways. We both have short straight hair. We are both short and thin. We are both smart andwe enjoy playing tennis together. Im also a good friend o
5、f Ella, but we are quite different. Ella is taller than me, and she has longer hair than me. Ella is funnier and more popular, but Im smarter than her at school. However, we both like running. We are so different,but we are good friends, so I think that differences are not important in a friendship.
6、 Lets read!Lets read! - Comparing peopleComparing people A sample passage 范文范文 Lets read!Lets read! - Comparing peopleComparing people 1). Find all the sentences about Appearance, Hobby and Personality (找出文中所有有关相貌、爱好和品性的句子） Appearance （相貌） Hobby （爱好） Personality （品性） We both have short straight hair
7、. We are both thin and short. Ella is taller than me ,and she has longer hair than me. We enjoy playing tennis together However, we both like running. We are both smart. Ella is funnier and more popular, but Im smarter than her at school. Lets read! - Giving suggestions Read to write Sample passage:
8、 How many paragraphs ? I have two good friends.They are Cindy and Ella. Cindy is my best friend. Some people think that we are sisters,because she looks like me in some ways. We both have short straight hair. We are both short and thin. We are both smart andwe enjoy playing tennis together. Im also
9、a good friend of Ella, but we are quite different. Ella is taller than me, and she has longer hair than me. Ella is funnier and more popular, but Im smarter than her at school. However, we both like running. We are so different,but we are good friends, so I think that differences are not important i
10、n a friendship. beginning body ending How many parts ? I have two good friends.They are Cindy and Ella. Cindy is my best friend. Some people think that we are sisters,because she looks like me in some ways. We both have short straight hair. We are both short and thin. We are both smart and we enjoy
11、playing tennis together. Im also a good friend of Ella, but we are quite different. Ella is taller than me, and she has longer hair than me. Ella is funnier and more popular, but Im smarter than her at school. However, we both like running. We are so different,but we are good friends, so I think tha
12、t differences are not important in a friendship. body beginning key sentence supporting information What is the beginning about? Which is the key sentence? How does the body support the key sentence? (正文如何为主题句提供支持？正文如何为主题句提供支持？) I have two good friends.They are Cindy and Ella. Cindy is my best frien
13、d. Some people think that weare sisters,because she looks like me in some ways. We both have short straight hair. We are both short and thin. We are both smart and we enjoy playing tennis together. Im also a good friend of Ella, but we are quite different. Ella is taller than me, and she has longer
14、hair than me. Ella is funnier and more popular, but Im smarter than her at school. However, we both like running. We are so different,but we are good friends, so I think that differences are not important in a friendship. Cindy is Ella is beginning body ending How does the ending work? I have two go
15、od friends.They are Cindy and Ella. Cindy is my best friend. Some people think that we are sisters,because she looks like me in some ways. We both have short straight hair. We are both short and thin. We are both smart and we enjoy playing tennis together. Im also a good friend of Ella, but we are q
16、uite different. Ella is taller than me, and she has longer hair than me. Ella is funnier and more popular, but Im smarter than her at school. However, we both like running. We are so different,but we are good friends, so I think that differences are not important in a friendship. What makes a good p
17、assage? key sentence supporting information Ella is Cindy is A clear outline （提纲）（提纲）helps. I have two good friends.They are Cindy and Ella. What makes a good passage? key sentence supporting information ？ ？ Outlines for your passage： ？ Write a passage describing your friend(s) （写一篇描述你朋友的文章） Lets wr
18、ite ! - Comparing people supporting information key sentence 1. Work in groups of four and plan for your outline. （4人一组拟好提纲）人一组拟好提纲） 4 min Your passage: What else makes a good passage? The outline （3-4） the key sentence supporting information The language ( 5 ) spelling grammar punctuation （标点） Oute
19、r beauty ( 1-2 ) handwriting paragraphing （分段） supporting information key sentence 2. Work individually and describe your friend(s) according to your outline. （依据提纲独立撰文描述你的朋友）（依据提纲独立撰文描述你的朋友） 10 min Your passage: supporting information key sentence 3. Share your work in your group. Score each piece
20、and explain your reasons.（组内分享、评分并陈述理由）（组内分享、评分并陈述理由） 3 min Your passage: 4. Share the work in class and give your comments.（班级分享并点评）（班级分享并点评） Lets share ! - Giving suggestions I have two good friends.They are Cindy and Ella. Cindy is my best friend. Some people think that we are sisters,because she
21、 looks like me in some ways. We both have short straight hair. We are both short and thin.We are both smart andwe enjoy playing tennis together. Im also a good friend of Ella, but we are quite different. Ella is taller than me, and she has longer hair than me. Ella is funnier and more popular, but I
22、m smarter than her at school. However, we both like running. We are so different,but we are good friends, so I think that differences are not important in a friendship. Lets read!Lets read! - Comparing peopleComparing people A sample passage 范文范文 Use Compara- tives (使用的比使用的比 较结构）较结构） Homework Better your passage ! Thank you !
