1、,Topic Writing:Food,chicken,carrots,apples,eggs,fruit,vegetables,food,Food,bread,beef,hamburger,eggs,pork,rice,chicken,noodles,dumplings,porridge,fruit,vegetables,Fruit and vegetables are good for our health,水果和蔬菜有益于我们的健康,Job: volleyballer,Name: Cindy Smith,She eats lots of healthy food.,volleyball
2、star,2c Write five sentences about Cindys eating habits.,Cindy likes healthy food.,likes oranges and apples.,really likes salad.,likes fruit for breakfast.,like hamburgers for dinner.,like bananas.,A students composition,David and his sister. Sally are student. David is 14 years old but Sally is onl
3、y eight. David like rice and hamburgers. He doesnt like eat fruit. He likes chicken in dinner. Sally likes eating vegetable and fruit. She thinks they are health. She have an apple and two bananas every day. She says she doesnt want be fat.,Do you remember?,1 在词下面划= ，表示标点或大小写有问题。2划 表示 应调整顺序。 3 表示应删除
4、。 4 表示应插入。 5 + 表示应合并。 6 / 表示应分开。7 sp. 表示拼写错误。8 pl.表示应复数。9 single表示应单数。 10 3rd表示应第三人称单数。11 o. o. 表示应动词原形。12 -ing. 表示应加 ing 13. p. 表示应用过去式。14 pp.表示应用过去分词。15 -n. 表示转换为名词,等等。,David and his sister. Sally are student. David is 14 years old but Sally is only eight. David like rice and hamburgers. He doesnt
5、 like eat fruit. He likes chicken in dinner. She likes eating vegetable and fruit. She thinks they are health.She have an apple and two bananas every day. She says she doesnt want be fat.,A students composition,Correct the mistakes in the passages,David and his sister, Sally are students. David is 1
6、4 years old and Sally is only eight. David likes rice and hamburgers. He doesnt like eating fruit. He likeschicken for dinner. Sally likes eating vegetables and fruit. She thinks they are healthy.She has an apple and two bananas every day. She says she doesnt want to be fat.,美化,David and his sister,
7、 Sally are students. David is 14 years old but Sally is only eight. David likes rice and hamburgers. He doesnt like eating fruit. He likeschicken for dinner. Sally likes eating vegetables and fruit. She thinks they are healthy.She has an apple and two bananas every day. She says she doesnt want to b
8、e fat.,I have two friends,Davide and Sally.,Wonderful,I think their eating babits are healthy.,But Sally is not the same as David,写作技巧,1.审题要清,2.列出要点,3.扩点成句,4.连句成段,连段成篇,5.美化文章,5.美化文章,. 活用各种句式. 避免重复使用同一词汇. 多用固定搭配. 改变句子开头,结尾的方式,Writing practice,请按下面要求写一篇作文。（约60词）假如你叫李华，今年13岁，是第三中学七年级（7）班的学生。请你介绍一下你一日三餐
9、经常吃什么？你最喜爱的食物是什么？你认为你的饮食习惯健康吗？你认为健康食物对你有什么益处？,结构的思维导图,My Eating Habits,Beginning: Introduce yourself,Body: Three meals:,Ending: Your opinion,Im,lunch,dinner,breakfast,Favourite food,Writing,Checking Good or bad?,Rewriting,请按下面要求写一篇作文。（约60词）假如你叫李华，今年13岁，是第三中学七年级(7)班的学生。请你介绍你一日三餐你经常吃什么？你最喜爱的食物是什么？你认为你的饮食习惯健康吗？你认为健康食物对你有什么益处？ My Eating Habits_,Show your work !,Teachers Advice,博览， 勤思， 擅写！,Read,Think,Write,【全册教案、课件、素材、试题、教学计划等欢迎到163文库下载全套资料！】,请到百度搜索“163文库”，到网站下载！或直接访问：,【163文库】：1，上传资料赚钱；2，便宜下载精品资料的好地方！,Homework,Thank you for listening.,
