1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习暖心男孩帮助生病的妈妈洗衣服，却意外把妈妈最爱的白裙子染成了粉红色1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文One Saturday morning,Jeremy woke up to a quiet house.Usually Mom was awake making breakfast and cleaning the kitchen,but not today.At the sound of his mom coughing,Jeremy knocked on her bedroom door and asked with grea
2、t concern,“Mom,are you ok?”“Honey,”Mom said weakly.“I have a terrible cold.You can have cereal(燕麦)for breakfast and watch cartoons.Im going to stay in bed.”Jeremy poured some cereal into a bowl and ate the pieces dry.Mom must feel very bad if she was staying in bed all day.How could Jeremy help?Firs
3、t,he wiped up the crumbs of cereal he left on the kitchen counter.He also put away the cereal box neatly,so the kitchen looked just as it did when he woke up.But what else could he do?Jeremy thought.Saturday was the day when mom did laundry.Jeremy loved to watch the clothes spinning in the machine.T
4、hat should be fun!He ran to his room to get the laundry basket,inside which there was his mothers favorite white dress,among other clothes and a pair of red socks.4续写原文Jeremy opened the door to the washer and put the clothing inside.He had watched Mom do laundry lots of times,so he knew where to fin
5、d the washing powder and how to pour it into the machine.Finally,he closed the door and pressed the big button that said“START.”Jeremy looked through the round glass window.Water was pouring in,and the machine was starting to spin,making his clothing tumble around.That was easy!Jeremy watched cartoo
6、ns until he heard the washing machine beep.That meant the washing was done.Jeremy opened the door to take out the damp clothes.He took out a few at a time and moved them into the dryer.Everything seemed clean,and Jeremy felt proud.Then he pulled out a pink dress.5段首句Para 1：But he remembered there wa
7、s no pink dress in the laundry basket.Para 2：Holding the neatly folded pink dress,Jeremy nervously knocked at his moms bedroom door again.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述的是一个周六的早上，Jeremy发现妈妈生病了，决定帮妈妈分担家务，却在洗衣服时不小心把衣服混色了的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首
8、语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1:But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket.由第一段首句内容“但他记得洗衣篮里没有粉红色的连衣裙。”可知，第一段可描写Jeremy发现衣服变色并找到变色的原因。10续写思路分析 Para 2：Holding the neatly folded pink dress,Jeremy nervously knocked at his moms bedroom door again.由第二段首句内容“Jeremy拿着那件
9、叠得整整齐齐的粉红色连衣裙，紧张地再次敲了敲妈妈的卧室门。”可知，第二段可描写Jeremy向妈妈承认错误的过程。11续写素材 续写素材 发现衣服变色找到变色原因决定向妈妈承认错误获得原谅12续写素材 续写素材 行为类.拿出，取出：take out/pull out.发现，看见：see/notice/catch sight of .打算做某事：want to do/mean to do 情绪类.令人惊讶的：to his astonishment/to ones surprise.积极的态度：positive approach/positive attitude13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1W
10、hile racking his brain for reasons,he caught sight of the red socks,and it suddenly occurred to him that they must be to blame for the accident.（运用了while引导的状语从句的省略；that引导的主语从句）高分句型2With no means of handling the situation,Jeremy was in such a panic that he even thought of hiding the dress from his mo
11、m.（运用了such.that.如此以至于引导结果状语从句）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket.“Where did it come from?”Jeremy wondered,reaching into the washer to take out more clothes.Then much to his astonishment,he pulled out two T-shirts,both in light pink.Realizing there was s
12、omething wrong,Jeremy stood frozen,his heart sinking.While racking his brain for reasons,he caught sight of the red socks,and it suddenly occurred to him that they must be to blame for the accident.With no means of handling the situation,Jeremy was in such a panic that he even thought of hiding the
13、dress from his mom.“That isnt a positive approach to the problem,”he reminded himself.Finally,he decided to dry and fold the laundry before telling his mom everything.16范文呈现Holding the neatly folded pink dress,Jeremy nervously knocked at his moms bedroom door again.After what seemed like ages,he cam
14、e to the bedside,his head drooping.Sensing his sons unease,his mother inquired with concern what was wrong.“Sorry mom,I shouldnt have ruined your favorite dress.”Jeremy apologized.Stuttering out the mistake he had made,he was ready to get a good scolding for his wrongdoing.Realizing whats going on,m
15、om smiled understandingly at Jeremy,“Never mind,dear.I know you meant to help.”Then mom held the dress up before her and said in an approving tone,“You know what?I think it looks nice.”At this Jeremy beamed with relief,making a silent vow to be more careful in helping his mom out next time.17范文译文但他记
16、得洗衣篮里没有粉红色的衣服。“它从哪里来的？”杰里米想知道，伸手到洗衣机里拿出更多的衣服。然后，令他惊讶的是，他拿出两件浅粉色的T恤。意识到有什么不对劲，杰里米站在那里，心都沉了下去。当他绞尽脑汁寻找原因时，他看到了那双红袜子，突然想到它们一定是事故的罪魁祸首。由于无法应对这种情况，Jeremy惊慌失措，甚至想把裙子藏起来不让妈妈看到。“这不是解决问题的积极方法，”他提醒自己。最后，他决定把要洗的衣服晾干并叠好，然后再告诉妈妈一切。18范文译文杰里米拿着那件叠得整整齐齐的粉红色连衣裙，紧张地再次敲了敲妈妈的卧室门。似乎过了很久，他垂着头来到床边。母亲察觉到儿子的不安，关切地问出了什么事。“对不起，妈妈，我不应该毁了你最喜欢的裙子。”杰里米道歉。他把自己犯的错误说出来，准备为自己的错误受到严厉的斥责。意识到发生了什么事，妈妈理解地对Jeremy笑了笑，“没关系，亲爱的。我知道你是想帮忙的。”然后妈妈把裙子举到面前，用赞许的语气说：“你知道吗？我觉得它看起来不错。”看到这，Jeremy松了一口气，默默发誓下次要更小心地帮妈妈。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you!
