1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习转学到新学校后心情低落，恰好在这时收获了一个好友1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文I had moved to Arizona about two weeks before the start of my junior year of high school,so not only was this a new school for me,but also a new state and I did not know anyone.On the first day of school at lunch after getting
2、my meal,I sat down at a table in the courtyard.As I began to eat,I looked around at the other tables and saw another girl sitting alone,so I decided to go and sit with her.Anyway,there was no reason for me to have a whole table to myself,and who knew maybe I could make a friend.I walked to check and
3、 said,“Excuse me,do you mind if I sit with you?”She was surprised at first,but then smiled and said,“No,I dont!”4续写原文We hit it off immediately and became close friends throughout the next two years.Towards the end of our senior year,she told me that she had been accepted to an out-of-state college a
4、nd would be moving away after graduation.I was sad that I would miss her but at the same time was really happy for her.She then shared with me something very moving.“Do you remember the first day of school when you came over and sat down with me during lunch?”she asked.“Of course!Why do you ask?”I r
5、eplied.5续写原文She continued,“I want to let you know how special you are and that you make a difference.I was severely depressed that day,because something unhappy had happened to me that morning.I had been being sad since the morning and nobody realized my sadness.It had just broken me down.If you had
6、nt appeared,I would be probably in deep sadness for a long time after I got home from school.”6段首句Para 1：Then,she told me something more I hadnt known before.Para 2：Both of us gained a lot from the incident.7Part 2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在来到新学校后，第一天就交到了一个新朋友。直到快毕业时，那个朋友才告诉她，那一天她有多么幸运能够在自己伤心时遇到作者
7、，两个人在这件小事中都收获了很多。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析 Para 1:Then,she told me something more I hadnt known before.由第一段首句内容“然后，他告诉了我一些我以前不知道的事情。”可知，第一段可描写在作者遇到她的那天，她难过的原因。11续写思路分析 Para 2：Both of us gained a lot from t
8、he incident.由第二段首句内容“我们两个都从这件小事中收获了很多。”可知，第二段可描写作者及朋友两人在这件小事中的收获，最后升华到，一个简单的善举对于改变一个人的生活有着非凡的能力。12续写素材 续写素材 朋友也是新生成绩差被嘲笑作者的陪伴和鼓励让她快乐两个人的收获感悟13续写素材 续写素材 行为类 忍受：put up with /tolerate/bear 靠近：approach/draw near/close to 获得：gain/get/acquire 情绪类 感谢：grateful/appreciative/thankful 孤独的：lonely/isolated/solit
9、ary14续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1I cant help but smile every time because I am really grateful to know the girl grows up healthily.（运用了because 引导的原因状语从句）高分句型2 She said that it was my company and encouragement that not only made her happy,but also improved her confidence.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和强调句型）15Part 3范文呈现16范文呈现The
10、n,she told me something more I hadnt known before.She was also a new student at that time.Because of language barriers,shyness and difficulties in study,she had to put up with great pressure.At that noon when I met her,getting the worst exam score in her class,she was laughed at by her classmates.Sh
11、e felt lonely and hopeless until I approached her warmly.From then on，we two often learned together and shared happiness and sorrow.17范文呈现Both of us gained a lot from the incident.She said that it was my company and encouragement that not only made her happy,but also improved her confidence.For me,i
12、t was her sincerity that helped me adapt to a new life.I cant help but smile every time because I am really grateful to know the girl grows up healthily.It shows that a simple kind act has the extraordinary ability to change ones life.18范文译文然后，她告诉了我一些我以前不知道的事情。当时她也是一名新生。由于语言障碍、害羞和学习困难，她不得不忍受巨大的压力。那天中午，当我见到她时，她考得全班最差，被同学们嘲笑。她感到孤独和绝望，直到我热情地走近她。从那时起，我们俩经常一起学习，分享快乐和悲伤。我们俩都从这件事中受益匪浅。她说，是我的陪伴和鼓励，不仅让她快乐，也增强了她的自信心。对我来说，是她的真诚帮助我适应了新的生活。每次我都忍不住微笑，因为我真的很感激知道这个女孩健康地成长。它表明，一个简单的善举具有改变一个人生活的非凡能力。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you!
