1、假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，以写好个人申请书和简历（resume）。你给外教Mr.Jenkins写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数80词左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯书信作文的类型书信作文的类型申请 建议 感谢 求助 道歉 告知 邀请 咨询 祝贺 投诉书信作文的套路书信作文的套路开头段：（问候+自我介绍+）写作背景+写作目的中间段：根据题干内容写，适当发散结尾段:补充说明+客套话书信作文的套话书信作文的套话问候：How are you doing?自我介绍：I m Li Hua,a 17-year-old boy/teenager,cur
2、rently studying in XXX middle school,who is greatly interested in XXX.写作背景：写作背景：Recently,I have learned(in your last letter)that.写作目的：写作目的：So,Im writing to do sth.申请：申请：to apply for the opportunity/job/position.建议：建议：to offer you some humble suggestions.求助：求助：to turn to you for help.邀请：邀请：to invite
3、you to join us(as our honored guest/judge/contestant)感谢：感谢：to express my heartfelt gratitude to you.祝贺：祝贺：to express my heartfelt congratulations to you.投诉：投诉：to express my complaints and offer you some humble suggestions.告知：告知：to inform you of some relevant details.咨询：咨询：to ask you for some relevan
4、t questions.我希望：Hopefully,you will do sth.我相信：I have the confidence that.做决定：Please drop me a line to let me know your decision soon.请回信：I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.感谢你：Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.客套话：客套话：假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，以写好个人申请书和简历（resum
5、e）。你给外教Mr.Jenkins写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。开头段：问候+自我介绍+写作背景+写作目的 How are you doing?I am Li Hua,a 16-year-old teenager,currently studying in your school.写作背景：暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，以写好个人申请书和简历（resume）写作背景：Recently，I plan to apply for a part-time job in a foreign company in the coming summer vacation and I ha
6、ve written my application letter and resume.写作目的：请外教帮忙So Im writing to turn to you for help.开头段：Hello.I am Li Hua,a 16-year-old teenager currently studying in your school.Recently,I plan to apply for a part-time job in a foreign company in the coming summer vacation and I have written my application
7、 letter and resume.So Im writing to turn to you for help.请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）For one thing,would you be so kind as to tell me if my application letter has been written in the correct format?For another,I would appreciate it if you could help me improve my vocabulary and grammar used in my applic
8、ation letter,which is of great significance to me.一方面；另一方面For one thing,.For another,.结尾段:补充说明+客套话我希望+感谢+期待回信Hopefully,you could do me a favor and help me with this precious chance.Thank you very much.I m looking forward to your pleted version:Hello.I am Li Hua,a 16-year-old teenager currently study
9、ing in your school.Recently,I plan to apply for a part-time job in a foreign company in the coming summer vacation and I have written my application letter and resume.So,Im writing to turn to you for help.For one thing,would you be so kind as to tell me if my application letter has been written in t
10、he correct format?For another,I would appreciate it if you could help me improve my vocabulary and grammar used in my application letter,which is of great significance to me.Hopefully,you could do me a favor and help me with this precious chance.Thank you very much.I m looking forward to your reply.
