1、The attributive clauses The attributive clauses application to English writingapplication to English writing定语从句在英语写作当中的应用Lead-in ActivityLead-in ActivitySheistheone_youneverforgetSheistheheaven-sentangelyoumetOh,shemustbethereason_godmadeagirlSheissoprettyallovertheworldthatwhyListen to a song and
2、fill in the blanks.ReviewReview写作中什么时候会想到用定语从句？Last Saturday I watched a concert.The concert was wonderful.Last Saturday I watched a concert which was wonderful.1.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一Tips：找出两个简单句中出现的同一个事物，找出两个简单句中出现的同一个事物，将其中一个简将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意意关系词关系词
3、的选用）的选用）Gu Ailin participated in Winter Olympic Games,_.which made her polular.1.Gu Ailin participated in Winter Olympic Games.2.It made her popular.Use attributive clause to combine the sentences.I will never forget the day.On that day Gu Ailin won the gold medal in Beijing.I will never forget the
4、day,_on which/when Gu Ailin won the gold medal in Beijing.Gu Ailing jumped into the top position with her third run scoring 94.50.Gu Ailings eyes were sparkling with confidence and happiness.Gu Ailing jumped into the top position with her third run scoring 94.50,_ whose eyes were sparkling with conf
5、idence and happiness.The training hall is not far from here.The athletes often does some training there.The training hall _ is not far from here.where the atheletes often does some trainingAn hour later,I saw a man.He was running towards me.An hour later,I saw a man _who was running towards me.Pract
6、icePractice用定语从句改写下列句子：This is a dream.The dream will never come true.This is a dream which/that will never come true.I still keep the card.You sent me the card on my 13th birthday.I still keep the card which/that you sent me on my thirteenth birthday.I love the film star.The film star is very popul
7、ar in China.I love the film star who/that is very popular in China.The thief has been sent to prison.The police caught the thief last night.The thief who/whom/that the police caught last night has been sent to prison.The boy is my classmate.The boys father is a policeman.PracticePractice用定语从句改写下列句子：
8、The boy whose father is a policeman is my classmate.She will never forget the day.She got married on that day.She will never forget the day when she was married.I want to know the place.I was born there.I want to know the place where I was born.Practice 1Practice 1用定语从句改写下列句子：Who can tell me the rea
9、son?Tom was absent from school today.Who can tell me the reason why Tom was absent from school today?写作中定语从句易错点聚焦假冒伪劣的定语从句1.MyfriendJane，whoisveryfriendlytousclassmates.(正)MyfriendJaneisveryfriendlytousclassmates.(正)MyfriendJane,whoisveryfriendlytousclassmates,hasavarietyofhobbies.切忌虎头蛇尾，注意切忌虎头蛇尾，注意
10、有从句但没有主句的句子。有从句但没有主句的句子。写作中定语从句易错点聚焦假冒伪劣的定语从句2.Thosewhoagainstitthinkthatitisunnecessarytomovethezoosoutofthecity.(正)Thosewhoare againstitthinkthatitisunnecessarytomovethezoosoutofthecity.注意定语从句的成分要完整，不能缺谓语。注意定语从句的成分要完整，不能缺谓语。3.Ihavemanycollectionsofstamps,andsomeofwhicharemyfavorite.写作中定语从句易错点聚焦假冒伪
11、劣的定语从句Ihavemanycollectionsofstamps,someofwhicharemyfavorite.注意画蛇添足，并列连词和关系词一起用。注意画蛇添足，并列连词和关系词一起用。Practice 2Practice 2用定语从句补充下列句子：Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,(它已成为我们学校的新地标).Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,(这让它疯狂地跑).IwouldliketointerviewZhangHaidi,(她的经历深深地鼓舞了我).which has b
12、ecome the new landmark in our schoolwhich made it run wildly whose experience has inspired me deeplyPractice 3Practice 3用定语从句翻译下列句子：我非常珍惜你给我提供的那个和英国学生交流的机会。去年我参加了在北京举行的夏令营,这不仅开阔了我的视野,也提高了我的英语口语水平。学校已经创造了一种可以让我们自由发展自己兴趣的氛围/平台。I fairly cherish the opportunity that you offered me to communicate with Br
13、itish students.Last year,I joined the summer camp in Beijing,which not only broadened my horizons but also improved my oral English.The school has created an atmosphere/a platform where we can develop our own interests freely.Group Task:书面表达:根据如下提示，用适当的定语从句写一篇短文（不超过5句话）1.我的语文老师,名叫Tom,是个来自中国的年轻人。2.20
14、22年9月1日是一个特别的日子，那一天他给我们上了充满活力而有趣的第一堂课。3.也许，这就是我从此爱上铁外（Tieyi Foreign Language School）的原因之一。4.我想无论将来我生处何方，我都会想念这所Tom曾经教过我的学校。A sample for you!My Chinese teacher,whose name is Tom,is a young man who comes from China.September 1st,2022 was a special day when he gave us his first energetic and interestin
15、g lesson.Perhaps this is one of the reasons why I began to love Tieyi Foreign Language School.I believe I will miss this school where Tom used to teach us,wherever I will be in the future.Homework Tryembellishingwhatyouhavewritten,andfinishtherestpartofthecompositionindividually.将自己已经写完的句子加以修改润色，并完成作文剩余部分。Thank You!
