1、都占华 Brainstorming Friends Appearance Personality Hobbies thin lips,thick lips,big nose,eye,round face,long face,fat,thin heavy,slim,plump,tall,short,of medium height,ot midium build，long hair,short hair,curly hair, funny,able,active,friendly,c areful,clever,cute,brave,ho nest,dishonest,outgoing,e as
2、y-going,forgetful, happy,hard-working,kind, kindhearted,strict ,selfless, selfish， like, love,enjoy,be fond of,be good at,be interested in 用上面的动词用上面的动词 说出你喜欢的句子说出你喜欢的句子 My best friend I dont really care if my friends are the same as or different. My favorite saying is,“A true friend reaches for your
3、 hand and touches your heart.”My best friend Carol is really beautiful.She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes. She is really kind and funny.In fact,shes funnier than anyone I know.She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she makes jokes in class and gets into trouble.And I stil
4、l remeber I broke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen. After class,Carol and I like to go to the movies and we like to talk about our favorite actors,singers.In a word, I think good friends should not only help each oth
5、er but also share happiness and sadness together. QuestionsQuestions What is the passage about? The passage is about friends. Please divide the whole passage into three parts. How to introduce your friend? 导 入 主 题 导 入 主 题 My best friend I dont really care if my friends are the same as or different.
6、My favorite saying is,“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.” My best friend Carol is really beautiful.She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes. She is really kind and funny.In fact,shes funnier than anyone I know.She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she
7、 makes jokes in class and gets into trouble.And I still remeber I broke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen. After class,Carol and I like to go to the movies and we like to talk about our favorite actors,singers. In a w
8、ord, I think good friends should not only help each other but also share happiness and sadness together. I dont really care if my friends are the same as or different. My favorite saying is,“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.” In a word, I think good friends should not only
9、help each other but also share happiness and sadness together. 首段点明交友观点首段点明交友观点 尾段总结提升尾段总结提升 语语 篇篇 分分 析析 1st part: introduce who the friend is Sentence 1 4th part: activities they do together Sentence 8 Sentence 2-4 Sentence 5-7 2nd part: appearance 3rd part: personality 1. 框架结构框架结构 总总-分分-总总，首段点明交友观
10、点首段点明交友观点，尾段总结提升尾段总结提升，中间段层次清中间段层次清 晰；晰； 2. 学会句子间概括与解释的关系；学会句子间概括与解释的关系； 3. 过渡词句的运用；过渡词句的运用； 4. 文采好句文采好句 学 海 拾 贝 学 海 拾 贝 来自阅读文章的写作领悟来自阅读文章的写作领悟 找出文中句子间概括与解释的关系的句子找出文中句子间概括与解释的关系的句子 1. Carol is really beautiful.-She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes. 2. She is really kin
11、d and funny.-She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she makes jokes in class and gets into trouble.And I still remeber I broke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen. 举 一 反 三 举 一 反 三 积累经典句和谚语积累经典句和谚语 锦 上 添 花 锦 上 添 花 1. My mothe
12、r told me a good friend is like a mirror. 2. I think friends are like books-you dont need a lot of them as long as theyre good. 3. Its not necessary to be the same. 4. My best friend Larry is quite different from me. 5. However, Larry often helps to bring out the best in me. 行文连贯自助餐行文连贯自助餐 1.表因果表因果
13、so,for,because,therefore; 2.并列型并列型 as well as,and,also; 3.比较型比较型 as.as,than; 4.举例型举例型 for example,such as,and so on; 5.归纳型归纳型 in a word,in the end, at last,finally; 6.转折型转折型 however,but,though,although; 熟 能 生 巧 熟 能 生 巧 学 以 致 用 学 以 致 用 请以请以 My best friend My best friend 为题写一篇文章，从朋友的外为题写一篇文章，从朋友的外 貌、性
14、格、爱好等方面描写朋友，同时写出交友观点。貌、性格、爱好等方面描写朋友，同时写出交友观点。 要求：要求： a. a. 文章结构清晰，语言流畅：文章结构清晰，语言流畅： b. b. 书写美观、大方；书写美观、大方； c. c. 词数要求：词数要求：8080-100100； 1. 主要内容 ？ 2. 时态？人称? 3. 首段？尾段？ 4. 第二段中，层次？ 5. 2-3个好句式 作文分析作文分析 关于朋友关于朋友 一般现在时、第三人称、第一人称一般现在时、第三人称、第一人称 用你积累的经典句和谚语来完成首用你积累的经典句和谚语来完成首 段和尾段段和尾段 Friends Appearance Personality Hobbies hair, face funny sports，food
