读后续写十句五定（ppt课件）-2025届高三英语一轮复习.rar

高考英语读后续写高考英语读后续写十句五定When I was a kid in Pennsylvania,my family rehabilitated(使康复)wild animals.I grew up with animals running around the house.We would go travelling to Bermuda and I would watch the whales off the shore.I fell in love with them and wanted to know more about what they got up to underwater.Now Ive been studying whales for more than30 years and I am the president of the Center for Whale Research and Conservation.In 2017,I was on a boat around Rarotonga in the Cook Islands,working on a film about whale conservation.The crew wanted to get more footage of me in the water with the humpback whales I often slip in quietly to record their behaviour for research.Seeing a couple of humpbacks in the distance,I slid off the boat wearing a mask and swam towards them.As I was approaching,one of the male humpbacks came right up to me,touching me with his head and pushing me through the water.It caught me off-guard in 33 years of doing this work,this had never happened.I put my arm out and tried to push myself away while he attempted to roll up me under his pectoral fin(胸鳍).My scientist brain was in overdrive as I tried to work out what he was doing.I felt a mixed sense of excitement and fear.Then the whale swam underneath me and lifted me out of the water on his fin.I signaled to the boat,then swoosh I was pushed back under.After minutes of being pushed around by the humpback,I saw what I thought was a second,smaller whale.But then I noticed the tail whales move theirs up and down,and this one was moving side to side.I realized with horror that it belonged to a huge,18-foot tiger shark.Tiger sharks are known to attack people,sometimes fatally(致命地).第一步：审背景(Settings)WhenIn 2017Whereon a boat around Rarotonga in the Cook Islands角色(Characters)WhoI(the president of the Center for Whale Research),One humpback whale第一步：审情节(Plot)What1After seeing humpbacks,I slid off the boat and headed towards them.2One of humpbacks,came to me,touching me and pushing me through the water3The whale swam underneath me and lifted me out of the water on his fin.4 A huge tiger shark swam towards me.Why第一步：审情感(Feelings)Howa mixed sense of excitement and fear-frightened第二步：定主题人与自然和谐相处Live in harmony with the nature.你保护大自然，大自然保护你You embrace the nature which will give you a hug.第三步：思情节1.三个一致原则原文一致时态一致人物一致2.牢记“7个不”法则3.十句五定The shark had arched its body,which meant that it was in attack mode.S1S2S3S4S5根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句根据第二段的首句逆推根据第二段的首句逆推逃跑逃跑得救得救3.十句五定Just over a year later,I was on a boat in the same area when I heard of a whale sighting in the harbour.S1S6S7S8S9S10根据第二段的首句顺推根据第二段的首句顺推根据推断写结局根据推断写结局点题点题回忆回忆与鲸鱼告别与鲸鱼告别The shark had arched its body,which meant that it was in attack mode.S1S2S3S4S5根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句S3-S4 鲸鱼帮助我逃跑的这一过程。鲸鱼帮助我逃跑的这一过程。逃跑逃跑得救得救根据第二段的首句逆推根据第二段的首句逆推S2 情绪怎么样Just over a year later,I was on a boat in the same area when I heard of a whale sighting in the harbour.S6S7S8S9S10根据第二段的首句顺推根据第二段的首句顺推根据推断写结局根据推断写结局点题点题回忆回忆与鲸鱼告别与鲸鱼告别S7-S8 与鲸鱼互动与鲸鱼互动The shark had arched its body,which meant that it was in attack mode.S1：根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句：根据文章的末尾以及第一段的首句逃跑逃跑S1:I desperately swam towards the boat without hesitation,yelling out to the crew.得救得救S5：根据第二段的首句逆推：根据第二段的首句逆推S5:Fortunately,I finally succeeded in reaching the boat with the whales continuous assistance.After that,I breathed a sigh of relief.My gratitude was beyond my description.第四步：遣词造句（第一段）The shark had arched its body,which meant that it was in attack mode.S2S3S4S3-S4 鲸鱼帮助我逃跑的这一过程。鲸鱼帮助我逃跑的这一过程。S2情绪怎么样S2:A wave of horror overwhelmed me,with my heart pounding wildly.S3:However,the fierce animal rushed towards me like an arrowS4:The whale realized that I had difficulty in having a narrow escape,so it pushed me through the water as quickly as possible.Just over a year later,I was on a boat in the same area when I heard of a whale sighting in the harbour.S6 根据第二段的首句顺推根据第二段的首句顺推S10点题点题回忆回忆第四步：遣词造句(第二段)S6:At the first sight of the whale,the vivid memory of that astonishing encounter welled up in my mind.S10:What I experienced proves that you embrace the nature which will give you a hug.Just over a year later,I was on a boat in the same area when I heard of a whale sighting in the harbour.S9根据推断写结局根据推断写结局与鲸鱼告别与鲸鱼告别S7-S8 与鲸鱼互动与鲸鱼互动S9:Happy moments are always fleeting.The sun set down gradually.We had to say goodbye to each other in the spectacluar sunset glow.S7:I couldnt help taking off my clothes,putting on diving suit and heading to the whale.S8:I touched its head gently and kissed its cheek with great joy.Then,the whale put me on its head and swam merrily.第五步：成文（字迹工整、清晰、美观）I desperately swam towards the boat without hesitation,yelling out to the crew.A wave of horror overwhelmed me,with my heart pounding wildly.However,the fierce animal rushed towards me like an arrow.The whale realized that I had difficulty in having a narrow escape,so it pushed me through the water as quickly as possible.Fortunately,I finally succeeded in reaching the boat with the whales continuous assistance.After that,I breathed a sigh of relief.My gratitude was beyond my description.第五步：成文（字迹工整、清晰、美观）At the first sight of the whale,the vivid memory of that astonishing encounter welled up in my mind.I couldnt help taking off my clothes,putting on diving suit and heading to the whale.I touched its head gently and kissed its cheek with great joy.Then,the whale put me on its head and swam merrily.Happy moments are always fleeting.The sun set down gradually.We had to say goodbye to each other in the spectacluar sunset glow and I steered the boat to the coast reluctantly.What I experienced proves that you embrace the nature which will give you a hug.Thank you