1、 书面表达专题 重庆市缙云教育联盟2020-2021学年八年级10月月考英语试题 六、书面表达（本大题共 1 小题，共 15.0 分） 1. 根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友 Nancy的相同之处和不同之 处。 要求：(1)包含表格信息，可适当发挥；(2)词数 90 词左右。 人物 不同点 相同点 Nancy (1) 比我高得多，更外向 (2)更擅长唱歌、跳舞 (3)喜欢去听音乐会 (1)喜欢运动 (2)学习努力，各门功课都学得 好 (3)喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起 去图书馆 我 (1)喜欢上网 (2)喜欢旅游 【答案】 Nancy is my best friend. In
2、 some ways, we are the same. Both of us like sports. We are both hardworking and good at our subjects. We both like reading, and we usually go to the library together on weekends. But in some ways we are different. She is taller and more outgoing than me. She is better at singing and dancing. She li
3、kes going to the concert. For me, I like surfing the Internet. And I love traveling. In fact, I dont really care if my friend are the same as me or different from me. 【解析】【思路点拨】 本文是提示作文，要求根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友 Nancy的相 同之处和不同之处。要求包括表格中的所有内容，并可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得 语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，
4、本文主要使用 第一人称和第三人称，一般现在时。 【亮点词汇】、 In some ways 在某些方面； be good at擅长； on weekends 在周末； In fact事实上； the same as和一样。 【高分句型】 She is taller and more outgoing than me. （形容词比较级） In fact, I dont really care if my friend are the same as me or different from me.（if 引导的宾语从句） 重庆市七校联盟2020-2021学年八年级上学期第二次月考英语试题 六、书面
5、表达（本大题共 1 小题，共 15.0 分） 假如你是 Tony， 你为即将到来的暑假做了规划， 具体内容见下表。 请以“My plan for the summer holiday”为题写一篇 90 词左右的短文介绍你的暑期计划。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My plan for the summer holiday Time July 10th to September 1st. Keep good habits Go to bed early and get up early. Do sports every day. Activities Finish my homework. Rea
6、d some wonderful books. Visit my grandparents. Help with the housework. Go on a trip. 参考词汇：energetic精力充沛的 My plan for the summer holiday The summer holiday is coming. It will start _ _40. 【答案】 The summer holiday is coming. It will start on July 10th and end on Sep. 1st. I have made some plans for it
7、. Firstly, I will keep good habits. I plan to go to bed early and get up early in the morning so that I will be energetic during the day. To keep healthy, I will do sports every day. Whats more, I will not only finish my homework carefully but also keep on studying such as reading some wonderful boo
8、ks. Besides, when I am free, I will visit my grandparents more often and help my mother with the housework. If the weather is good, I plan to go on a trip with my good friends. Im sure I will spend a colorful and meaningful summer holiday. 【解析】【思路点拨】 本文是一篇命题作文。要求根据表格提示描述自己的暑期计划。我们首先要注意人称以第一人 称为主，时态以
9、一般将来时为主。其次在写作时，可以采取总分总的结构，首先简要概述 暑假将至自己为之做了一些计划，然后再详细介绍暑假计划，最后再简要表达自己的希望。注 意逻辑合理，语言通顺。 【亮点词汇】 1.keep good habits 养成好习惯； 2.whats more 此外； 3.such as 例如 【高分句型】 1.If the weather is good, I plan to go on a trip with my good friends.（if引导的条件状语从句的使用） 2. Im sure I will spend a colorful and meaningful summer
10、 holiday.（宾语从句的使用） 重庆市缙云教育联盟2020-2021学年八年级9月月考英语试题 六、书面表达（） 2. 书面表达 请根据下列提示,以“Good Manners, Our Duty”为题,写一篇短文。提示: (1) 遵守校纪，不乱扔废弃物，保持校园清洁; (2)爱护花草树木，让校园充满绿色; (3)不追逐哄闹，举止文明; (4)关爱他人，让校园充满爱。 要求:1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和班级 2)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范 3)包含以上要点，并适当发挥，词数不少于 80 _ _ 【答案】Good Manners, Our Duty As students, i
11、t is our duty to be a person with good manners. Good manners are very important in our lives. They help us to get on well with each other. A person with good manners is kind and polite, and he does not laugh at people who are in trouble. Instead, he tries to help them. He knows to help others means
12、to help himself. He doesnt throw rubbish everywhere and does what he can to keep the school clean and tidy. He takes care of trees and grass and makes the school full of green plants. He doesnt run after others and he acts politely. If everyone tries his best to be a person with good manners, our so
13、ciety will become peaceful and the world will be more and more beautiful. Lets be a person with good manners. 【解析】【思路点拨】 本文时态以一般现在时为主。要覆盖所有内容要点。尽可能应用较多的语法结构和词汇。为 使文章增色，可使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇；有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构 紧凑。以达到预期的写作目的。 【亮点短语】 1.it is ones duty to do sth.做某事是某人的职责; 2.get on well with.和相处融洽; 3.run afte
14、r追赶，追逐; 【高分句型】 1.A person with good manners is kind and polite, and he does not laugh at people who are in trouble.（who引导定语从句） 2.If everyone tries his best to be a person with good manners, our society will become peaceful and the world will be more and more beautiful.（if引导条件状语从句） 重庆市七校联盟2020-2021学年
15、八年级上学期第一次月考英语试题 七、书面表达 在八年级即将结束之际，你们班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获 与变化。请准备一份 90 词左右的演讲稿，具体内容如下： 过去 现在 学习 很少阅读 读书使我放松 环保 随处乱抛垃圾 意识到环保的重要性，垃圾入桶 礼仪 大声喧哗，插队推挤 举止礼貌，主动让座 爱心 不知道关心他人 自由发挥12点 Hello, everyone. Back to the life in the past year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. _
16、 _ _ Im sure I will do better and better in Grade 9. Thanks for listening! 43.【答案】 Hello, everyone. Back to the life in the past year. I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. First, in the past I seldom read book. But now I like reading because good books help me relax aft
17、er a busy day. Second, I always dropped litter carelessly everywhere. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins. Third, I used to shout loudly or push in before others in public. Now. I can behave politely in public and I of
18、ten give my seat to someone in need on the bus. Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to donate all my pocket money and my books to Project Hope. Im sure I will do better and better in Grade 9. Thanks for listening! 【解析】【思路点拨】 本文为一篇提示作文。要求根据表格中内容，准备一份 90词左右的演讲稿，谈谈一年来自己 的收获与变化。本文主要使用第一
19、人称，时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时。要做到语言 规范，叙事清楚，不要遗漏任何要点，适当使用连词，使语句通顺。 【亮点词汇】 1.the importance of的重要性； 2.used to do sth.过去常常做某事； 3.in public在公共场所； 4.in need 需要帮助，处在困难中的； 5.care about担心，关心。 【高分句型】 1.I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.（省略了 that的宾语从句） 2.But now I like reading because
20、good books help me relax after a busy day.（because 引导的原因状 语从句） 重庆市巴南区七校共同体2020-2021学年八年级上学期第一次月考英语试题 IX 书面表达。 （20 分） 每个人都有自己最喜欢的体育运动。那么，你最喜欢的运动是什么？请以 My Favorite Sport 为 题，根据提示写一篇不少于 80120 字的短文,可适当发挥。 要求： 1. 你最爱的运动； 2. 喜欢的原因； 3. 通常什么时候进行,每次进行多久； 4. 运动带来的好处； My Favorite Sport I like sports very much,
21、 such as running,skating,playing basketball and so on. _ _ _ _ IX书面表达。 （共 20 分） One possible version: I like sports very much, such as running ,skating, playing basketball and so on.My favorite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. It is also a good way to lose weight.If you want
22、 to keep fit,you can have a try.I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. now I can swim very well .I usually spend an hour swimming in the swimming pool every Sunday. Swimming is really very interesting .If you swim in the water ,you will look like a lovely fish.And Im sure you will feel v
23、ery happy. my favorite swimming player is Sun Yang. I hope I will become a swimming player when I grow up. 评分和要求： 一、评分总则 1本题总分为 20 分，按 4 个档次给分； 2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量， 确定或调整档次，最后给分； 3评分时应注意的四大方面（按权重从高到低）依次为：内容要点、语言的正确性、连贯 与衔接、词汇句式的丰富程度； 4语言错误及影响了交际的书写在所属档次的基础上扣分。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求 第四档（优）
24、 ： （16-20 分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。 准确使用了丰富的词汇和语言结构。 全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语 言运用能力。 第三档（良） ： （11-15 分） 较好地完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。 恰当地使用了丰富的词汇和语言结构。 适当运用了语句间连接成分，较好地达到了交际的目的。 第二档（中） ： （6-10 分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 没有覆盖所有内容要点。 词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。 文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。 第一档（差） ： （0-5 分） 未完成试题规定的任务。
25、 漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定内容无关。 词汇和语言结构错误较多。 内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。 重庆市西北狼教育联盟2020-2021学年八年级上学期开学考试英语试题 IX. 书面表达。 （20 分） 2020 年以来，新冠病毒肆虐全球，中国政府在抗击新冠肺炎的过程中已取得了一定成效，所 以你的美国网友 Peter 想知道你的个人情况，并希望你分享中国人的一些做法，以便取得全球 性的抗疫成功。请根据以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件。 要点：1.你的爱好和特长; 2.你的外貌特征或生活习惯; 3.你的主要上学方式以及原因; 4.在今年抗击新冠肺炎中你及周围的人的做法 要求：1.80 字词左右; 2.书写工整、规范。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 提示词：抗击新冠肺炎:fight against COVID-19, 口罩：face masks Dear Peter, Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about myself first. Yours sincerely, Li Ping 略
