1、 假定你是李华，你的笔友Amy最近写了一封e-mail给你，表达了因体重过 重带来的烦恼。请你安慰Amy， 并给她建议，内容包括： 1. 表达安慰； 2. 给出建议； 3. 你的祝福 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ 应用文写作 写作结构： 首段：表明写作意图（写作背景+写信目的） 先安慰，接着写作题图：就如何强身健体提出建议； 中间段：具体建议及理由： a. 平衡饮食 b. 经常锻炼 c. 尾段：希望建议是有帮助的。 I (do) hope that my suggestions are helpful/useful/beneficial
2、. 首段：写信背景+写信目的 Im sorry to heart/that you are now having trouble/difficulty in doing sth, such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful./Now Im writing to give you some advice Learning/Knowing that you., I quite understand that. If you want to do., please refer to the
3、 following. Im glad/delighted to receive your letter asking for advice on. here are some tips/suggestions/advice to help you. Practical and effective measures must be taken immediately to improve the current situation. 尾段： I do hope that my suggestions are helpful/useful/beneficial. I hope you will
4、find these suggestions beneficial/constructive. and I believe, with your effort, you can manage to do sth. . I think you can make it if you following the suggestion above. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way. 我希望这些建议会对你有用。 记住：有志者事竟成。 I sinc
5、erely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建 议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 中间段可用句式戒连接词 1. As far as Im concerned, theres no need for you to do sth. 2. why no do sth.? if you do this, you can. 3. you may as well do sth. /you had bette
6、r do sth. 你不妨做./你最好做. 4 Only in this way/by doing so+倒装句 5. in addition/additionally, it will be a wise choice if you do sth. 连接词： 1.For one thing.and for another (thing)一则，.再则, . On the one hand,. on the other hand,. 一方面，.但另一方面, . 2. First of all/ To begin with. Second (ly) / Besides/ Whats more./I
7、n addition/Additionally Moreover/Furthermore此外/ More importantly更重要的是 Finally(最后)/Most importantly(最重要的是，) Application: 首段 1. 得知你担心你的体重，我非常理解你有多焦虑不安。因此， 我写信给你一些建议。 _ that you are worried about your weight, I quite understand_ upset and anxious you feel. Learning/Knowing how _. such problems are quit
8、e normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. Im sorry to learn that you are now having trouble with your weight 利用已给句式仿写： Application:中间段(2-3个建议) 2. 平衡饮食（理由） 你最好能平衡饮食, 少糖少脂，多吃水果。(建议) keep a balanced diet had better do sth. be low/poor in Youd better keep a balanced diet which is poor in
9、sugar and fat and eat more fruits. In this way/by doing so, you will be healthier. 这样做的话，你能更健康。(理由) Application: 中间段 3. 经常锻炼（理由） 经常锻炼不但能增强体质，还能让你苗条。 Working out regularly will not only built up your strength, but also allow you to be slim. Working out regularly is a wise choice,/It is a good choice
10、to work out regularly, which will not only build up your strength but allow you to be slim. Application:尝试把两个建议放一起 这不但能增强体质，还能让你变得苗条又苗条（理由） 平衡饮食和经常锻炼能有大作用（建议）。 A balanced diet and regular exercise can _ . It can not only build up your strength but also allow you to be slim and healthy. Application:中
11、间段 4. 足够的睡眠（理由） 足够的睡眠对你来说是有好处的.（建议） 谚语说得 好：早睡早起让人健康、富有、聪明。（理由） Enough sleep is you. Just as the saying goes: Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. 适当增加细节（结合文章）： 老实说，如果我是你，我会更考虑健康而不是体重。 To be honest/Honestly speaking, if I were you, I would think more about/focus more
12、on/pay more attention to fitness rather than weight. 我认为，通过对自己和自己的身体保持积极的态度，我变得更快乐，更健康 only only will you Application:尾段 我希望我的建议是有用的。记住：有志者事竟成。 I hope these suggestions will be of use/useful to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way. be of help/helpful to be of benefit/beneficial to 尝试
13、其他形式的结尾 Combination one: Dear Amy, Learning you are having trouble with your weight. such problems are quite normal.(安慰) Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. _, youd better keep a balanced diet poor in sugar and fat and eat more fruits.By doing so, you will be healthier.(建议1和理由) _,it is a
14、good choice to work out regularly, which will not only build up your strength but allow you to be slim(定语从句).(建议2和 理由) Honestly speaking,only will you (增加的细节) I do hope(强调句) these suggestions will be of use to you. (100词) Yours, Li Hua Combination two: Dear Amy, Knowing that you are worried about yo
15、ur weight, I quite understand how upset and anxious you feel. Actually, things would improve if we followed the suggestions below. Firstly, a balanced diet and regular exercise make a difference, which not only helps you watch your figure but also contributes to a healthy life. Besides, have you tho
16、ught about avoiding sugary drinks and fruit juice? Sugar is the first cause of gaining weight. Frankly speaking, if I were you, I would focus more on fitness rather than weight. A good healthy body is worth more a crown in gold.(谚语：健康比黄金做的皇冠更贵重。) All the best, I hope these suggestions are beneficial
17、! Yours, Li Hua Whats wrong with the composition? 1. To begin with, it would be wiser to balance your diet. You should add healthy foods to your meals. (傅梦语) 2. Additionally, you should hold a positive attitude, which can reduce your pressure. (傅梦语) 5. Working out regularly. And it will help you bui
18、ld up your strength and your anxiety may be relieved by doing so. (刘倩) 6. You are supposed to listen to some smooth music or admire the beauty of nature, which makes you more relaxed and learn something new about nature.(刘倩) 8. Rather than cutting out the foods, you add healthy foods to your meals.
19、(杨雅莉) 9. You may as well exercise more. Never will you find a better way to work out weight problems than exercising.(陈欣) 10. Whats more, you need to develop a good attitude to life which will give you more efforts to deal with the weight problems that you face. (陈欣) 12. Especially important is working out regularly.(黄瑞 珊) （完全倒装句） 13. By being positive about yourself and your body, you will become both happier and healthier.(黄瑞珊) 15. You may as well have a balanced diet. I think it is useful to keep fit. (何宇杰) 16. Whats more, youd better keep a positve mind， _. (何宇杰)
