1、Section Writing 写作指导 针对训练 读后续写读后续写 读后续写是近年来高考新增题型。此题型要求考生根据提供的 语言材料、所给段落开头语和所标关键词,续写成一篇结构完整、 与情节相符、逻辑衔接紧密的短文。本题考查考生对所学语言知 识的实际运用能力和发散思维能力。 文章选材以故事类记叙文为主,故事线索逻辑性强,所给出的段 落开头与上文联系紧密,指明了续写的方向。所标关键词与故事的 时间、地点、人物、事件密切相关。 读后续写要根据题目要求,在读懂原文的基础上,利用原材料的 素材、线索和情节等充分发挥想象力和创造力来进行文章续写。 读透材料和续写同等重要。续写段的情节并非唯一,可根据自
2、己的 理解续写不同的内容。在续写时要注意以下两个方面: 写作指导 针对训练 第一,续写段落的主题、人物、线索和语言风格要与所给材料一 致。续写时要紧扣所给材料的中心,遵循上文明示或暗示的线索, 按照材料中人物性格发展的规律,使用与原文风格一致的语言进行 续写。 第二,所续写的内容与所给材料结合在一起,必须是一个完整的 文章或片段。上下文衔接要自然,前后要照应。 写作指导 针对训练 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故 事。 Twenty years ago,I drove a taxi to make a living.One night I went to pick up
3、 a passenger at 2:30 am.When I arrived to collect her,the building was dark except for a single light in a ground-floor window.Under these circumstances,many other drivers would just honk(按喇叭) once. But I had seen too many poor people who depended on taxis as their only means of transportation.Unles
4、s a situation of danger,I always went to the door.“This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance,”I reasoned with myself. 写作指导 针对训练 So I walked to the door and knocked.“Just a minute”,answered a weak,elderly voice.I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a long pause,th
5、e door opened. A small woman in her eighties stood before me.By her side was a small nylon suitcase.The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years.All the furniture was covered with sheets. I took the suitcase at her request to the cab and put it in the trunk,and then returned to assist
6、 the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly toward the cab.When we got in the cab,she asked me to drive through downtown to a hospice(临终安养院). 写作指导 针对训练 Learning from her words that she wouldnt live long,I quietly reached over and shut off the meter. For the next two hours, we drove through the
7、city.She showed me the building where she had once worked as an elevator operator. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived when they were newly-weds.She had me pull up in front of a furniture warehouse that had once been a ballroom where she had gone dancing as a girl.
8、Sometimes shed ask me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness,saying nothing. As the first hint of the sun was creasing the horizon,she suddenly said,“Im tired.Lets go now.” 写作指导 针对训练 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已
9、为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: We drove in silence to a low building,her destination. Paragraph 2: I held her hand tightly,and then walked into the morning light. 写作指导 针对训练 参考范文 Paragraph 1: We drove in silence to a low building,her destination.When I opened the trunk and took out the
10、small suitcase,she reached into her purse and asked me how much she should pay for the service.While she insisted that I had to make a living,I declined,saying that I had other passengers.Almost without thinking,I bent and gave her a hug.She held me tightly.Our hug ended with her remark,“You gave an
11、 old woman a little moment of joy.”After a slight pause,she added,“Thank you.” 写作指导 针对训练 Paragraph 2: I held her hand tightly,and then walked into the morning light.Behind me,a door shut.It was the sound of the closing of a life.I didnt pick up any more passengers that shift.I drove aimlessly lost i
12、n thought.For the rest of that day,I could hardly talk.What if she had got another angry driver,or whoever was impatient to end his shift?What if I had refused to take the run,or had honked once,and driven away?On a quick review,I dont think that I have done anything more important in my life.(175 words)
