1、UNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUND Writing 单元写作导练单元写作导练 写一份旅行计划写一份旅行计划 本单元的写作项目属于新课标应用文中的“书信”， 具体是写一份旅游计划。这种写作题目要求我们就去某地 旅游给朋友写一封信，谈论一下自己的旅游计划旅游计划。 基本框架基本框架 1 1开头开头(beginning)开门见山地指出旅游目的 地和想参观的景点(main purpose for the trip)。 2 2主体主体(body)具体说明旅游目的地之外的其他 计划(other plans for the trip)和交通方式 (transport)。 3 3结尾结尾(end
2、ing)表达自己的想法和对对方的希 望或要求(final thoughts)。 1介绍功能或特点介绍功能或特点 (1)The theme of the park is. (2)You will enjoy doing/seeing. (3)It is known/famous for. (4)With so many attractions，no wonder more and more tourists come here for a visit. 2介绍地理位置介绍地理位置 (1)It is located/situated in the centre of. (2)It lies in/
3、to the south/east of. (3)On the top of.stands. 3介绍面积介绍面积 (1)It has/covers an area of.square kilometres. (2).with an area of.square kilometres. 4介绍历史介绍历史 (1). It has a history of.years. (2).with a history of.years. (3).has witnessed too much.in history. 5活动及介绍交通方式活动及介绍交通方式 (1)There are various/a vari
4、ety of activities for visitors to enjoy themselves. (2)You can reach the building/museum by. (3)You can get there a little more quickly by. 模板一模板一 The Chinese Ethnic Culture Park(中华民族园)，which covers_(面积)， lies in the east of _ (位置)The theme park，designed to _ (设计目的)，was opened to the public on _ (对外
5、开放的时间) The park is made up of_，where_(组成及展品)Apart from_，people can enjoy a variety of fancy food. Additionally，the park provides _ (活动) for visitors of different ages. In a word，visiting _ (总结陈述) will be rewarding for every visitor from different parts of the world. 模板二模板二 Dear_， Now I am an exchang
6、e student in China，and my time here is going well. I love everyone here，my new teachers and my classmates. Over the October holiday，my classmates and I are planning to go to _(目的地) to see _(景点)Ive heard that it is an amazing sight，and I cant wait to go. _(具体介绍此景点) Were going to visit several other p
7、laces in_(目的地)We are all looking forward to seeing _(景点)，because _(原因)Were taking _ (交通方式) I will write again soon and send photos to you. Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？Hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely， Tom 假定你是英国人杰克，五月份打算来中国旅行，请你给你的中国笔友李华写封信，要点 如下： 1你的旅行计划：北京泰山杭州； 2征求他的建议并
8、询问他是否愿意充当你的导游。 注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：紫禁城the Forbidden City；泰山Mount Tai Dear Li Hua， Im glad to tell you that Im going to visit China in May. _ _ Yours， Jack 审题 1确定文体：介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。 2主体时态：一般现在时或现在进行时。 3主体人称：以第一人称为主。 谋篇 谴词谴词 1如下 _ 2期盼 _ 3打算做某事 _ 4迫不及待做某事 _ 5充当 _ as follow
9、s look forward to intend to do sth. cant wait to do sth. act as 造句造句 1补全句子补全句子 (1)I am_Beijing，the capital of China. 我计划参观北京，中国的首都。 (2)I am _ the Great wall，the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. 我期盼着欣赏长城、紫禁城和一些漂亮的公园。 (3)_ it is one of the most famous mountains in China. 我听说它是中国最著名的山脉之一。 (4)I_
10、 enjoy the amazing sunrise there. 我迫不及待地欣赏那儿令人惊奇的日出。 (5)_ my travel plan? 你认为我的旅行计划怎么样？ planning to visit looking forward to enjoying Ive heard that cant wait to What do you think of/How do you like 2句式升级句式升级 (6)用用where引导定语从句合并引导定语从句合并(1)(2)句句 I am planning to visit Beijing，the capital of China. I a
11、m looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. I am planning to visit Beijing，the capital of China，where I am looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. (7)把把(3)(4)句合并成并列复合句句合并成并列复合句 (3)I have heard that it is on
12、e of the most famous mountains in China. (4)I cant wait to enjoy the amazing sunrise there. I have heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China and I cant wait to enjoy the amazing sunrise there. 成文成文 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一 篇100词左右的英语短文。 Dear Li Hua， Im glad to tell you that Im
13、going to visit China in May. _ _ _ Yours， Jack 参考范文参考范文 Dear Li Hua， Im glad to tell you that Im going to visit China in May. My arrangements are as follows. First，I am planning to visit Beijing，the capital of China，where I am looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and some be
14、autiful parks. Then I intend to go to visit Mount Tai in Shandong Province. Ive heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China and I cant wait to enjoy the amazing sunrise there. After that，I am also going to Hangzhou. It is said that it is a beautiful modern city with breathtaking natural sights，among which the West Lake is a wellknown tourist attraction. What do you think of my travel plan？Will you act as my guide and be ready to offer help whenever I need it？Hope to hear from you soon. Yours， Jack
