1、 目录 contents 01 01 字数 续写内容为150 词左右 材料 350词以内 要求 1.原文提供10处左右的标有下 划线的关键词语,所续写内容 应使用5处以上这些词语。 2.两段,每段的开头语已经给出 体裁 记叙文故事类 逻辑性较强 01 融洽度高 衔接合理 5个以上 关键词 语法 I began to hate school and told my mom what happened. content 03 03 My mother sat me down and began to talk. Para 1 Para 2 Tip 1 Then one day I did what
2、 my mother taught me and amazing things happened. Tip 2 Focus on the given sentence of para2 first. Because some information in it must be mentioned in para 1. Make use of the key words in the given sentences to infer more information. 03 My mother sat me down and began to talk. Para 1 Para 2 Then o
3、ne day I did what my mother taught me and amazing things happened. My mother I purpose dialogue feelings What to do Betsy I teacher dialogue response result 03 para1 para2 设计 考虑我在和母亲对 话的过程中的心理 活动,对话内容和 可能做出的反应。 考虑在学校里,我 是如何在老师和同 学们的帮助下化解 和Betsy之间的矛盾 (设计特殊事件) 设计的关键在于搭建本段 与前文、后文的桥梁,特 别注意动作描写、语言描 写、心理描
4、写 03 Be well connected to the given passage and the beginnings of the two paragraphs. self-evaluation (plot) Be well organized with at least 5 of the 10 given underlined words. Make sure the story develops logically and reasonably. Never ignore the basic tone of the article. 04 04 tip3 tip1 tip2 Usi
5、ng linking words effectively. Adding some details reasonably. Using different sentence structures. My mother sat me down and began to talk. “Look,” she held my hand, “There will always be mean people like Betsy in this world. That is hard to change. But you can change the way you handle them. Have y
6、ou ever heard of the saying, Treat them with kindness.?” I shook my head. “Its simple. Just show your kindness to the girl now and then. If she drops her pen, pick it up and hand it to her. Things like that. Just be nice to her.” Version 1 Then one day I did what my mother taught me and amazing thin
7、gs happened. Our teacher announced seriously that there would be an exam the next morning. As Betsy was not good at study, I offered to help her review. Betsy was surprised but grateful. She said shyly, “Youre so nice. I truly regret making those rude remarks on you. Can we be friends?” I was glad that I had followed my mums advice. It was just what I needed, and probably just what Betsy needed, too. Version 1