1、Part 4 Writing 应用文写作 写作题目 6 月 25 日,你校学生会组织了为四川长宁地震(2019.6.17) 灾区捐赠的活动。 同学们踊跃参加,共筹得善款 35,000 元,还有其他物资。假如你是校英语报的记 者李华,请根据以下要点用英语写一则新闻报道。 1.时间、地点、人物、活动; 2.同学们的反应。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计入总词数); 3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Students Donate Money to the Disaster Area By Li Hua, School Newspaper 思路点拨 主题 为灾区
2、捐款 体裁 应用文 人称 第一、三人称 时态 一般过去时为主 布局 第一段:活动简介 第二段:活动背景及活动过程 第三段:心得感受 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. vt.影响 2. vt.摧毁;毁灭 3. n.灾难 4. v.侵袭 5. n.供应;补给 6. n.努力 7. v.援助;帮助 8. v.递送;传达 答案 1.affect 2.destroy 3.disaster 4.strike 5.supply 6.effort 7.aid 8.deliver .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)6 月 25 日,我校学生会举办了向四川灾区捐款和捐赠物资的活动。 On J
3、une 25,the Students Union in our school held an activity to donate money and to the area in Sichuan. (2)6 月 17 日四川长宁发生的一场大地震造成了巨大损失。 A big earthquake in Changning, Sichuan province on June 17 . (3)地震影响到许多人,许多房屋和道路被毁。 The earthquake many people and lots of houses and roads . (4)我们学校的学生应该努力支援他们。 Stude
4、nts in our school should . (5)最后,我们把钱交给了红十字会,物资很快被送到了灾区。 In the end,the money was given to the Red Cross and we had the supplies to the disaster-stricken area quickly. (6)当学生们捐出自己的零花钱时,他们都笑了。 Students smiled when their pocket money. 答案 (1)supplies;disaster (2)caused great damage (3)affected;were des
5、troyed (4)make our effort to aid them (5)delivered (6)giving away 2.句式升级 (7)把上面的句(1)改写为使用被动语态 On June 25,an activity to donate money and supplies to the disaster area in Sichuan by the Students Union in our school. (8)把上面的句(2)改写为限制性定语从句 A big earthquake in Changning, Sichuan province on June 17 caus
6、ed great damage. (9)把上面的句(6)改写为含有“find+宾语+宾补”结构的句子 We found students when they gave away their pocket money. 答案 (7)was held (8)which/that happened (9)smiling 连句成篇 参考范文 Students Donate Money to the Disaster Area On June 25,an activity to donate money and supplies to the disaster area in Sichuan was h
7、eld by the Students Union in our school. A big earthquake which struck Changning, Sichuan province on June 17 caused great damage. The earthquake affected many people and lots of houses and roads were destroyed. Therefore,to show our concern, students in our school should make our effort to aid them
8、. The activity started from eight oclock and lasted two hours. In the end,the money was given to the Red Cross and we had the supplies delivered to the disaster-stricken area quickly. We found students smiling when they gave away their pocket money. Our efforts really made a difference. By Li Hua, S
9、chool Newspaper 写作积累 1.陈述事实常用的句型: A terrible storm hit/struck Japan. 强风暴袭击了日本。 It was a cool autumn night when the accident happened. 事故发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。 With the help of the rescue team, people who were trapped in the flood were saved. 在救援队的帮助下,困在洪水中的人们得救了。 2.陈述观点常用的句型: Clearly/Obviously/In my opinion/It
10、 seemed that people were shocked. 显然/在我看来/似乎人们震惊了。 3.揭示原因的表达方式: Because of/As a result of/Thanks to the help of the army, people who got injured were sent to the hospital immediately. 因为/由于/多亏有军队的帮助,受伤的人们立即被送到了医院。 4.总结全文的句型: In a word/To draw a conclusion/I believe we will rebuild a new city. 总之/我相信
11、我们将重建一个新城。 实战演练 答案见 P125 () 假定你是你校英语杂志特约小记者,上周你校开展了“爱心包裹”(Loving Parcels)捐赠活动,给洪涝灾区的学生捐赠物品。请根据以下内容写一篇新闻报 道。 活动内容: 1.全校师生捐赠物品; 2.填写爱心祝福卡片; 3.将包裹寄给灾区学生。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 概要写作 写作题目 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Most of the survivors have to stay in the open area overnight after a 7.1-m
12、agnitude quake toppled(使倒塌) houses, cut off power and first-aid materials supply in northwest Chinas Qinghai Province Wednesday while rescuers face difficulties in searching for the buried. Rescuers have set up more than 40 tents for survivors in the Gyegu Town, near the epicenter(震中)in the Tibetan
13、Autonomous Prefecture of Yushu in southern Qinghai. But the effort seems far less than enough for the area inhabited by some 100,000 people. Many people sought temporary shelters in buildings that remained unaffected by the tremor(轻微地震). In the yard of Yushus Sports Committee, nearly 1,000 people we
14、re sitting or lying on the ground in sheer(完全的)darkness. Some wrapped themselves up with quilts taken out from the debris(残骸).Some brought their own tents and others turned on the lights of motorcycles. “Im hungry and thirsty. Weve been waiting for help since the morning,” said Zhaxi Toinzhub. A wom
15、an said her three children were still buried in the rubble(瓦 砾). The National Meteorological Station forecast on Wednesday that temperatures may hit minus 3 degrees Celcius at night and 15 degrees Celcius in the daytime in the coming days. The town will see strong winds and sunny weather in the comi
16、ng days, providing favorable conditions for rescue operations. The town is located in a remote area in Qinghai and the quake and ensuing(随后的)landslides have damaged roads, causing great difficulties for rescuers and, especially, machines from outside to enter the region. “Rescuers had to dig with ba
17、re hands or iron sticks on Wednesday, looking forward to the arrival of digging machines,” said a rescuer surnamed Wang, who was working at a collapsed hostel. “The searching operation became even harder at night without lighting facilities,” he said. In addition, rescuers may easily get exhausted w
18、orking at a place with an altitude(海拔)of above 4,000 meters. Thousands of rescuers and medical staff are rushing to Yushu from many regions of China, bringing machines, disaster-relief materials and medicines to the quake-hit town. The government, organizations, enterprises and individuals are offer
19、ing donations of money and materials to the region. 思路点拨 本文是一篇即时性的专题新闻报道,报道的第一段即包含了新闻报道的基本 要素,交代了地震发生的时间、地点、生还者目前的状况和救援工作仍存在困难。 接下来的段落通过引用真实的数据和真实人物的语言以及通过描写真实场景进一 步交代玉树地震对人们造成的影响和目前的救援工作开展的情况。在写摘要时, 要注意抓取该新闻报道的要点,使用高度凝练、概括的语言。 一、阅读文本,抓取关键信息 第一段中即包含了新闻报道的关键信息:地震发生的时间、地点、生还者目 前的状况和救援工作仍存在困难,后续段落对此展开描
20、述。 二、总结主旨,归纳要点 要点 1:周三,在青海玉树发生了 7.1 级地震。 要点 2:生还者被迫在户外过夜;帐篷短缺,生还者不得不依赖临时避难处。 Survivors had to stay outside overnight. Without enough tents, . 要点 3:天气状况对救援工作有利,但道路受损、救援设备短缺和高海拔加重了救 援工作的困难程度。 The weather condition is favorable for the rescuing work, but , and are causing greater difficulties for the r
21、escuing work. 要点 4:大量救援人员和救援物资正送往玉树。 A lot of and are being sent to Yushu. 答案 要点 1:A 7.1-magnitude earthquake hit Yushu, Qinghai on Wednesday. 要点 2:they had to rely on temporary shelters 要点 3:the damaged roads;lack of facilities;the high altitude 要点 4:rescue workers;disaster-relief materials 三、组织语言、
22、试写摘要 1.将要点 1 和要点 2 合并为含有现在分词短语作结果状语的句子。 2. 要点 3 简化为一个简单句。 答案 1.A 7.1-magnitude earthquake hit Yushu, Qinghai on Wednesday, forcing survivors to stay outside overnight or rely on temporary shelters due to the limited tents. 2.Despite the favorable weather condition, the damaged roads, lack of facilit
23、ies and the high altitude are causing greater difficulties for the rescuing work . 参考范文 A 7.1-magnitude earthquake hit Yushu, Qinghai on Wednesday, forcing survivors to stay outside overnight or rely on temporary shelters due to the limited tents.(要点 1、2) Despite the favorable weather condition, the
24、 damaged roads, lack of facilities and the high altitude are causing greater difficulties for the rescuing work.(要点 3) Luckily, a lot of rescue workers and disaster-relief materials are being sent to Yushu.(要点 4) 写作积累 一、概要写作中的常用句式 1.表示文章的内容以及研究目的 This paper is aimed at/covers/mainly deals with. The
25、article focuses on the topic of. 2.表示研究的结论 The result showed that. The author found that. It was concluded that. 3.表示观点或建议 The author suggests/considers that. 二、概要写作中的常用过渡性词语 附加:in addition;as well as;besides;furthermore;moreover 结果:as a result;therefore;thus;consequently;eventually 对比/转折:however;de
26、spite;in spite of;on the contrary;instead of;compared with;in contrast with/to 肯定:certainly;obviously;of course;undoubtedly;apparently 条件:as long as;provided that 列举过渡:first of all;first;second;third;in the first place;to start with;finally 时间:meanwhile;at the moment 实战演练 答案见 P126 (2018 浙江浙南名校联盟高二上期
27、末联考,) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Nowadays the business of fast food is developing at a rapid speed. Have you ever thought twice before deciding to eat fast food? Even if it is easy to buy and cheap, the risks outweigh(超过) the five minutes of satisfaction that fast food brings. There are many risks
28、 when it comes to eating food thats made in just a few seconds. What you eat can affect your health. People who are addicted to fast food are more likely to suffer from various life-threatening diseases. Obesity(肥胖) can come when fast food is bought often. Fast food is made from a lot of fats and hi
29、gh calories. If it isnt removed, then you can grow to become obese. Even a small quantity of fast food contains many calories. People are fooled by its appearance and they tend to eat more. Thus, without knowing, they consume a lot of calories. Whats worse, obesity isnt the only risk. Heart disease
30、is also a danger. The more fats, sugar and salt you eat, the weaker your heart can grow. Another concern for most consumers is that they cant keep track of the sources of the food supplies in fast food restaurants. They never know about the living conditions of the animals killed for meat in those r
31、estaurants, like cows, pigs, and chickens. A recent study has suggested that bacteria have been found in about 38% of fast food. Even some soft drinks are now infected by food-borne illnesses that usually come from meat. Although fast food is one of the easiest and cheapest ways of eating, the healt
32、h risks arent worth your life, and risking your life for something that isnt good for you could cost thousands of dollars in hospital bills. It is important to eat healthily and make good choices when deciding what to put in your body. Dont be lazy and pick up fast food on your way home from work. P
33、art 4 Writing 应用文写作 实战演练 One possible version: Loving Parcels In order to help the students in the flood area, our school held a “Loving Parcels” donation activity last week. All of the teachers and students took an active part in the activity. They donated their clothes, books, and schoolbags and a
34、ll of them were badly needed. In addition, they also wrote down the best wishes to those students on cards, which would be collected and delivered to the schools that were affected by the flood. Not only did the activity help us express our care for the students and send our sincere wishes to them b
35、ut it also taught us that we should value what we have. 概要写作 实战演练 One possible version: Despite its popularity, fast food is the origin of various risks.(要点 1) Fast food has a negative influence on peoples health, leading to serious illnesses, like obesity and heart disease.(要点 2) Besides, the sources of fast food can be another potential health threat to its consumers.(要点 3) Considering the risks, it is essential to keep a healthy diet and make careful choices before eating.(要点 4)
