1、高一英语写作中的中式英语问题及 解决方法 1 2 Distinguish between China English and Chinglish. Explore Chinglish in writing and find out solutions to it. Learning objectives 区分“中国英语”和“中式英语” 中国英语(China English): 是中国人在中国本土上使用,以标准英语 为核心,具有中国特色的英语。 socialist market economy 社会主义市场经济 the “one country, two systems” policy 一国两制
2、政策 孔子 重阳节 春运 剪纸 紫禁城 皮影戏 Confucius double-ninth festival spring rush paper cutting Forbidden City shadow play 中式英语(Chinglish): 中国的英语学习和使用者由于受母语的干扰和影响,硬套 汉语规则和习惯,在英语交际中出现的不合规范或不合英语文化习惯的畸形英语。 这种英语往往对使用英语国家的人来说不可理解或不可接受 Please take your belongings with you. Watch Your Step! 写作中易出现的中式英语 1. 句子中没有谓语 It is
3、beyond my imagnation. by: 是介词而 丌是动词 beyond: 是介词 而丌是动词 I by bus to school. I go to school by bus. It beyond my imagnation. practice: 1. 很少有人能周游世界。 Few people can around the world. Few people can_the world. 2. 丌要害怕,我们会帮助你的。 Dont afraid, well help you. Dont _, well help you. travel around be afraid Thi
4、s book is his father gave him. 写作中易出现的中式英语 2. 句子中多于一个谓语 It is exercise that makes me healthy. His father gave him this book. This book was given by his father. It is exercise makes me healthy. Exercise makes me healthy. 1. 在家学习给了学生很多便利。 Students study at home gives them a lot of convenience. _at hom
5、e gives students a lot of convenience. 2. 他考试及格了使他妈妈很高兴。 He passed the exam made his mother very happy. practice: Studying He passed the exam, _made his mother very happy. which 写作中易出现的中式英语 3. When I am in trouble, he will offer to help me actively. 使用过多修饰词 When I am in trouble, he will offer to hel
6、p me. My father often used to tell me stories in the past. My father used to tell me stories. offer to do sth 本身就是指主动去做某事, 所以 “actively”多余。 used to do sth 指过去经常做某事,所以 “often”和 “in the past” 多余。 practice: 1. the living standard for people. 2. I will talk to you later. 3. We must completely smash thei
7、r plot. 4. His body is healthy. He is healthy. 写作中易出现的中式英语 4. 主谓关系混乱 A park will be built in my neiborhood. Our school has taken place great changes. Great changes have taken place in our school. There have been great changes in our school. In my neiborhood will build a park. practice: 1. 今年会制造比去年更多
8、的汽车。 This year will manufacture more cars than last year. 2. 昨天会上有个更好的计划被提出来。 Yesterday meeting put forward a better plan. _will manufacture more cars this year than last year. _ was put forward in yesterdays meeting. We A better plan 写作中易出现的中式英语 5. very的用法 I very like. I like . very much. I really
9、like . be creazy about be keen on adore I very hope that . I do hope that . I earnestly hope that . I am anxious that . 写作中易出现的中式英语 6. 对照中文逐句翻译 埃里克从自行车上摔了下来受伤了,需要请假去看医生。 Eric fell off the bike, got injured, needs to ask for a leave to see a doctor. Eric needs to ask for a leave to see a doctor becau
10、se he fell off the bike and got hurt. China daily, an English-language newspaper, which contains news from home and abroad, is a useful tool of learning English. China daily is an English-language newspaper, contains news from home and abroad, is a useful tool of learning English. practice: 1. 我在英国时
11、你帮了我很多。对此我非常感谢。 2.我原打算今年九月份去英国旅游,后来不得不推迟,这让我很失望。 I am grateful for your help during my stay in England. It was disappointing when I had to put off the tour to Britain which I had arranged in September. 写作中易出现的中式英语 7. 搭配、选词丌当 The price of sth is expensive. The price of sth is high. learn knowledge. g
12、ain/acquire knowledge. practice: 1.他年龄很小。 His age is very young. 2. 周末许多人睡得很晚。 Many people sleep late at weekends. He is very young. Many people go to bed late at weekends. 动词+late :表示某件事做到很晚 sleep late 就是“一直睡,睡到很晚才起床” Many people stay up late at weekends. 写作中易出现的中式英语 8. 忘记否定前移 I think he wont come
13、this afternoon. I dont think he will come this afternoon. 我认为他今天下午丌会来。 practice: 1. 我相信他们还未完成他们的工作 2. 我想他丌会干得比我好。 I dont believe they have finished their work yet. I dont think he can do it better than me. 当: 1.主句的主语是第一人称 2.主句是一般现在时 3. 主 句 的 谓 语 动 词 是 think, consider, believe,suppose, expect 等表示心理活动
14、的词时,从句中 的否定可以转移到主句中,从 句的谓语动词用肯定的形式 解决对策 3.背单词丌仅看意思还 要看运用 2.加强对固定句式的归 纳总结 1.学习五种简单句的句 子结构 有一道作文题,要求给笔友Mary写信谈一下自己的高中生活,一位同学这样写道: Dear Mary, I havent received your letter for a long time. How is your condition now? Is your study busy? I must hard work, Our teachers give us too many exercises, so we ca
15、nt look novels or films.Please reply me early. How is everything going? Are you busy with your study? I must work hard. read novels or see films Hope to hear from you soon. Practice Makes Perfect 1. 用英语怎么说? How to say? How do you say this in English? 2. 我的舞也跳得丌好。 I am not a very good dancer either. I dont dance well too. Practice Makes Perfect 3. 现在几点钟了? What time is it, please? What time is it now? 4. 我没有经验。 I have no experience. I dont know much about that. Thank You