1、Writing,Learning Aims:Learning important points:Help students how to write a good composition .Learning difficult points:Develop the students writing abilityby brainstorming.,Why is the earth unhappy?,Why is the earth unhappy?,water pollution,globe warming,cut down trees,problems,.,air pollution,too
2、 much rubbish,globewarming,car exhaust,no green fields,water pollution,cut down trees,What can we do to help the earth?,instead of,What can we do to help the earth?,Sort rubbish and recycle it,Plant more trees,Dont waste water.,Turn off the lights when you leave home.,Save the energy,Use fewer plast
3、ic bags,Ride a bike instead of driving a car,现在如何保护环境成为最热门的话题之一。我们的地球面临了很多问题，我们应当怎么保护她呢？请用Help the earth 为题写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈自己的想法。,Writing,1.这篇作文应分为几部分，每部分都写什么？,Groupwork,小组讨论，完成以下任务：,2.应选用哪种时态？用第几人称？,Structure,Problems,Solutions,Summary,Writing Structure,Outlining,Write by yourself,Connecting words:I
4、llustration: I think, I believe, in my opinionAddition: firstly, secondly, then , besides , at lastContrast: however, but, on the other handSummary: in short, in a word , so, therefore,评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价组员的作文。1. fluency流畅 consecution条理: (Yes or No) Beginning ( ) key sentences( ) linking word( ) ending
5、( )Choice of words and sentences: The number of spelling mistakes ( )The number of grammar mistakes ( )Does he or she write good words or sentences?( )3.Others:_ 第一档： 13-15分 符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语 言无误。第二档： 912分 基本符台题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达 较清楚， 语言有少量错误。第三档： 4-8分 部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清 晰，表达不够清楚，语言
6、有较多错误。第四档：0-3分不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个词。作者：_得分：_ 评价人:_,Groupwork,Share your compositionwith group members and correct the mistakes in the article.,summary,Stop Pollution !,Save The Earth!,NOW,Homework,Please rewrite this article on your composition book.,Homework,Thank you,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
