1、Writing初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导(一),Topic view: School life,新课标中关于写的要求:新课标中关于五级水平（即初中毕业要求达到的水平）的要求是： A.能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材；B.能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改；C.能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；D.能简单描述人物或事件；E.能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。,学习目的：1.了解中考书面表达的评分标准。2.掌握书面表达的类型及写作技巧。3.能够应用写作技巧及所学知识，完成 书面表达的写作。,思考1:watch and think（看一看，想一想）：What acti
2、vity is it?(这是什么活动？）Whats the purpose of it?（该活动目的是什么？）,猜一猜，这是什么活动,（请点击上面欣赏短片）,答：（这是英语书写比赛。 良好的书写是隐形的分数，练好字， 为英语写作得高分创造前提条件。）,思考2:How can we get top grades when we write the composition?（英语写作怎样写能得高分？）Do you remember the patterns(套路，模式） of writing the beginning, body and ending of a composition?（英语写作
3、有哪些套路可循？）,Beginning patterns (开头套路):,1. As we all know, _ 2.As far as I know, _ 3.Like many other people, I also like _ 4. Time is like a river. _ 5.Time flies so fast like an arrow,we will graduate soon. _ 6.As the proverb says, “a friend in need is a friend indeed.” _ 7.As the saying goes,“To open
4、 a book is always helpful. _ 8. It is obvious that ._ 9. It is needless to say._ 10.It is necessary/ important/ proper( for sb ) to do . _,Body patterns (中段套路):,I still/clearly remember +时间 one day,. once,. last week, . lastyear, . one day last year, . when I was 12 years old, . it was a sunny morni
5、ng, . when I was a little boy/ girl, . about two years ago, .提示：可以直接用过去的时间.,Ending patterns (尾段套路):,总结式： 1.All in all, I think_ 2.In a word, ._3. In short, ._ 4.In general, ._5. Generally speaking, ._抒发观点式： 1.In my opinion, ._ 2.In my view, ._ 3.From my points of view, ._ 注：若能在文章使用比喻句或格言谚语，则是很大亮点。,万
6、能开头结尾套路句型：（重要） No matter who we are,no matter where we are from,its of great importance for us to,思考3: Watch the vedio and think about what writing skills are the similarities to what we have learnt?,请看写作微视频记笔记并至少说出一个亮点,（请点击上面）,评分标准（部分）：（13-15分）涵盖了所有内容要点，运用了较多的语法结构和词汇，有少数错误（一个句子结构，时态，语态等方面的错误或一两个名词复
7、数，第三人称单数，拼写，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误），但是由于使用较复杂的表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力；有效运用了语句间的连接成分，使全文内容紧凑，内容充实，体现了活跃的思维和清晰的逻辑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。,思考4: Acording to the writing skills we can get high scores,so what are the score-getting standards and common problems（写作评分标准及常见问题）?,common problems:书面表达问题分析：1.将平时死记硬背的范文直接用到试卷中， 不能巧妙的转换成
8、符合题意的写作。2.有点考生在描写亲身经历的部分选取的 事例不够典型(not typical)，或在表达自己观点时缺乏语感，受母语负迁移的影响较严重。,思考5例文学习：（2015年山西省中考英语试题,希望在课堂上有足够的自主学习时间。学习好作文应具备哪些特质；什么是具体的明确的故事事例。）Dear Mr Li, My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups, which is good for my development, I think.(红色为好的
9、词汇短语） （绿色为定从，状从） I still remember an unforgettable experience in my maths class. Several days ago I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class, but they were too hard for me to work them out. So I had to ask my classmates for help. After a considerable discussion, we solved the probl
10、ems in our group. How excited I was!,Having such a great experience, I want to give two suggestions. Firstly, please dont teach us too much in class. We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class. Secondly, please provide us with some laptops if possible, so we can su
11、rf the Internet easily. No doubt, we need an open and free class, you see.（蓝色承接词使文章条理逻辑）（紫色呼应开头） Thats all. Thank you.Best wishes.Zhang Hua,试题解析 该作文以建议征集的形式出现，紧扣山西课改脉搏。围绕三个要点的段落划分合理范围，内容铺陈详略得当。文中呈现了较为丰富的词汇、短语和句式，充分体现了综合语言运用的能力。如：by myself / spent a long time working / working on /several days ago /
12、too hard for me to work them out / ask my classmates for help / learn by ourselves / work in groups / provide us with some laptops / if possible 以上词汇短语表意准确，使用规范；再来看句式方面的亮点，定语从句” My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups, which is good for my develo
13、pment, I think.”，,状语从句“ please provide us with some laptops if possible, so we can surf the Internet easily.”以及感叹句“How excited I was!”; 此外，对“an unforgettable experience”的时态把握准确，叙事流畅。“ FirstlySecondly”的出现，起到了突出重点，条理逻辑的作用，结尾“an open and free class”与开头呼应，更使文章融为一体，完全达到了预期的写作目的。,思考6:What factors should a
14、 good essay have?,（一篇好的写作应具备哪些要素？）,The factors of good essays:1 . senior,highlight words and phrases 高级亮点单词短语2. connection words3. Clauses(Attributive,Object,Subject clauses; Participle structures)4. Sayings 5.Exclamatory sentences,从句（定从，宾从，主从，分词结构等）,格言谚语,感叹句等等,承接词,常用衔接词：Meanwhile，Whats more,In addi
15、tion,First of all,Last but not least,Thanks toBecause of ,常用好词好句：1.Only in this way, + 倒装句。2.Not only ,but also3.I was deeply moved by 4.Just as a famous saying goes, “”.5.On the one hand, on the other hand6.There is no doubt that 7.enrich our knowledge/ life /mind8.Improve our ability/ grades/skill
16、s/life9.deepen our friendship/knowledge/memory10.Broaden our mind/horizon/life ,常用格言谚语：1.No pain, no gain.2.No cross,no crown.3.Knowledge is power.4.Where there is a will, there is a way.5.Failure is the mother of success. ,写作训练： 现如今，微信（Wechat）已经成为我们生活不可或缺的一部分，但使用微信对我们的学习与生活有利也有弊。针对这一话题，九年级的同学们展开了辩论
17、。 假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历说出2至3条理由来说服同学们（只须选择一方观点表达即可）。 要求：1.词数不少于80词。 2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名，校名。 Pros（正方）：Nowadays,Wechat has been a part of our life . I think its good and useful Cons（反方）：Nowadays,Wechat has been a part of our life . its bad and helpless ,思考7：游戏：英译汉。这是什么名言？你赞同哪种对学习
18、的态度？,两耳不闻窗外事，一心只读圣贤书。,风声雨声读书声，声声入耳；家事国事天下事，事事关心。,1.Pay no attention to what is happening outside the windows and bury oneself in the classics(名著）.,2.In my ears are the sounds of wind, rain and reading；To my concern（关心） are the affairs（事情） of households，country and the mass.,思考8:What are the society hot topics（关心社会时事热点）?,社会时事热点话题简介：1.摩拜单车;高科技，全铝车身，防爆轮胎，轴传动， 坚固耐用，五年高频使用无需人工维护。 Ofo共享单车：创立于2014年，标志性小黄车。2.朗读者：文化综艺类节目受追捧，主打文化情感的牌，
