1、Summary Writing Smortpones概要写作 Revision:概要写作解题步骤：概要写作解题步骤： Tips1:篇章阅读确定文体和篇章结构 Tips2:要点提取提取主要点和次要点 Tips3:语言改写词语替换和句子重组 Tips4:逻辑衔接篇章结构和逻辑衔接 Tips5:检查修改符合要求和语言得体 Human beings are smart.However, it seems that people are gradually losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important assis
2、tants in their lives, reported news website Record Japan on Oct.22.As we rely too much on technology instead of our brains, many people have lost three basic abilities, said the website. The first skill many people have lost is remembering phone numbers.Because phone numbers are stored in smartphone
3、 contacts, there is no need to dial a number or look at it again.And people may also have lost their sense of direction because navigation apps can guide people anywhere they want to go.These apps can even find shortest routes for you and avoid traffic jams.But the worst lost skills may be social on
4、es，meaning that some people are becoming socially inept(无能的)People often bury themselves in their smartphones.As we are too addicted to whats happening in the virtual world，some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes cant even tell whether a person is happy or not. Luckily, people still
5、 have a chance to get these abilities back.You should try to keep your parents number in mind for emergencies.You should also pay more attention to street signs and stores, which will help you to draw a mind map and prevent you from getting lost.And the easiest solution to social skill loss is to ta
6、ke a break from electronic devices because we are social creatures.We need devicefree time. Read for the topic, structure and writing style. topic:(phenomenon) smartphones affect peoples abilities reasons solutions ExpositionExposition Human beings are smart.However, it seems that people are gradual
7、ly losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important assistants in their lives, reported news website Record Japan on Oct.22.As we rely too much on technology instead of our brains, many people have lost three basic abilities, said the website. Get the main points: para.1 Q1:Find
8、out the topic sentence. Q2: Whats the function of the last sentence. Tips2:关注信号词(signal words): but, however, sadly, in fact, so, as a result. Tips3:transitional sentence过渡句，承上启下 However, it seems that people are gradually losing their smartness as smartphones become more and more important.+many pe
9、ople have lost three basic abilities. Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.1 With smartphones becoming increasingly important in peoples lives, human beings are gradually losing three basic abilities. Tips4:语言改写：语言改写：改变句式（运用非谓语动词改变句式（运用非谓语动词或或with 结构结构） The first skill many people have lost is r
10、emembering phone numbers.Because phone numbers are stored in smartphone contacts, there is no need to dial a number or look at it again.And people may also have lost their sense of direction because navigation apps can guide people anywhere they want to go.These apps can even find shortest routes fo
11、r you and avoid traffic jams.But the worst lost skills may be social ones，meaning that some people are becoming socially inept(无能的)People often bury themselves in their smartphones.As we are too addicted to whats happening in the virtual world，some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes
12、 cant even tell whether a person is happy or not. Get the main points: para.2 Q1:Find out 3 basic abilities, pay attention to the conjunction words. Q2: Whats the function of the last sentence. Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2 three basic three basic abilitiesabilities remembering phone nu
13、mbers lost their sense of direction becoming socially inept The abilities include remembering phone numbers, the sense of directions and the social skills. Tips5:语言改写：语言改写：同义替换同义替换 改变词性改变词性 运用并列结构运用并列结构 Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2 Lacking face- to- face communication results in the lo
14、ss of important social skills. As we are too addicted to whats happening in the virtual world， some of us have lost conversational skills and sometimes cant even tell whether a person is happy or not. Tips5:语言改写：语言改写：压缩长句压缩长句 笼统代替具体笼统代替具体 改变主语改变主语 Luckily, people still have a chance to get these abi
15、lities back.You should try to keep your parents number in mind for emergencies.You should also pay more attention to street signs and stores, which will help you to draw a mind map and prevent you from getting lost.And the easiest solution to social skill loss is to take a break from electronic devi
16、ces because we are social creatures.We need devicefree time. Get the main points: para.3 Q1:Find out the topic sentence. Q2: Could you find out more detailed information to support it . Luckily, people still have a chance to get these abilities back. Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.4 keep y
17、our parents number in mind pay more attention to street signs take a break from electronic devices Luckily, people can regain these abilities with some effective solutions like keeping a certain distance from electronic devices. Tips6:语言改写：语言改写：同义替换；同义替换；笼统代替具体笼统代替具体 档次描述 第五挡（21- 25） l理解准确，涵盖全部要点 l能
18、准确适用相应语法结构和词汇 l有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 l完全使用自己的语言 第四挡（16- 20） l理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点 l所使用的语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达 l比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑 l有个别整句抄自原文 第三挡（11- 15） l理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点 l所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有错误，但不影响意义表达 l应用简单的词句间连接成分，使上下文内容连贯 l出现两句以上整句抄自原文 第二挡（6- 10） l理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点 l有些语法结构和词汇方面错误，影响了意义表达 l较少使用语句间
19、的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性 l出现两句以上整句抄自原文 第一挡（1-5） l没有理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符 l有较多语法结构和词汇方面错误，严重影响了意义表达 Present your own version and score it With smartphones becoming increasingly important in peoples lives, human beings are gradually losing three basic abilities (要点1). The abilities include remembering phone numbe
20、rs, the sense of directions and the social skills.(要点2) A research on students confirms that lacking face- to-face communication results in the loss of important social skills.(要点3) Luckily, people can regain these abilities with some effective solutions like keeping a certain distance from electron
21、ic devices.(要点4) Yoke the points to complete a summary: Tips7:逻辑衔接篇章结构和逻辑衔接 Tips8:检查修改符合要求和语言得体 Summary:概要写作解题步骤：概要写作解题步骤： Tips1:篇章阅读确定文体和篇章结构 Tips2:要点提取提取主要点和次要点 Tips3:语言改写词语替换和句子重组 Tips4:逻辑衔接篇章结构和逻辑衔接 Tips5:检查修改符合要求和语言得体 主要点：关注主题句、信号词句和过渡句；主要点：关注主题句、信号词句和过渡句； 次要点：关注连接词，并列结构次要点：关注连接词，并列结构 1.同义替换法：近义词、反义词、词性转换等同义替换法：近义词、反义词、词性转换等 2.句式转换法：改变主语、运用非谓语动词、句式转换法：改变主语、运用非谓语动词、with结构结构 3.压缩长句法：笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等。压缩长句法：笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等。 概要写作练习卷 Homework:
