1、Learn to write from the passage,人教2011课标版 八年级,Brainstorming,Friends,Appearance,Personality,Hobbies,thin lips,thick lips,big nose,eye,round face,long face,fat,thin heavy,slim,plump,tall,short,of medium height,ot midium build，long hair,short hair,curly hair,funny,able,active,friendly,careful,clever,cu
2、te,brave,honest,dishonest,outgoing,easy-going,forgetful,happy,hard-working,kind,kindhearted,strict ,selfless,selfish，,like, love,enjoy,be fond of,be good at,be interested in用上面的动词说出你喜欢的句子,My best friend,I dont really care if my friends are the same as or different. My favorite saying is,“A true frie
3、nd reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”My best friend Carol is really beautiful.She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes. She is really kind and funny.In fact,shes funnier than anyone I know.She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she makes jokes in class and gets into
4、 trouble.And I still remeber I broke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen. After class,Carol and I like to go to the movies and we like to talk about our favorite actors,singers.In a word, I think good friends should not
5、 only help each other but also share happiness and sadness together.,Questions,What is the passage about? The passage is about friends.Please divide the whole passage into three parts.How to introduce your friend?,导入主题,My best friend,I dont really care if my friends are the same as or different. My
6、favorite saying is,“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.” My best friend Carol is really beautiful.She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes. She is really kind and funny.In fact,shes funnier than anyone I know.She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she ma
7、kes jokes in class and gets into trouble.And I still remeber I broke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen. After class,Carol and I like to go to the movies and we like to talk about our favorite actors,singers. In a word
8、, I think good friends should not only help each other but also share happiness and sadness together.,I dont really care if my friends are the same as or different. My favorite saying is,“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”,In a word, I think good friends should not only hel
9、p each other but also share happiness and sadness together.,首段点明交友观点,尾段总结提升,语篇分析,1st part: introduce who the friend is,Sentence 1,4th part: activities they do together,Sentence 8,Sentence 2-4,Sentence 5-7,2nd part: appearance,3rd part: personality,1. 框架结构 总-分-总，首段点明交友观点，尾段总结提升，中间段层次清 晰； 2. 学会句子间概括与解
10、释的关系； 3. 过渡词句的运用； 4. 文采好句,学海拾贝,来自阅读文章的写作领悟,找出文中句子间概括与解释的关系的句子,1. Carol is really beautiful.-She has big eyes, a straight nose and blond hair.She has brown eyes. 2. She is really kind and funny.-She likes to tell jokes.Sometimes she makes jokes in class and gets into trouble.And I still remeber I bro
11、ke my arm last year but she made me laugh and feel better.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen.,举一反三,积累经典句和谚语,锦上添花,1. My mother told me a good friend is like a mirror. 2. I think friends are like books-you dont need a lot of them as long as theyre good. 3. Its not necessary
12、to be the same. 4. My best friend Larry is quite different from me. 5. However, Larry often helps to bring out the best in me.,行文连贯自助餐,1.表因果 so,for,because,therefore;2.并列型 as well as,and,also;3.比较型 as.as,than;4.举例型 for example,such as,and so on;5.归纳型 in a word,in the end, at last,finally;6.转折型 howev
13、er,but,though,although;,熟能生巧,学以致用,请以 My best friend 为题写一篇文章，从朋友的外貌、性格、爱好等方面描写朋友，同时写出交友观点。 要求： a. 文章结构清晰，语言流畅： b. 书写美观、大方； c. 词数要求：80-100；,1. 主要内容 ？2. 时态？人称?3. 首段？尾段？ 4. 第二段中，层次？ 5. 2-3个好句式,Groupwork,作文分析,关于朋友,一般现在时、第三人称、第一人称,用你积累的经典句和谚语来完成首段和尾段,Friends,Appearance,Personality,Hobbies,hair, face,funny,sports，food,Seek common ground while reserving differences.,求同存异,Thanks for listening!,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
